#5 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 20 - PART 23 ! Go #6 ! - Page 63

wonderfull n amazing...

Hey sweets... 😳
Im here to say tht really dont know when im going to unres my post here...
Cuz im really busy these days... So give me sometime
And thnks for the dedication 🤗

nice update

Originally posted by: aYASHIKA

Am I first ?????😲
Yipeee 🥳

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Originally posted by: Niya_789

First of all thank you for dedicating this to us🤗

Awww itna akward ness

Mujhe nahi pasand yeh

Zoya is so depressed😭

Even Asad is depressed😭

Zoya aisi achi nahi lagti😭

Dilshaad is a very good mother😊

Zoya needed a mother at this moment😊

Asad ko laga vo Najma hai and he did BHHOOO 🤣

Bt vo Zoya thi😆

Aww she got scared

All coz of Bhaiseena😡

Late night ice-cream😛

Zoya is again scared to see ppl

Kya idea diya Asad ne keep staring at him

*Hayee* mujhe bhi koi aisa bolo

Zoya kept staring Asad

Chocolate ice-cream😳

Asad ko chocolate nahi pasand ??😲

Strawberry Ice-cream it tastes like Medicine🤢

Typical Asad🤢

He cares so much for her😳

Zoya ne Asad ka ice-cream gira diya 🤣

Becahre Asad ka shoe Tsk tsk tsk...😆😆

Awww chooo sweet of Zoya ussne apni ice-cream share ki Asad ke saath😳

I love sitting on the bonnet of Cars😆

Finally thy came out of tht Akward zone😆

Once again thank you for dedicating it to us 🤗

P.s : You going to make us cry more😭

I had to after all u did to make me write ! 😆 🤗

Dont worry kisi ko bhi yeh awkwardness nahi pasand ! 😕 😆

Maine bubbly Zoya ko kya se kya bana diya ? 😆

Hahaha yeah Asad is quite mischievous when it comes to Najma ! 😆

Aisa kare toh kisi ko bhi darr na lage lekin kisi aur dunya mein goom jaaye ! ❤️

I hate strawberry ice cream but well Asad remains Mr. Boring Ahmed Khan ! 😆

They didnt really came out of that awkwardness but lets say that they got a little more comfortable with each other ! 😉

I wouldnt be a good girl if i dont make u cry ! 😆 by the way, how r u now ? 🤗

Thank you so much both of u !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! 😳

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

i want the page 1

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<font size="2">oh my god oh my god oh my god u updated oh my god</font>

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<font size="2">upar se credits mein mer naam</font>

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<font size="2">I understand the reason behind such a painful silence and awkwardness between the two..unfortunately kisi ko bhi pasand nahi hoga..but this was bound to happen..</font>

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<font size="2">Everyone is so badly depressed😭in logo ka dard dekha nahi jata..😭
Zoya n Dilu scene.. perfectiya👍🏼</font>

<font size="2">Glad to see Asad n Najma's bond soo cute ❤️

Awh Asad took her for icecream..😛</font>

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<font size="2">but the make up scene was very nicely written Proud of u!!</font>

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Cute emos as always ! 😆

Haan ! AFTER all who was the one who emotionally blackmailed me into writing the chapter ! 😆

My poor babies ! I'm cruel ! 😭 both r being awkward because of that awkwardness !

Awww Thank you !! I'm honoured ! 😎 😆

Erm i dont know kab ayega ! Maine kuch likha hi nahi ! 😕 chalo lets see ! 😉

Originally posted by: p_s05

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Unreserved!

Liked the pace at which you had Zoe's trauma dealt with. She
has an amazing support system.

I loved that ice-cream concept [you really introduce
lovely ideas to the narrative]. The awkwardness and intricate emotions were endearing.

<font color="#6600ff">"Since her hands were with the ice-creams, he opened the shawl himself and wrapped it around her shoulders, Zoya felt touched by his care, she had forgotten about his protectiveness."
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<font color="#6600ff">"...he hesitantly went towards Zoya and placed his hands on her hips, she was startled by his touch, but even more when he lifted her up and made her sit on the bonnet of the SUV."</font>

<font color="#6600ff">"...so she just pushed the cone in his mouth, smudging some all around his mouth."</font>

This was really very beautiful, these little skillfully added moments contribute to the beauty of the chapter.

<font color="#6600ff">"Delicious chocolate ice-cream..." 😛</font>

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Awww Thank you so much Prashni !! 🤗 i'm honoured !! ☺️

Hahaha i try to make it as interesting as possible !! 😉 and then if my readers like it, what do i need more ? 😳 yeah talking an being in each other's company after so long had given an awkwardness ! 😕

Awww i'm so glad u liked it !! 😳 ❤️

Thank you so much ! 🤗 it has already started and now on my free time, all i do is sleep ! 😆

Lots of love to u !! 🤗 ❤️

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

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Awesome update.
Dilshad decided to talk to zoya before she gone into depression. She needs mother & dilshad played her role. She understood & tried to do what dilshad said. Asad was happy to see zoya outside her room but there was an awkwardness between them which were noticed by dilshad, najma & Daniel. Asad saw someone in kitchen & thought it was najma & he boomed. She was zoya & she was scared. Asad hold her & told her it was him & she hugged him. Ice cream parlour scene was good. Sharing ice cream, sitting on bonnut was wonderful. Both said good night to each other. Hope zoya will come out her grieve soon. So one more twist at the end, waiting for that.
Continue when u will free as u will be busy in studies. Thanks for pm

Thanks a lot Asif ! I'm glad you liked it !! 😳

Originally posted by: -ABI-

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well Its simply a Awsome Update
Zoya comming out of her Shell
Icecream&Bhooo scene r cute
AsYa comming closer
JUST WOU

by-the-way,dear litl sisy have I told u how amazing writter u r?
I am proud to be ur brother
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Hahaha Thank you so much Bhai !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it and enjoyed it so much ! 😳

Ermm... Let me think... 😉 u might have ! 😆 and i'll Thank you again for that ! ❤️ then i'm glad to make my bhai proud ! 😃

Originally posted by: SUCHARITA2014

nice updt bano plz do cont

THANKs Sucharita ! 😳