ASYA SS : Together.... A Compromise No More Epilogue added 23/2/15 - Page 51

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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update
Finally Asad... finally. .great

Thanks for updating
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Posted: 11 years ago
I read the first two chapters and liked it but somehow missed the other two. Loved to read them together.
Hope atleast now Asad will be able to express his love to Zoya and Zoya reciprocates his feelings.

Waiting for the next.


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Posted: 11 years ago
Huh !!!!!!!!
Sachi mein bolega !!!!!!!
Woh.. Actually k bina ...!?
Naaahhh :-\ :-P haha

Awe.. Updt was gud... Loved it...
Loved the changes in asad... Towards zoya...
Chalo kuch tho progress hua :-)

Dillu koabhi bejhna tha !!! Dekhna bechari zoya k halat...

Gala saat karne k matlab ye bhi hosakta hai !!!! Rolf...
Hahaha loved the prt..

Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

Res 😳
Unres i just woke up after my long nap only to come and ask for an update which i got as soon as i came on the thread ! and on top of that i'm first !! 🥳

That was a superb update !! loved the way they progressed and that Zoya is now assured that it s not a nakli nikkah 😳
The scene where Asad tells her that she can handle the house was cute 😆
But the best part was Asad's clearing of throat ! 😆 such a Jahanpanah !! 😆
Then him going to the kitchen as an excuse to get to see her 😉
Awww poor Zoya she fell ill ! loved the way he cared when talking to the doc ! 😳
And finally Mr. EC will confess his feelings ! 👏 😆
Looking forward to the confession ! 😉

And here HE comes ! ☺️

One of my favourite gif of him !! ❤️

PS : i'm sorry for the short comment, i'm having a ton of homework to catch up on !


Hay Choti Bajijaan, meri morning itni good karadi. Mwah thank you. I love this gig too. His look is so intense. Uff why is he so hot?

OK and don't say sorry just tell me you have studies n I will understand 😊

Am so happy you liked the update as a whole. I liked updating this one too.

His throat clearing scene is my favorite in this one 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: potternerd

Res

Unres

As usual beautifully written

Poor zoya...she's more emotionally stressed than physically

Hopefully Asad will relieve her of her emotional turmoil by his confession !!!

It took a high fever for Mr Asad Ahmed Khan to brace himself to confess 😆

The scene where Asad clears his throat and najma zoya immediately get up was epic 🤣

Loved the update 😊



Thanks Kinjal. Am glad you liked the update.


Lol yeah a fever pushes him to confess... And the throat clearing scene 😆 I laughed writing that.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Heya Choco,

The update was Awesome. I totally loved it & for once didn't cry reading it. I am loving the pace with which you've taken their relationship ahead.
Aww my heart warmed seeing Asad show his approval & trust in Zoya at the dining table. This is a big change I must say. Because earlier whenever Dilshad asked him something, he used to remain mum or answer with wrong words. Great progress. I'm so proud of you Mr. Khan.
I can understand Zoe's hesitation in taking all the responsibility single handedly. It definitely is a big task to look after the house & even more so if your husband is an OCD. But I know she can handle anything, she just needs to put her mind & will to it. Aur ab to us ke Mr. Khan bol dia hai to phir to kar hi sakti hai.
My fav scene.. Mr. Khan's throat clearing. Seriously mujhe bhi nahin pata tha us ke ke itne meaning ho sakte hain. Dono aik dum on alert ho gayi Jahanpanah ki respect mein. Choco, ye a tight big hug for you 🤗 for iving me such a sweet update. I loved it how Asad tried to cheer them up. Pehle to Mr. Khan wo aur actually ke baad bus apna collar theek karte they but now he asked them to smile. I know he must be happy, he should be, after all its the first time she smiled for him & because of him. For Asad ❤️
Oh poor thing got stressed. I think her falling sick is more due to the mental & emotional stress she's enduring then the few days physical one. She's constantly thinking about Asad & their relationship & now that she has realized that this nikah means something to Asad too, she would be expecting a confession, if not of love at least of acceptance from his side.
My baby.. don't be sad. She'll be up & about soon. You just look after her & DON'T forget your promise to her.
Love lots..



Hey Nims, am glad I didn't make you cry this time, I didn't cry writing it either 😆. Yaar mein khud hi feel a lump in my throat while writing updates 😳


Good to see you are liking every bit of what I am writing. Hope the next updates make you happy too. Big tight huggie for you too Nims 🤗 and one sloppy kiss too MWAH ❤️ 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Mr Khan 😡

Was he waiting for her to fall sick to confess ?? 😡

Emotionally Challenged Insaan 😡

Poor Zoya shez unwell too 😭

Now atleast do some seva of hers Mr Emotionally Challenged Insaan 😡



Aww, i know Zoe, poor her, fell ill . Oh he will be looking after her. Don't worry 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nilusoni

awesome part

excited for next part
plz pm me for next part
continue soon



Thanks Nilu Di. Am happy you liked it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

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unres

well di update was simply Awsome
&
I love it.

So,Mr.Emotionally Challanged Ahmed Khan is gonna confess
really hope he won't back out



Thanks Lil Bro am glad you liked it. Yes he will confess soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bittersweet1126

Sigh!! 😳

Every chapter of yours is magical and I find myself re-reading lines for how beautifully they've been written. Can't wait for the next update!



Thank you sweetheart, that is a huge compliment. Am honored. Tha k you once again n I hope you like the rest of this story too

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