Complete then!
...
Oh boy.
*sniff sniff*
Truly.
While their story deserves to be completed...this OS is. Already.
It's complete!
This is honest to God a class of it's own. No further story needed. This is just an episode of their lives. And we're lucky to be privy of this very episode too. So much it held! It could have been a different one...but you gave us this. *sniff*
Some stories are such.
They being unfinished...this is just that part of the story. A part which you've given so much care and detailing to. A part taken from a whole...to stand alone; whole.
It was her all along? At the hospital? His hallucination?
It didn't matter that he only thought of it now. Or did he really?
Rich guy rich guy rich guy!
He was in the hospital.
And to him she left with a rich guy.
It doesn't matter who what when why how!
He's here now. And she's with him.
Some stories touch your soul and leave a mark. This is one such story.
Brilliance at its very best.
I'm not even being nice here. Coz being nice would mean telling you that there has to be another part to this. There just has to be.
Fine who am I kidding. I want another part. I'm nice I can't help it. What do I do with this heavy heart. I wanna hug you. Can I do that?
You gave Aahil a brain true enough you did! And yes his announcement makes him seemed just a tad bit caring. She could have pushed him away but she didn't. He made an announcement.
But he took care of her in the office. He loves her still.
Of course he does.
And quite the control eh! He's taking her home. No argument. Who's at home? Which home!
While I want to know all...I don't need to.
This is, in all meaning of the word- complete.
Thank you for this!
To be quite honest, I was truly hoping for a lil heavy heart SaHil story from you.
This is the veey definition of heavy heart what youve written and so graciously shared with us.
I can't offer you strawberries or any of the Eid cookies...this is a class of it's own as aforementioned...but a bowl of yummy kheer? Mummy made. Loads of almonds and raisins. I don't share normally.
I hope Aahil be good tonight. I will for him to be good.
Shall read again. Maybe morning I'll have different thoughts on it?
Much love!
Mwah.
Edited by farz_parachute - 11 years ago
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