Asya ff: Its You Forever! updated P.4|pg.40 - Page 13

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice CS
Cute kids, nice selection
Waiting for an update soon
Thanks

Originally posted by: Linsie

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

Cuteness ka overload!!

Originally posted by: pinky06

Hi my dear doll...how R U?...Its been sooo longgg..hooe U R fine..and hopefully ur exams went good...aur ye kya U have become red from green...congo cutie pie...

coming to the cs..it was really sweet n cute just like U my doll..

Sowwie for late reply..have been busy..

Loads of luuv

sara

Originally posted by: ashlesha2

milenge milenge

pyaar ki takat

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

update soon

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hello everyone!! how are you all?? finally updating after a month and that too the longest I ever wrote, 3100+ words!! well this update would be the most boring ever, beacuase I really don't have any idea how to showcase their childhood as I have only decided the further story but still thoda bahut done, and written the important part that is needed in this update

also this update goes to our birthday girl, Akasya, yani my Aku di!! Happy Birthday Didu... and also our latest rocker Pinky06 aka pinkdu di urf saru di!! Wish both of them!!-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------[Just a try, banner by me!! the actual banner was good but unfortunately because of confusion of the title, isliye!! I hope its not that bad]

Chapter 1!!

Lady 1 : dekho to zeenat, kese khel rahe h, dekhne m hi pata chal raha h ki thak gaye , lekin see so adamant

Zeenat : vahi to dilshad, puri tarah se magan [ intrigue] h apne khel m!

Dilshad : pata nahi kab manege , bacho chalo dekho der hogayi h!! ...while shouting

Zeenat : zoya , humera!! Chalo beta!

A girl round about 6 years old came running while giggling and panting.

Girl : ammi!! Thodi der ol khelne dona!!

Zeenat : zoya!! Nahi bache , late ho raha h, kal ake khel lena!!

Humera : ammi! Pal kal to holdiy h na??

Zoya : holiday bhudhu holdiy nahi!!

Humera : ha ammi vahi... to hum log khel shakte h na pleashe nahi to hum sab asad bhai k ghar ja shakte h na!!

Another boy again about 6 year old came running.

Boy : ha aami hum zoya aur cutie pie ko ghar le ja sakte h na!!

Dilshad : ayaan! Acha thik h dekhte h!!!

Another boy of 8 years old came running to dilshad squeeling

Asad : yes ammi!! Yani ab hum sab ghar jaenge, ruhi [ reffering to zoya ]and humzi bhi??

Zeenat and dilshad shook their heads and chuckled : thik h hum sab jaenge , ab khush?

Everyone squeeled and enjoyed while a small girl finally questioned: ye kyaa hol aha h??

Everyonw giggled at her cute broken sentence

Asad picked her up : kuch nahi tamatar , hum sab abhi ghar jake masti karenege!!

Everyone was eating and enjoying their ice creams when their respective fathers returned. All the children squeeled and went to hug their fathers.

Zoya was the last one to finish her ice cream so she kept the bowl without wasting time to wipe her face. She ran to her father but asad came in between.

Zoya : ashu ap bich m kyu khade ho? Mujhe abu ke pas jana h!!

Asad : par tumhare face p ye creamy moustache bani h, first wipe that up!

Zoya : oho vo to badme saf kar sakte h, ap to pure moment ki band baja dete ho!!

Asad didn't pay heed and cleaned the moustache with the handkerchief. Everyone laughed on these kids.

Zoya : ap kabhi bhi mentally nahi thik hoge na! esi harkate mental hi karte h!!

Asad : zo!! Nahi esi harkate intelligent log karte h! aur vese bhi tu hena mujhe sudharne k liye!!

Zoya smiled and then ran to her father , who picked her up and hugged her. She planted a sloppy kiss on her fathers cheecks and got down and ran to sit on the sofa watching her favourite cartoons on television. Both the ladies went to their husband and hugged them asking how was your day , while husband gave a the answers needed.

Dilshad : anwar ! rashid! Ap dono jaldi se fresh hojaiye aur phir hum khana laga dete h!

Zeenat : are nahi nahi dilshad vese bhi bahhut der hogayi h, hum chalte h! kabhi aur rakhenge!

Rashid : are ese kese? Dinner karne m kya problem h vese bhi kal chutti h , m to kehta hu aplog yahi ruk jaiye aj aram se bate karenge.

Dilshad : ha ye idea acha h, aplog yahi ruk jaiye!

Zeenat: par kese vo..

Anwar : its okay zeenat , if they r insisting to theek h na vese bhi kitna time hogaya h ek sath!!

They were interrupted by loud shoutings. They turned around and saw humera and ayaan fighting while zoya and asad trying to stop and najma giggling.

Ayaan : dekh tu itni sweet h to tu itna ladti kyu h humzz!

