Th#10 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 32 to 34

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Posted: 11 years ago

#751

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

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aapne ji soncha hai uske baare mai bhi zaroor sonchenge ... lekin aftr next update...
hiw could u end it lyk this... abhi to Ayat ki entry honi hai... nai!!!
mjhe ek update mai ayat chahiye ... plz *puppy face* ..

haha but I don't have even any OS in mind which I can convert for this story

and moreover she is gonna concentrate on studies for few years soo no family planning for few years 🤔😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

#752

Originally posted by: p_s05
Reserved!

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Unreserved!

Loved the concept you introduced in the last chapter and continued into this one, of Asad convincing Zoya to rid herself of the terror she holds of thunderstorms. It really is amazing how you tie up loose ends and justify the littlest of elements added from the beginning of the story. The narrative coming together in a perfect circle, makes an absolute enjoyable read.

"I should probably go and check Nawab Sahab..."

Liked that reference! 😉

Dilshad and the element of romance were a lovely read. Ayaan is good comic relief.

Yup finally she isn't scared of thunderstorm ,,

Thank You !!

I am glad that you liked it 😳

haha good to know that 😆

Yup Ayaan is just to have a good humor !!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#753

Originally posted by: PriyaKabhi
Thanks for PM.
It was so nice Part.
Asad(KSG) showed his anger on Saad for insulting Zoya but Zoya stopped him,it was interesting.
I like Dilshad,she was so nice that she appreciated Zoya and Zoya-Dilshad bonding was so nice.😊
In Asad(KSG) point of view he was right about Saiqa.
Asad(KSG) removed Zoya's fear about storming of Rain,it was so nice.😊
Asad(KSG) and Zoya moments were so nice.😳
Please Update Next part soon,I am waiting here.
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(MISSING ASAD(KSG) and ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)
PRIYAKABHI

Thanks 😳

I am glad that you liked it !!

yup all sorted out between Zoya-Dilshad !!

will try updating soon 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#754

Originally posted by: --RUBAB--
Bubble Angry And Rocking Update.Yo 😎 😉

Thanks Rubab 😳

I am glad that you liked it !!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#755

Originally posted by: jas91

Par i don't like this Maahan Zoya🤢 mujhe starting ki Bitchy wali Zoya achi lagti hai😃
Sweet Zoya 4 Asad only😆 & 4 Rajo & her daughter S meany wali Zoya is apt😉😈

haha she isn't having any double personality Jas 😆

she was always caring behind that bitchy side thats why she cared about Nisha and Wajid as well ,,

and forgiveness won't reduce their guilt but moreover make them realize how better she is than them 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#756

Originally posted by: jazsidhu
wonderfull n fabulous...
luv it...
beautifully written...
saad is purposely trying to iratate zoya n luckly asad came with a solid punch for saad...
dilshad is very proud of zoya to stand up against saad...
asad help zoya to overcome her fear of lightning...
she totally enjoyed the rain...
mindblowing...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

Thank You 😳

I am glad that you liked it !!

yup he finally got Mukka Ahmed Khan 😆

yeah all fine between Zoya-Dilshad too ,,

will try updating soon 😊