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Marybarton

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: surbhisha
You can write down.

It is up now

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Sofna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Woah loved it... It was mighty rushed 😆 ... enjoyed their showdown & Sanams answers... esp how she will be paying him back 😛 ... Evn in.the nth moment is Aahil one to give in, considering his upbringing... ?

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Anisa

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Posted: 11 years ago

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That was BEAUTIFUL !!! It was a tad rushed, but I understand the need to quickly get to THAT dialogue that's been plaguing your head that HAD to be written!! 😉

Lovely turn of events, very nice heart string pulling emotions...

Beautifully written...😳

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Marybarton

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Sofna
Woah loved it... It was mighty rushed 😆 ... enjoyed their showdown & Sanams answers... esp how she will be paying him back 😛 ... Evn in.the nth moment is Aahil one to give in, considering his upbringing... ?

My sense of Aahil is that he won't easily let go of anyone he loves. Was talking to someone on the forum about his clinginess with Sanam and Tanveer actually. So, went off that angle. If he thought he got abusive and she was leaving him, he could back down pretty fast - like when he started screaming in the graveyard.

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Marybarton

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: sageflower7

That was BEAUTIFUL !!! It was a tad rushed, but I understand the need to quickly get to THAT dialogue that's been plaguing your head that HAD to be written!! 😉

Lovely turn of events, very nice heart string pulling emotions...
Beautifully written...😳
👏

The first one was better but now this one got rushed as I wanted to finish for you guys today :)

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Zaina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Very nice One shot... i really liked it..

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Mandy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

I just read it. So you did write it again. So Aahil had to fess up about the girls?? Lol. That was funny.

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Marybarton

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan
I just read it. So you did write it again. So Aahil had to fess up about the girls?? Lol. That was funny.

lol that was self-satisfaction. I couldn't take it if he fooled around now. 😆

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Marybarton

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Ethereal.Surbhi
it was awesome

thank you dear, but i think i must be a bad writer because my os' never get comments. I have seen this trend on this page

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964749

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Mary, that was beautiful! Loved the turn of events and Sanam's attitude.

I like the way Aahil found out about Sanam's Badi Ammi being in hospital.

Hope Sanam gives back like she did in your OS in the show. I can't stand it when girls in TV shows cry and then forget and forgive the next minute

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