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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

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Chappi 15

Oh no..I had a FEELING..dis uncl is kamine..mean pakka HARAMI nikla saala😭😡..

she cld him uncl n repect him WHOLEHEARTEDLY n he RAPED her🤬..woah.

Gals r really not SAFE anywhr..not at her HOUSE even..thats y..wen asad said gals r safe in their houses..she smiles SARCASTICALLY😒. .she was not safe evn at her HOUSE..oh poor gal..m FEELING so bad fr her😭..

U wrt the her feelings very BEAUTIFULLY aftr that torture👏..

No one knw wat HAPPENED behind the door..bt still she was GULITY CONSCIOUS that every one is laughing at her😭..

I dnt knw hw to EXPLIAN my sadness aftr reading dis CHAPPI...dis gal went though a lot😒😭..

Thnkfully FLASHBACK ends here..

M glad NISHA is not like her kamini mom..she tried to put BRAINS in zoya n made her understand to gv a CHANCE to asad n their RELATION..


N M VERY MUCH HAPPY SHE CLD ASAD..YEEY..n I HOPE ASAD VL FRGV HER..n understand her pov..

its not NECESSARY that wat life gvs us ..must b good..it may b WORST..bt we dnt have ny other option bt to ACCEPT it..face it..bt wat ever the RESULT vl come aftr that..it vl dfntly bcm the LESSON fr us..I knw its easy to say..bt we hv to accpt it😊...

Sad chapter but PERFECT one👏..

love

Shreya😉


yeah no place is safe wherever she went they all used her for their own good
Thanks Shreya !!
It means alot to me 😳
Aww don't be sad plzz and let me remind u that u r the one who forced me into writing this sad story 😡 it makes me sad too at times 🥱
Yup he will forgive her for sure ,,
I agree with u 😊
Thanks again !!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

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Chappi 16

Awww such an amazing CHAPPI bubble😳

Asad COLD BEHAVIOUR is very much justify towards zoya😃😆..

I thnk she was also ready to hear some HARSH words frm his side😉..

"Don't be sorry ! I was punishing you anyway for that stupid boyfriend of yours and it was a mistake so forget it.

Wao..mr khan to BOUNCER pe bouncer dal rhe hai😎...


"I mean --- it was but not from your side but mine --- I mean I should have controlled myself. Its not your mistake at all." She continued blabbering confusedly and he rolled his eyes in disbelief.
"Can you just decide what you want to say Zoya ?

Oho..now dis GAL is very confused...she evn makes ME confuse..it ws not his mistake..mean not only his mistake..its her MISTAKE..oho..I thnk she need to do sum HOMEWRK on her convo..bechare MR INTELLIGENT KHAN ko b CONFUSE kr dia🤣..

Thnk god..she ws ready to gv CHANCE to this RELATIONSHIP. ..

Wwwat..SHE WAS AT HIS PLACE😲...

What are you wearing ?" Words skipped his mouth and he realized he was loud enough for her to hear.

His khan CROSSED his limits..agn☺️...n faced the CONSEQUENCES. ..( slip of tongue is very much common in louv😉😆)

"Ermm --- I like wearing shorts at night and with a tee of course." She interrupted him wickedly and for a moment, she enjoyed how easily he was getting teased by her.

Aww..she Is such a SWEETHEART😳. .

I love the whole scene of BOOK READING...its the BEST PART of tis chappi..she was in sound sleep..that really SATISFIED asad a lot... (it reminds me that LAPPI scene..whr asad saw ZOYA whole nite)

Thnkfully asad knw LOADS of thngs abt her..varna sunil kasam se bht MAAR khata bechara😆..

"You know na she is more busier than Abu." Ayaan replied.
"Yeah who knows better.

Yaay..mera AYAAN b a gya...nw I really wana knw abt asad's DARKER side..

she wanted asad to cm on SKYPE asap..wats the catch nw😆..

AMAZING CHAPPI AMMI😳..

Love

SHREYA😉


yeah she deserves some cold behavior too although she was not very much on mistake 😆
she is a complicated woman as Asad says
yeah she is at his place --- she knows very well how to please him 😳😆
haha Sunil's chapter is close now ,,
Asad is not having much of dark side but yeah few secrets maybe 😉
Thanks Shreya !!
I am glad that you liked it 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

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Chappi 17

I love tis ff more now😳..

