OS: After that Dance (POSTED) - Page 2

Originally posted by: surbhisha

You can write down.

It is up now

Woah loved it... It was mighty rushed 😆 ... enjoyed their showdown & Sanams answers... esp how she will be paying him back 😛 ... Evn in.the nth moment is Aahil one to give in, considering his upbringing... ?

Originally posted by: Sofna

Woah loved it... It was mighty rushed 😆 ... enjoyed their showdown & Sanams answers... esp how she will be paying him back 😛 ... Evn in.the nth moment is Aahil one to give in, considering his upbringing... ?

My sense of Aahil is that he won't easily let go of anyone he loves. Was talking to someone on the forum about his clinginess with Sanam and Tanveer actually. So, went off that angle. If he thought he got abusive and she was leaving him, he could back down pretty fast - like when he started screaming in the graveyard.

Originally posted by: sageflower7

That was BEAUTIFUL !!! It was a tad rushed, but I understand the need to quickly get to THAT dialogue that's been plaguing your head that HAD to be written!! 😉

Lovely turn of events, very nice heart string pulling emotions...

Beautifully written...😳

👏

The first one was better but now this one got rushed as I wanted to finish for you guys today :)

Very nice One shot... i really liked it..

I just read it. So you did write it again. So Aahil had to fess up about the girls?? Lol. That was funny.

Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan

I just read it. So you did write it again. So Aahil had to fess up about the girls?? Lol. That was funny.

lol that was self-satisfaction. I couldn't take it if he fooled around now. 😆

Originally posted by: Ethereal.Surbhi

it was awesome

thank you dear, but i think i must be a bad writer because my os' never get comments. I have seen this trend on this page

Mary, that was beautiful! Loved the turn of events and Sanam's attitude.

I like the way Aahil found out about Sanam's Badi Ammi being in hospital.

Hope Sanam gives back like she did in your OS in the show. I can't stand it when girls in TV shows cry and then forget and forgive the next minute