Originally posted by: sweety003
Love love love love the update!!! 😛
Everything was perfect ankie ,emotions, thoughts n actions. A simply fabulous concept and mind blowing writing!!! 👏
I love the way how you have written asad zoya's pov 😉
Beginning I thought it was just a small fight , it never came to my mind they're ready to take divorce if I'm not wrong ...i loved that you added meher in this n her reactions to asya fight ..it surely affect her... n how dilshad defending her grand daughter ...just impeccable writing ankie!!!👏
Asad-zoya loves each other n still they wanna get rid off WHY WHY WHY??? 😔
"See... it's not that difficult to gather the broken pieces, if you really want to..."
"But you can't join them up again like before.. However hard you try, the cracks will still remain...i love these lines😊
I guess there is really a very strong reason behind it ..n asad is quite confused ...anyway I have FULL faith in you I know you'll never make them apart 😉
Thank you sooo much for dedicating this to me , really blessed to have you a friend like you n I never ever gonna forget YOU 🤗😳
I wanted to write more but it's very difficult to do so via mobile phone
Love you so much , hugs and kisses😳🤗
Waiting eagerly fah your next chapter
you must be wondering, why did i reply to your comment so late??
that's because, i wanted to give all my time to my dear lil sis... and reply to her precious comment with all my time 😳🤗
Thank you so much Anu... 😳
it really means a lot to me!! 😳
the fight is definitely a big one...and that will be clear with every update!! 😛
glad that you loved AsYa's POV 😳
Meher is a small child..she might not be knowing what's happening exactly... but she can surely sense the indifference in her parent's behavior when they fight
and Dilshad is over protective about her... just like any other grand mom 😳
those lines define their present situation...
and i am glad that you loved them...😳😛
i will never ever let them part ways..that's for sure!!😉😆
but the story will have lots of sad moments, with a positive impact!! 😛
i am more blessed coz i have you as a lil sis my dearest!! 😳🤗
i am never going to let you forget me! 😈😆
no need to say anything more... coz i already know everything that you wanna say.. 😳❤️
it's only because of you that i came up with this story... otherwise i wasn't going to start with one!! 😉😆
but i am glad that i did...and now i don't want to disappoint anyone! 😳
will try to update soon!! 😳
love you my sweetheart!! ❤️🤗
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