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Anisa

@AnnzSageflower7

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

That was so beautiful...!

The abandonment by the one you love, surely is a terrible pain...

to find out you were wrong all along is even worse...

Salvation, Redemption, I'd take either one!

Lovely piece❤️

Thanks so much! 👏

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

'Aahil grabbed Sanam's hand while she gazed into his eyes frightful at being exposed.'

At being exposed.

This is art right there.

Take a bow.

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Pagalpinky

@Pagalpinky

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

They were together
Then she left him
Four years later she wants a job
He interviews her
She tries to leave and gets hurt
He takes care of her and drives her home
Then kisses her
Then...got confused...with the ending...

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fanraya

@fanraya

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Wow, this is amazing, so beautiful.. wish they had more scenes like this/ conversations in the real show too..please do continue.. Great job..

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

I was so engrossed, so enjoying it,

then came "Sanam"

THE END

NOOO Juliet...

Please continue

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Sofna
AMAZING...FANTASTIC...SUPERB ...Loved the onslaught of emotions throughout... Plz cont...

Oh yes yes!

An onslaught of emotions!!

*sniff*

Take that bow already!

You did great!

A writing to cure a writing block. You do it best!

Mwah!

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jazz

@jazmeen

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Loved it

Awosome os

But it felt incomplete. Are you writing another part for it

Plzz

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

This is good

U need to finish this

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fatuimamotala

@fatuimamotala

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

OMG that was amazing!!!!

Please update soon and pm me please...

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rajsmi

@rajsmi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

WOW!! The play of emotions was captured so well!! Both hurting so much yet proud to expose...

Felt unfinished till the last sentence

Aahil grabbed Sanam's hand while she gazed into his eyes frightful at being exposed.

" Sanam..."

So there...he knew what happened :-)

Is my guess right? A second part would be great either way!!

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