#5 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 20 - PART 23 ! Go #6 !

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#611

It was a beautiful update

I loved it

PLs update soon

Thanks for pm

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#612

Amazing update ,,

soo finally they are moving on :D

I loved the ice cream moment ,,

I don't like strawberry but Asad mil haye to strawberry bhi chalega LoL

Hope to see more AsYalicious moments soon !!

Will be waiting for ur PM (:

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#613

Nice update

So zoya is totally depressed she don't talk eat move

She is just locked in her room even saviour don't know what to do.

Time passes an all I losing hope silshad talked to her and made her understand

She some out and asad is happy to see her

Oh awkwardness between saviour and angel no how it that possible

The on thing that had them together was the baby no baby it is weird

She is learning again and slowly coming about

Oh she is having warm feelings don't know what it means

Oh he scared her but it made her end up in his arms

So he took her for ice cream

Don't look at people look at me and she did and went down memory lane

So she lose his cone as he lifted her on the car

And she forced him to have hers

Love chocolate ice cream now Mr. OCD haha

Continue

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#614

superb part
awsm one
luvd it
cont asap
thanx for the pm
t.c

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#615

Superb part!!!
AsYa are no more awkward!!!
Zoya coming out of shell!!
Keep pming me , i won't be active bcoz of exams

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Gourav

@Shubh007

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#616

Amazing + Cute Update...👍🏼

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene From Starting To Ending Is Mind-Blowing...👏

Update Next Part Soon...😃

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#617

i want the page 1

oh my god oh my god oh my god u updated oh my god

upar se credits mein mer naam

I understand the reason behind such a painful silence and awkwardness between the two.. unfortunately kisi ko bhi pasand nahi hoga.. but this was bound to happen..

Everyone is so badly depressed 😭 in logo ka dard dekha nahi jata.. 😭
Zoya n Dilu scene.. perfectiya 👍🏼

Glad to see Asad n Najma's bond soo cute ❤️

Awh Asad took her for icecream.. 😛

but the make up scene was very nicely written Proud of u!!

Awaiting for the next chapter

< U

< Me

jaldi update

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ssrdj

@ssrdj

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#618

Lovely update

Dilshad zoya covo was too good.

Glad sad phase is over

Looking forward

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ak020203

@ak020203

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#619

Lovely update

Dilshad words are beautiful. .

Asad and zoya ice cream venture is so cute

Thanks for updating

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#620

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

Yeah Danial is family now ! 😳
It was a little obvious, actually i tried to make it obvious that Zoya would blame Asad because after all he was her Savior, so he was supposed to svae the baby but he could not
Yeah she was in shock, after all she had lost her baby ! 🥺
Thank you so much Jas !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️
Actually since Zoya was physically abused by Haseena, she was weak and had itenal abdominal injuries, they were just healing when Akram had slept with/raped her but when he did that heinous act with her, her injuries got even more fragile, they had started to heal when she had come to the mental asylum but then the fact that she was pregant and the baby had started to grow in her womb had made her een more fragile and then as th baby grew, her health deteriorated but then here she couldbt take it anymore and they had to 'remove' the baby (i'm not a doc ! 😆 )
Thanks again my darling Jas ! Mwah ! 🤗 ❤️

sorry missed replying this comnt😳

I know what u meant Zoya seems like she made Asad God that he will correct everything in her life.😆😉

After knowing this i feel like killing both Akram & Haseena i m really amazed how Asad must have controlled himself.😭

Love u 2 Bano darling🤗