The Cage - AsYa SS [COMPLETED]

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Asif

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Nice start
Zoya tried to commit suicide but asad saved her
Both parts were well written
Asad asked zoya number, she doesn't want to give her number to him but her heart refused to obey
Waiting for next part soon
Thanks

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sasir

@sasir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

nice

loved it

interesting

what made zoya took such drastic step

plz update soon

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

LOVELY LOVELY LOVELY STORY.. please do pm the future updates ❤️

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

That was a .ovely start

Just loved it

Awesome

AmziNg

Loved the way he was trying to initiate a convo.

Lovely

Awesome

Superb

Fantastic

Fabulous

Love it

Cont soon

N plz plplz pm me

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_Lavender_

@_Lavender_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Read both the parts

Loved it😳

Continue soon!⭐️

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-shruthi-

@-shruthi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

CHAPTER 3

Asad hangs up the phone and dials the button again. same thing, the rings goes on and on and then dies with the last beep.
"what the hell!" he shouts in anger. "why is her number not available?" he tosses the phone rudely on floor and it breaks into many parts.
Its been 3 days since they have met or rather should I say they have parted. The number she gave to him for contact was found to be busy all the time he tried. If I say he didnt blink his eyes even for a second wont be wrong. He was scared for her. He just wished to see her alright and fine when they meet again, which by his effort he would make it soon.
But this annoying thing, he cant tolerate it. asad calls up his secretary and asks her to fix up his cell and get Prasad on line , he wished to speak to him right now. Poor secretary obeyed him and soon he was talking with Prasad, his employee.
"Prasad. I am sending you one number in few seconds. I want all details about its owner. Okay?" asad breathes heavily blowing his nostril in anger . Prasad quietly with wide eyes nods his head in yes, " yes sir you will get all information regarding this." He assure and with a slight relief asad hangs up the call.
"I will find you zoya. I have to. Its my need now." He sighs tearing his high after red cloud in them.

Its Sunday evening asad walks in a mall while talking on phone. His best friend Haider wished to buy something for himself and being a Sunday when he asked asad for accompany, asad couldn't say no.
Haider has already started with his shopping while asad just enters the shop. He checks on few jeans and good classy shirts for himself. after scanning plenty of them finally he picks up one and moves to changing room for a try.
He checks on the mirror and this white shirt is really enhancing his chiselled muscle . Perfectly suiting attire" he complemented.
Asad makes a way out of the changing room with a smile when the silky material gets slips from his hand. "oops!"he says embarrassed. He leans down to pick up the cloth when his eyes fell upon a familiar figure standing just at some distance with few mens surrounding her.
She looked sad, scared and unwilling to environment but still she is forced to buy stuffs. Asad gets up and stands close to the transparent wall of the shop so as he can see her and observe the situation without getting in to notice.
Yes she is zoya. The girl he met last time. but this time she was not alone, she had many men around her as if she is protected behind the huge pillar. Soon asad realised that she was not the only woman standing there but there wasone more who looked much more happier then she resembled to him.
"humaira please.i don't want to take this." She softly pleads with her eyes.
"why zoya? Its nice see." Humaira puts pressure on her to buy it.
But zoya kept arguing her and asad stood there quietly observing every move she made.
Finally, zoya accepted the defeat and let humaira buy her that cloth. Asad smiled at her dreamily. "she loosk cute when she is angry." He smiles to himself more.
Its only been few more minutes when the whole crowd the girl had around her started to move out of the mall taking her along with them.
Asad felt panic building inside him and he starts to run behind her like a maniac to hold her before she slips like a time.
He thought to call her name but with the huge wrestler sought of men around her this definitely is not the idea to go with it.
So he thought for few seconds before he called haider and planned a move.
Zoya was at the start of escalator and his huge gang had circled her completely when the escalator suddenly stopped in middle and the little jerk made the men go unbalance for a while.
"ya allah, I don't want to climb down the stairs, my feet is already hurting." She complains and zoya nods her head in yes.
The senior of all men gives the other signal and every one starts walking to the lift with a group. Asad too smartly moves inside the lift before they could come. And when he sees them coming in he allows them to enter making himself stands in the corner of the lift. Zoya gasps as she spots asad in the same room as her. Her eyes pops out in fear and she signs at the man looking at asad to keep quite. Without coming in knowledge with anyone asad manges to convey zoya to see him in ground floor restroom. She nods her head in yes and prays to allah to save all of them now.
The lift stops at ting and the door opens for them to step out, as asad asked her to do she makes an excuse with the men and walks in the washroom with humaira.
"hi." He says out of breath. God life with zoya is so adventurous! He remarks mentally.
"why did you call me here?" she asks sternly without beating around the bush.
"because you gave me a number which don't work!!" he brings the louder voice ignoring the confuse humaira standing at two feet distance from them.
"I gave you my correct number." She says in her defence and he laughs in sarcasm.
"but you don't pick it up either, its same as dead." He complains like a hubby to her and she could no longer help but roll her eyes at him.
"god. I didn't pick up because I can't." She says in almost teary voice begging him to stop bugging her more.
Asad felt his heart pierced at her tone and he steps in to her personal space with out further thought. "and why is that so?" he asked with a pain same as she had in her voice.
"Because I am hooked with him. for life." She shows her tiny finger which holds a beautiful diamond ring.
And with this he was shattered into million pieces which could never be fixed for life. A story which had finished even before he made a start. An incomplete love story of asad ahmed khan and zoya farooqui. Were these name not made to be one?will asad -zoya ever live together, will he get a chance to live his love once...all questions left incomplete leaving destiny to decide them.
And he stood there freeze as if a huge ice berg has just hit him and now he had no place to. The pain he felt was so miserable that his lips could not speak but his eyes let the water fall.

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hey beautiful people 😃 oh my god what a response man. This forum is better then what i thought. 😆 thanks to all of you for coming here and reading my piece of work. Thanks so much.
😳

For reminder I am done with three chapter today 😳
And only 2 left to finish my this story aww..i hate to think about end.even when i know i shouldnt do that. 😆
Bad habbits die hard 😡 😆
Okay so thanks all. I hope you all had a good weekend 😉

Edited by -shruthi- - 11 years ago

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-shruthi-

@-shruthi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: PrettYSmile
Hii shruthi. ..

This is soon good n intresting. ...

Lovely concept. ..

I like dish asad.. .
I thought zoya will help asad.. .. but asad became Savior. ..

Its nice.. .u should continue. ...

thanks so much dear i like this emotional hotch potch too 😆

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-shruthi-

@-shruthi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: potternerd
Oh wow second part already superb👏😃

Lovely

Asad trying to make small talk😆

Nice

Oh she gave him her number😳

Title is apt !!

aww thanks a lot dear 😃 thanks i wanted something similar to prison so it just came to me 😳

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-shruthi-

@-shruthi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
LOVELY LOVELY LOVELY STORY.. please do pm the future updates ❤️

this is so cute comment 😳 😆

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love.asad.zoya

@love.asad.zoya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Ohhh !!! U really update fast 😆
I really want to know Zoya's story ... Poor her
But I know atlast asya will be together 😉 ... Hope so 😕 😛
Don't worry ... If story is going to complete ... U can write more stories 😉
We asya fans r always ready 😳 😆
And I don't have to tell u to update soon ...becoze u r really fast 🤣

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