Humi : m nahi lalti , tum lalte ho! Tumne shtart kiya tha!! Ladaku lallu kahi k!

While everyone opened their mouth in shock that how can a 4 year old girl say this. Zeenat went to humera and scolded her

Zeenat: humera ye kese bol rahi ho? Who taught you this?

While humera began to cry hear her mother scolding. Zoya and asad went to console her

Zoya : humi , ro kyu rahi h, mat rro plz!!

Asad : ha humi hojata h , vese nickname bahut sweet tha!! Aur exactly ayaan k liye tha!

Zeenat : nahi asad, no shona, usne galti ki h to ki h!

Dilshad : offo zeenat rehne do , bachi h! aur vese bhi sahi naam diya h ayaan ko , vo he hi esa!! Nahi humi nahi rote!

Zeenat : par dilshad!!

Rashid : kya hogaya isme!! Bqche h ladte h, boldiya thik h no big issue!! humera ayaan chalo shake hands

Next day :

All were done with the breakfast and were sitting chatting while the children were studying in their room. Everyone totally involved in their books. After an hour they together closed their books and sighed heavily!!

Zoya : padna nahi hogaya jese duniya bhar ka saman uthana hogaya, sachem hum bache kitna torture hote h!

Ayan : bilkul sahi kaha zoya!! Bechare hum! Humera : sach me!!

Asad : offo kitne melodramatic h sab!!

Asad : niche utro!! Plz niche utro!! Bache nahi ho tumsab , now u ppl sre grown ups yaar!!

Zoya : hello mr.!! plz!! Okay!! Aap ese sadu ho iska matlab hum nahi!!

It has been 8 years! 8 years later, but they were still the same just like before!! Nothing mch changed, everything was same, the relations, the bondings, just they grew little more stronger.

Later while everyone fell down on the bed giggling while asad stood there rubbing his brows

Ayaan : bhai!! Holidays h na!! to phir? Masti karo!!

Asad : uff!! Abhi do din nahi hue dhang se exams khatam hue aur ye sab!

Ayaan : oho bhai , chalo sab phirse, but zoya tu mat nachna kyunki jab zoya nachti h to uske lambe baal ese lagte h jese koi chudail nach rahi ho!!

Humera : kya bola?? Tumne meri baji ko chudail bola, tum khud to ek mo. K bade bhooot ho [ mimicking like a ghost with her hands]

Asad : ha ayaan!! Khud k bal to jhadu h, shona k baal bahut ache h kuch mat bol samjha!

Ayaan : hehe kuch bhi!!

Zoya : par mujhe dar lag raha h, kal school h, and humare to marks milne wale h!! vese bhi zyada ache nahi gaye h exams!!

Humera : tension mat lo appi!! Sab theek hoga!! I hope so!!

Though she tried to put on a fake smile but she cant , everyone knew that she took too much stress and late night studies , but still she was scared and knew that she has too put more efforts for the next time.

Next day:

All the children came back from school, asad who came back early was sitting with his parents discussing something when he saw ayaan returning with some confusing expression. He saw him walking towards his room and went to him

Asad : kya hua ayaan miya?? Itne sad kyu ho?

Ayaan : bhaijaan! Isliye kyunki ek me ache n ek m bure marks aye h!! mere nahi zoya k! mere to dono m hi thik h!

Ayaann though was a full on enjoying boy but was serious when it came to study and everyone was. We wont say toppers but yes zoya and ayaan being of the same age were serious about the studies and quite helped each other. Ayaan who used to make studies lighter and enjoyed them but zoya enjoyed but being too serious , specially maths and science.

Asad : kyu?

Ayaan : bhai ap to jante ho na!! zoya is good in studies but maths m uske kam hogae though in other subjects specially sst n english , she topped again, god know use akbar birbal m kya maza ati h? bt on a serious note, ek baar bat karke dekhlo, she is feeling too upset!!

Asad : fine!! M sham ko jjake dekhta hu!!

Later that evening:

Asad went to farooqui house but as he entered he can feel the environment tensed, he knew zoya has uplifted the whole house on her head. Then he saw zeenat working in the kitchen while humi was sitting and completing her homework.

Asad : mumani!! Salam!! Kese ho??

Zeenat : are asad!! Aao na!! khush raho!! Kaho kese ana hua?

Asad stood quiet which everyone knew the answer.

Zeenat : subah se ache se behave nahi kar rahi h, uske marks issbar down to hue h, par mene nahi chahti ki vo apni health bigaad le! Humne bahut koshish ki , ab ekbaar tum dekho , vese bhi tum se behtar vo kisise bat nahi samjhegi

Asad nodded and made his way towards her room . as he entered her room he knew where she will be. There she was sitting on her favourite maroon and white couch which directly opened to a small window which directly gave a view of the moon. The room was dark except the light that came from the window, so he switched on the small lamps.

