ASYA SS : Together.... A Compromise No More Epilogue added 23/2/15

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sabrinsz91

@sabrinsz91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#351

Beautiful update
Loved it
Glad that Asad is trying

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#352

I'm so happy with the progress between Asad and Zoya's relationship. Finally things are shaping up slowly and steadily.
Zoya's happiness when Asad complimented her laughter was extremely cute. The way she ran up to Dilshad and squealed was adorable.
So Mr. Khan is making a bed for his wife.. good start! ;)
Brilliant update Berry! <3
Continue sooner.

~ Mrina

Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago

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Annie_AsYa

@Annie_AsYa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#353

Well... You should know that I am always late when it comes to commenting on stories 😆

I read them but sometimes don't comment immediately 😔

Well, I do apologise for that :)

Anyways.. back to the story 😃

Wonderful piece 👏

I loved itt...The way Asad made Zoya happy by just mentioning those few words to her ... I think it made my night 😆

I always did and will adore Asad and Zoya just the way they are 😳

I love the fact that you are portraying Asad just the way he was in the show and also you are doing the same with Zoya ... Great Job ! 👍🏼

Really enjoyed this piece.. 😃

Asad set up the couch for Zoya... AWWW how romantic !!! 😳 Appreciate the fact that Asad is trying his level best 😃 Good Luck Asad 😃

I will just like to add that I would like it if you add more dialogues in between Asad and Zoya 😊

Anyways... this was amazing 👏

Please do PM me the next update ... and I will most definitely post a comment when I do come online...

Love

~Anni aka Mishti&Mrina's Bae ❤️

Edited by Annie_AsYa - 11 years ago

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potternerd

@potternerd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#354

Wow Choco lovely note and lovely update 👏

I like how you are taking things slow...real lagta hai 👍🏼

Hahahah asad gap finally mustered up some courage to compliment her 😆 Superb

Love how zoya was so happy about it

Aww he made her bed too 😳

Lol I can totally imagine asad addressing zoya as ji..who..clearing throat 😆

Too good ⭐️

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KSGsmitten

@KSGsmitten

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Posted: 11 years ago

#355

Lovely update 😊
At least some progress in their relationship.
Asad complimenting Zoya on her laugh was really cute.
Zoya is trying her best to become an ideal daughter in law 😊
Mr. Khan is making the bed for his wife 😳
Hope to see more progress in the next chapter ... Update soon 😊

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keyahira

@keyahira

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Posted: 11 years ago

#356

YAAAS
Asad Miya man up, suit up, tell yo woman u love her u sissy

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#357

ress

unres

so Asad ne abhi bhi confess nahi kiya

chalo i know usse apni biwi ko bhi confess karte dar lagta hoga🤣

improvement bhi hui thodi😊

he complimented her smile & Zoya became extra happy😃

loved her reactions when she ran 2 DIllu 2 tell her this😆

that scene was very nice😉

than Asad made her bed how i wish he would have asked her 2 share d bed

i mean dono ke same bed share karne main kya problem hai😕

agreed he didn't confessed but Zoya koi 17th century wali thodi hai jo is baat ko bahot bada samjhegi yah kuch galat samjhegi🤔😕

Loved d updt❤️

it was wonderful👏

PS- i read this after so much struggle, 1 or d other thing keeps coming up when i start 2 read😆

Edited by jas91 - 11 years ago

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Prazeena Bhattarai

@Aneezarp27

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Posted: 11 years ago

#358

Read all the parts in a go...
Beautiful SS...
I'm loving the pace at which they are moving ahead.
Little by Little..
And Finally ! A little progress in their relationship !
Lovely !

Update soon 😊

- Anee

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

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Posted: 11 years ago

#359

Nice update

But Zoya is acting too much regressive

Why she has changed herself so much like dressing like Tanveer, working like a maid on a big house, not going to job n above all sleeping on d couch?

No one is so much cleanliness freak like Asad n he is smiling wen Zoya is acting like him as if he is happy to find a slave not wife. He is only happy cuz he got wat he wants n he is successful in making Zoya his type of wife. Asad is doing cruelty on her. He made a normal girl into a slave. How can Zoya love such a person? I hope she comes to her old self n tell Asad how selfish he is.

Can't Asad tell her to be her old self instead of being a robot? His mouth never stopped while insulting but he can't say these things n confessing to her. He is actually emotionally torturing her.

I am sorry but I am not liking dis Zoya who is just acting like a free maid

How come he is letn her cry n not teln her to bcum like her old self?

Instead of arranging her bedding on couch can't he do it on bed? He sleeps like a king on d bed while even teln her dat she sleeps on d couch.

Zoya is not Zoya anymore but she has bcum a dlave dat Asad wanted her in his wife

Wat if someone treats his sister like dis?

I am not liking both Asad n Zoya

Zoya sud come to her old self. Why she sud change herself in ridiculous ways? Where is d Zoya who wud never change for anyone? Then why she is becumn wat she is not?

Can't Asad keep servants? He is behaving just like Haseena by making her work like a maid in such a big house. Bloody MCP who is not even suggesting her to luk for job.

Luks like Asad only married Zoya gor his ammi

Hope u put sense into Asad n Zoya

Dilshad just got poor Zoya forcibly married to her selfish son for ger selfish reasons n now not helping them

I can't imagine Zoya living like a slave for a month n Asad enjoying it

Has Zoya lost her self-respect to change into some other girl?

Plz don't show like did till d end dat Zoya vl like dis forever

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 11 years ago