AsYa SS-A Walk Back Home-NOTE- Pg153-updating soon - Page 86

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Posted: 10 years ago

nice update

for a moment they forgot about everything and they were a lovely couple...but then reality came up ...really wonder what's the reason behind their separation...

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nilusoni

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome part
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part

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Amin21Khpulwak

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Posted: 10 years ago

Worth waiting update yaar

Just loved it .

Thanks for updating and do always remember your loyal readers waiting for next hop to get it ASAP

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice update dear. look forward to the next part eagerly 😊

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Chahat Doshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

Like not working

Thank you for the pm

Nice

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Antara123

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Posted: 10 years ago

That was a very heart rendering update... I will comment in detail later. I loved it. Realistic. Touching. It actually showed the pains of divorce. Awesome. Thanks for the PM.

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Asif

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome update
Asad & zoya left for home as car won't be fixed soon. Flashback were nice. Race part was amazing. They forget difference & enjoyed life as a happy couple. Wondering why they decided to staying apart. Plz continue soon. Thanks for pm

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Urvi Saini

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice and small update

Thanks for the pm

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Prashni Singh

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Posted: 10 years ago

Reserved!

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Unreserved!

"Our daughter is waiting for us at home..." - Poignant and Symbolic!

The walk back home, was so significant and beautiful, the first step towards rekindling their broken relationship.

That race scene was written amazingly, Asad was simply charming, the moment were his was mesmerized by her was really very beautiful.

The flashback was heartbreaking.

A short chapter, look forward to the next one.

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jaanu013

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Posted: 10 years ago

nice updaterace part was nice.they forgot their indifferences for the time being

thnx for the update cont soon

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