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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ap3h7u

Amazing update...loved it to bits😳...wonder what'll happen to the baby😭...update soon😃


Thanks !! I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️
But i'm sorry the baby wont survive
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

Bano



I truly have no words, that was a beautifully penned and extremely emotional update.

I felt every emotion run through me.

Hats off Little Api

Sana made me laugh at the end

Mwah love u




Ps sorry for being a million years late


Thank you so much Aapi !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️

Yes Sana is quite fun here ! 😉 😆

Love u too !! 🤗 mwah !! ❤️

Dont worry i understand that u r busy ! :-*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: swapno

Emotional but lovely update!!!

Loved it!!
Asad did not leave her even though he was angry
and she realized how he value her, care for her!!
Sana is really great!!
Zoya really acted maturely here!!
Waiting for next update already!!


Thank you so much Sadia !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️
He didnt leave because whatever she says, Asad loves her a lot ! 😳
She's indeed a great frend ! 😃
When matters go to a mother, then she is always mature and protective of her children ! 😳
Will try to update soon ! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik


I know she was cold to him ! but how would u behave if somebody ask u to get separated from ur child ? 😭
Writing all that made me cry buckets because Asad wasnt at fault but he was being hurted !
Yes he wont ! this time Zoya will have to manao Asad ! 😉 he's not happy with her decision but cant either take the decision since he has no rights
Sh was cruel with him and will be trying to manao Asad, but well he wont make it easy for her ! 😉

Thank you so much Jas !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️


I m gonna love nxt updt than cuz our innocent Zoya is gonna manao Asad I m so excited thinking what will she do😆
u have a tough job here Bano😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91



I m gonna love nxt updt than cuz our innocent Zoya is gonna manao Asad I m so excited thinking what will she do😆
u have a tough job here Bano😉


Next update u'll see her trying to manao him but he wouldnt be Asad Ahmed Khan if he doesnt do nakhras ! 😉 he'll enjoy being pampered while she'll do her best to manao him 😳
Hahaha i didnt write it yet 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

THanks Anitha ! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks buddy ! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik


I had told u na ! I was crying buckets while writing ! 😭

Yeah that part was heart wrenching ! 🥺 i felt like hugging him then and there ! 🤗 😭

Thank you so much Amu !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️
Soon dimpled baby ? 😲 voh kaise ? 😆
Haan carrying her after being scolded like a kid doing a mischief ! 😆
Yeah tahts what the next chapter is about ! 😃 Zoya needs to realize that he wont come to her now, she'll have to come to him and apologize then eventually he would forgivz her after enjoying the pampering ! 😉 😳 😆

Yeah i prefered miscarriage rather than abortion since i find to be cruel and disgusting ! 🤢 😭

ur welcome Bano ...🤗
aww even i wanted 2 hug him ..hes in so much pain 😭😭
dimpled kid.😆 soon means not so soon...asad is there na..😳
yup ...i want 2 zoya manoing asad chap soon...cant wait 2 c how much she pampers him 😳
yes ur 100% right ..aborting is cruel...
pls start writing n update soon ..
❤️🤗


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Amulya9


ur welcome Bano ...🤗
aww even i wanted 2 hug him ..hes in so much pain😭😭
dimpled kid.😆soon means not so soon...asad is there na..😳
yup ...i want 2 zoya manoing asad chap soon...cant wait 2 c how much she pampers him😳
yes ur 100% right ..aborting is cruel...
pls start writing n update soon ..
❤️🤗



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Yeah he fekt so hurt because he loves her so much and she says that nobody cares and that nobody will be sad if she dies ! 😭 lets hug him ! 🤗 😆 🤗
Haan he's there ! But lagta hai Asad ke safed baal nikal aayenge Zoya ka intezar karte karte ! 😆

Haha i started writing but i'm not having inspiration !
Thats why i dont want it to happen ! 😭
Will try my best ! 🤗 ❤️

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