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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AMMY12

awsm update.
Superb one.
Luvd it.
Plz cont asap.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c



Originally posted by: padda3princess

Awesome part :-)update next part soon..



Originally posted by: MysticRiver

well written update..👍🏼



Thanks guys ! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

Loved it Bano🤗

The best part was that Zoya is jealous of Sana😆
she is a cutie pie !!
And I love this caring Asad he is always there for her❤️
Ayaan is too much ,,
but glad that Asad scolded him he needed that😆
and now Zoya is in hospital😳
I don't want anything to go wrong with her or the baby ,,
keep it in ur mind🤓
and update sooon will be waiting !!


Thank you so much Bubble sis !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! 😳
Hahah yeah Zoya is a lot of a possessive woman ! 😉 😆
Ayaan ghalti karega toh bada bhai hi samjhayega ! 😳
Lol we'll see what happens ! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

res

itna lamba updt😲

unres
surprise updt😃
so Asad hated Haseena & wanted 2 teach her a lesson which was tempting but his love 4 Zoya was stopping him😆
D lion in him awake thinking Zoya's culprit r free & spending her money😡
then Asya had a cute scene when Asad laughed at her & she tricked 2 punish him😲😆
Zoya became happy 2 see his hand on her belly thinking he accepted her decision but was sad & disappointed when he took it back😭
than he gave massage 2 her swollen feet😃
Zoya showed her disappointment & finally Asad blurt out everything but poor Zoya didn't understand his last sentence🤣
she told him about her feelings 4 d 1st time & cried remembering her past😭
Asad heart broke & he promised 2 always b wid her & they had a group hug😊
Asad Dillu had there time after so long where he told about Haseena & Dillu asked him 2 b patient cuz being a woman she know Zoya should punish her culprits herself👍🏼
Zoya in her 4th month of pregnancy giving Asad hell of a time wid her tantrums
Sana & Ayaan had fight & she came crying home but seeing her wid Asad Zoya was jello😆
when Asad got 2 know this he was totally amused😃
So Zoya had terrible pain & had 2 b taken 2 hospital
I m speechless⭐️
great job👏
continue soon😊


PS- abhi tak just 50 pgs pade tune😲 aise toh noval kabhi khatam nahi hoga😆



Only for itne lambe comments ! 🤗
Delkho yeh admi kitna perfect hai ! 😭
Yes he's nit ok with her decision because in that decision she's hurting herself !
Ufffg ! Zoya didnt get the main point ! 😉 😆
Well i know well what it is to bear pregnant women ! (My sisters when they were expecting), toh main thode bohot experience se bata rahi hoon ke pregnant women kitni annoying hoti hain ! 😆
Zoya is a very possesssive woman ! 😆
Itna zyada bolke ke toh koi bhi speechless nahi ho sakta !! 😆
But seriously i loved ur feedback !! Thank you so much meri darling Jas !! 🤗 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayurchan7

Hi...bano it was a good update starting with the lighter part to the jealeousy and then the end it was bad hope everything goes well




Thanks Mayur ! 😃 I'm glad you liked it ! 😳
Lets see what happens ! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Itna dukhbhara update 😭

Next aur emotional hoga 😭

M nt so strong 😭


Yeh update tumhe dukhbhada laga ? acha i admit the end was but still ! 😆

Zindagi ki yehi reet hai, haar ke baad hi jheet hai 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asyafreva

Jealous Zoya...?

Wow...!!

It was soo cutee!

Loved it!


Thanks lil sis !! ❤️ I'm glad you liked it ! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: suganti

glad that asad controlled himself for zoya's sake eventhough i wished he could do something

but he is right,zoya will be the one that will punish them coz she suffered a lot
the convo of zoya with asad abt the baby was emotional
last part made me teared up..zoya was in so much of pain
is she going to have miscarriage?
thanks for pm


For that dont worry, Zoya will punish them ! I wont let her culprits escape like this !
Thanks Suganti !! I'm glad you liked it !! 😳
Well lets see what happens ! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thats also true ! 😳 her motherhood cant be compared to anything !! It was the sexond best thibg of QH after KSG and AsYa ! 😎 Asad proves himself to be the perfect son each time !

Awww Thank you ! Thank you ! Thank you ! Thank you !! 🤗 that really means a lot !! 😳

Same to u !! [mwah ! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

wonderfull n fabulous...

amazing...
luv it...
beautifully written...
zoya is getting jealous...
really hope everything will be fine...
asad told everything about wat he feels to zoya about the baby...
sana n ayaan are so cute...
very heart touching...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...


Thank you so much Jaz ! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

Awesome !!!
Asad is so caring!!
Loved it!!
oh god Zoya in pain again!!!
Waiting to knw what happens



I'm glad you liked it di ! 🤗 ❤️

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