ASYA SS : Together.... A Compromise No More Epilogue added 23/2/15 - Page 52

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aseelashah

oh choco its so cute update yaar

i love it

pls update soon

thanks for pm



Thanks Aseela 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie15

Ohh myyy..!! Dat was an awsum update...
d last was soo intense nd soo full of emotns..
beautifuuly written.. update soon..:)
Ty for d pm..:)



Thanks sweetie, glad you are enjoying the story 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cale

lovely update

so both of them realized about importance of marriage
when asad said sambhal lengi, it was so cute
Awww...zoya fell I'll...but asad is taking care of her
I guess confession is on the way...yipee😳
Update soon



Thank you Cale, yes they both know what the other feels 😊
Yes confession soon 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Amulya9

awesome update choco ..
there is a lot of growth in ASYA relationship..
loved d way he spoke with her in kitchen
awww..Zoe became sick
i loved asad last lines..
continue soon



Glad you are liking the progress Amulya. Oh yes his monologues are beautiful and I love writing them 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Nice update👏😊

Can I slap Asad?
Why can't he let her sleep on d couch? She is sleeping there 4m 2 months while working worse than a free maid all day. Asad is not even teln anyone dat she sleeps on d couch n even stopped 4m calling Najma to hide dis.
In d show, KV had servants n they were mentioned. Its not necessary to show them. Dilshad n Najma did only cooking n laying d table. They were not cleaning d whole house.
Asad is worse than Haseena. Why can't he keep servants in such a big mansion? No one works so much in a big house. Haseena had maids in her house n they were not shown. Asad needs to show humanity instead of being selfish of getting a wife like he wanted. He is clearly torturing her for more than 2 months.
I hope Zoya stop being a robot n comes to her old self.Why she needs to plz everyone who don't care for her? Can't Asad tell her to sleep on d bed or take turns for sleeping on d bed? Can't he tell her to dress like before n be her old self? In SM n QM no family members worked like dat n even in KV.
Hope Zoya be independent n do job separately on her own.Can't see her like dis. Asad is really a MCP. Wat if someone treats his sisters like dis by making her work all day n letting her sleep on d couch? I even hate his OCD n Zoya getn nuts by bcumn like him.
Sorry, I said too much but I hope Asad n dis robotic Zoya gets some brains n act normal


Thanks for reading Juhi 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry


Thanks for reading Juhi 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
Reserved!


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Unreserved!


The pace of the last two updates have been highly enjoyable. Zoe's fluctuating emotions were endearing, the character growth Asad has undergone is very charming. The last scene was written beautifully, loved Asad's presence of mind.


"Asad walked upto her and sat on the floor near her head. He lovingly caressed her hair and bent forward keeping his head on her pillow. Asad could hear her soft snores.


He smiled sadly looking at her pale complexion and said "Please aap jaldi se theek ho jaaeye... Mujhe aapse kuch kehna hai... ab mein aur wait nahi kar sakta... Naa hi aapko karvana chahta hoon...mein jaanta hoon ki jitna beichain mein hoon aapko batane ke liye, utni beichain aap bhi hain... Bas aap theek ho jaaeye uske baad mein ek bhi pal intezaar nahi karoonga. I... I promise""


The subtle intensity of this scene was captivating.


Edited by p_s05 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb updt
Loved it Choco di
it had everything which i was thinking
Asad's support these days were giving confidence 2 Zoya
Dillu went away & Zoya has 2 manage house alone
D physical & emotional stress made Zoya ill
I wished Zoya stop crying & that she did so i m happy
I won't mind if d confession gets a little late still
there emotional support & care 4 each other is what i liked d most
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Posted: 11 years ago
Unreserved @: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/113092320


^^^

This was pointless, didn't realize it was on the same page.
Edited by p_s05 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderfull n amazing...
luv it...
fabulous...
beautifully written...
asad cares so much for zoya n he wants to tell zoya about his feeling...
hope zoya gets well soon...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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