Asad whispered : zoya!

She seemed unaffected , she wasnt crying but just viewing the moon. He slowly went and sat there took her hand in his which shook zoya out of her thought.

Zoya ; hey!! Tum yahha??

Asad : still upset? Par see na mumani ne danta, na humi ne kuch bola to phir kyu??

Zoya : tum to rehne do mr.topper!!

Asad : shona!! Plz!! Remember vo tumhi thi who helped me!! Aur vese bhi I know tumhona mujhe sudhar ne k lliye!

Zoya : ha to? Mujhse better tumhe koi nahi milegi!!

Zoya : asad I m just upset with myself but I know m agli bar aur hardwork karungi and everything will be fine.

Asad : to phir upset kyu ho?

Zoya stood up and closed the doors of her room. She came back and sat next to confused asad.

Zoya : asad , today when I came home , mene apne marks sabko bataye , thoda sa sab upset hue par what tensed me was abbu's behavior. Abbu ne thoda sa over react kiya, I was worried and he said something strange. He was I mean pata nahi kyu he said ki ab humsab bade hogaye h , n we should stay far as much as possible, we matlab u me humi ayan n nazu. Later when I was passing I heard ammi n abbu fighting over something... As I went close, abbu said something Is wrong with our financial status and also I didn't understood par dost bhi isme involved the...i really didn't understood what wast going on...but I was guilty ki shayd abbu meri vajah se upset h!

Asad : you know what zoya, kuch aisa hi mere ghar p hua!!

Zoya who was expecting some reactions wwas shocked to hear wat he said.. she passed him a confused look

Asad : aaj jab mein aayan k kamre se bahar aya tab ammi was telling something to confess the truth tht abbu ko kya hua why is he reacting so strange, while he became more angry and shouted on ammi saying its his matter and yes khalu was also involved , he said now don't meet any of the member from your family.

Hearing this she led out a gasp and started breathing heavily

Zoya : asad kuch to galat h!! something is definitely wrong.

Suddenly her head started to spin and asad caught hold of her when she stumbled.

Assad : don't worry we will sort it out and tumne subah se kuch khaya nahi na, come lets eat something.

Zoya and asad finally came out of her room while everyone was there now, dilshaad, ayaan , najma , humi and zeenat. They both passed a smile and were procedding to talk when they heard loud shouts, they all turned toward the drawing room where Rashid and Anwar seemed to have a quarrel. They all quckly went there.

Anwar : bus bahut hogaya Rashid! Kya hogaya h tume?? Kuch dino pehle tak to sab thik than a!!

Rashid : don't forget tha' na ki hai'!! aur tum hote kon ho mujhse puchne wale??

Anwar : ese kyu bol rahe ho Rashid?

Rashid : men eek bar keh dia ki mujhe tumse koi vasta nahi rakhna to nahi!!

Anwar : tum ese nahi ja sakte ho? Mujhe mera jawab do!!

Rashid : sunna h to suno! Kyunki mera aur tumhara status match nahi karta, tumhe bahut loss hua h, and m ese logo ke sath vasta nahi rakhna chahta jo meri imgae k liye bure ho!! Samjhe!

Anwar was baffled with the answer and so was everyone. But the children can see that there was something Rashid was hiding, it was evident in his eyes. But they were too scared that they slowly made their way to asad and zoya. Humi went to asad whispering bhaijan' while ayaan and najma made their ways towards zoya, they all hugged each other as tight as possible fearing of breaking apart. Tears were present in all of theirs eyes. They snuggled into each other as much as they can.

Few moments later...

Rashid : ayaan, najma , asad , chalo yaha se!!

But none of them moved an inch.

Rashid : mene kaha chalo yaha se!! he took hold of ayaan and najma's hand.

Ayaan and najma : abbu please!! Please!!

Zoya [ still holding asad's and other hand] moved a bit forward : dost please, kya baat h ? sab sort out hojaega!!

Rashid was having hard time seeing zoya so vulnerable , she has been always his favorite, but he kept himself stern : chalo mene kaha!!

While ayaan and najma kept crying bitterly , anwar came to humera's side and pulled off her hand from asad's ,

Humera : abbu please!

Anwar proceeded to tak zoya's hand who's hands were in a frim grip of asad. But neither of them loosened their hands.

Rashid : asad!! Chalo!!

Asad : nahi abbu!!

Asad said this which made Rashid turn and glare him, who seemed to be unaffected.

Anwar tried to take off zoya's hand but they were stern which made Rashid come and snatch asad's hand but neither of them reacted, but slowly their hands went far but still they tried holding onto it still crying. Finally their fingertips were just left, and they soon went away, as they turned to leave , Rashid , dilshad , aayan, najma and asad they heard a thud voice.

They turned to see zoya fainted on the floor...