Th#9 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 28 to 31 - Page 11

Originally posted by: BeYourself

RES

unres..(Ch 23)

this stupid Vishal Nanda!!!!

i want to slaughter him to death!!!

he was all time there to show his true colors!! 😡

but i loved the morning phone convo!😳

that was sooo sweet and cute!!

15 year old cheerleader!! 😆😆

that's what love does to you! 😉😆

and Asad's past!!!

God Bubba!! what way are you taking this story to??

thank god i didn't read the updates before coz i wouldn't have been able to wait for so long to read the next! 😆

going to read the next chapter now! 😎

lots of love!! 🤗

Originally posted by: BeYourself

Res

Unres.. (Chapter 24)

This was such an emotional update!!! 😭

but trust me, one of my favorites too!! 😳👏

you have written this chapter beautifully! 👏

hated Vishal here!! he is really a loser! 👎🏼

and the way Zoya expressed everything to Asad was Superb!! her motions were portrayed too well!! 👏

and she is thinking of leaving him and going! 😭

but Asad miyan will surely get her... 😳

i have full faith in you! 😉😳😆

going to read the next now!!

i am all set to unres all my comments today! 😉😆

love you! 🤗

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

but its not smelly at all😳😆

Originally posted by: BeYourself

Res

Unres (Ch 25)

the whole update was a roller coaster ride!!

the beginning was so calm..and beautiful when they were hugging...😳

the way he kissed him... 😳

but Zoya's decision i believe was not in haste, but in insecurity.. she didn't get that assurance from Asad's side as he didn't voice anything in front of Vishal...

and then Asad and Ayaan scene was wonderful! 😳

Zoya is his sister! 😆

just imagine someone calling KSG our brother..

i would get a heart attack just like Ayaan!! but mine would have been a real one! 😆🤣

and Zoya's another great side came into the frame...she was worried for Wajid! 😛

what a great person she is!!

and prostitute?? no way!!

she did make decisions in immaturity... but, she had no other option too!

but the end cliffy!! 😲

to be frank, i didn't get afraid of it...

but Asad's feelings at that time when he heard about the plane crash did leave me in awe!! 😳

excellent update Bubba!! 👏

lots of love to you! 🤗

Originally posted by: maha2012

hawww ugh 🤔 😲 😡

Originally posted by: BeYourself

Unres (Ch 26)

again a fantastic update!!!

Zoya did really use her brain to get him all confused! 😆

poor soul!!

but his reactions when he got to know that Zoya is Zohura was wonderfully expressed!! 👏

like always! 😳

and the flashback scene and the way he later realized why that place was so much close to her heart was again wonderfully written!! 👏

you are going great with the story Bubba!! 👏

you have not only made it intriguing, but have also successfully brought out the harsh reality behind 'casting couch' !!

Hats off to you for coming up with this wonder story 😳👏

love you!! ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: BeYourself

res!

Unres... (Ch 27)

Awesomeness at its peak!!

that's what i would say about this update!!

from start till the end... it was purely Adorable and extremely heart touching!!!

i loved each and every word of it!!

i am still in a dreamland after this update...

it wasn't like any fairy-tale..it had reality in it.. yet i was forced to find it as adorable as a fairy tale! 😳

wonderfully written Bubba!! 👏👏

and yeah.. i will be all dressed up for the wedding!! 😉😆

love you sooo much!! 🤗

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

haawww what did I do now ?? 😲

Originally posted by: maha2012

nothing🤔😳

Originally posted by: padda3princess

Great update