Wen I read that update whr asad lie to zoya..I really wanted zoya to catch asad lie..n finally the d-day come..

Then why does Nisha and Google doesn't agree on it ?"

I love asad expressions wen zoya asked him abt the real meaning of that line😆..

"You know I tried to praise Nisha in German as she was wearing a red shirt but look what I got to know. She is laughing at me since an hour. This is really embarrassing for me." She told him in disbelief and he couldn't control the smile occurring on his face.

Omg she complimented the same line to nisha...bechari zoya🤣..

Zoya tk a wise decision to learn german nw..othrws..she vl miss asad's words..n intimate thnking towards her🤣..

Awww..he ws missing her badly that he wanted her to say the same...

Oho..mr.OCD ahmad khan jaag utha😆..bt its late nw..as 2 gals r already there in his bedroom..

Mrs saxena is f**king bitch yaar🤬..

I dnt knw wen u vl end all this torture on zoya..it mks me feel as if its a nvr ending thng fr her nw😒..

Oh grt..that guy abhimanyu used her physically on the name of love😡..very nice😡..

He adviced her to say NO to thngs and use her own brains..n she did that...he gt hyper ..jst bcz she used his wise advc on him only..such a basterd he ws😡🤬..

Thats y zoya dnt believe in love..she dnt trust man..bcz she witnessed only harressment torture insecurity n hate only frm men in her life..rite frm her befkuf father till nw..very sad yaar..hw cn someone so unlucky..bt exception are alwys there..


I vl kill that f**king bitch😡...nw wen zoya want to raise her voice against sumthng she dnt like..she wana play a game wid her doggie beta😡..

Ya allah..Ab ye aurat kya kregi...

Bubble plz try to end tis flashback asap..I alwys feel sad aftr reading the whole situation she went thru...I knw its the part of ur story..bt she she went thru a lot..😭

Nw I cn say ..m waiting fr nxt chappi..yeeeyyy..atlst...

U knw wat..ICH VERMISSTE MEINE KOMMENTARE AUF IHRE GESCHICHTE, ABER IETZT BIN ES REGELMBIG TUN...find out the MEANING nw..🤣

Love

SHREYA😉



haha she was supposed to find it out one day and that came finally 😆
yeah poor girl complimented a girl that she will do shame shame with her if she wears red dress 😲😆
Yup she should know what he says to her while romancing atleast 😳😆
haha that torture ended already Shreya and I am soo much relieved that I am finally done writing FB !!

now I am gonna concentrate on present 😎
yeah u r right exceptions r always there ,,
Thanks !!
glad that you liked it 😳
the words u used in german r not coming out right on google 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
I came here to res for last chapter 👎🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
one more chapter to go Bubba 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: TaiLung

wow bubble congrats for new thread👍🏼

it was awesome update as usual 😃
atlast nisha helped her from that mess created by she herself
and bitter flash back also ended. so relieved u know 😛

now happy and happy only means not so bitter 😆
asad is so different in this story bubble
i liked it very much.😳
so there are rules to be followed by gf good 😆
cant wait for the next update hope u will update today soon 😳


Thanks 😳
I am glad that you liked it !!
yeah Nisha proved to be a true friend ,,
haha yeah I am also relieved 😆
aww yeah he is different and I like naughty Asad now 😆
Yup will b updating today !!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: BeYourself


awww... i will always support you...no matter what...😳😛

i don't really believe in fairy tales, but people still believe in them because they expect their life to be like one... which actually doesn't happen to anyone...

media!!! 🥱
a word that i really hate!! 🥱😡
they add so much spices to one piece of info to make that all exciting and spicy!! 😡🤔

yeah. everything has a time... and i believe Nisha's entry's right time was after Zoya's destruction!! 😆

hawww😲
what are you exactly planning for woman??/
i know things will deffo not go so straight... quite obvious it s...😉😆
but still... i dont want misunderstandings between AsYa 😆

but i am excited to read what you have kept in store for us!! 😈😳

waiting!! 😛




Yup but still they do try to show reality sometimes 😆
haha not after destruction but specially when something majorly wrong was going on soo that Mrs Saxena can be jailed 😉
I can't share my plans right now
Aww no one wants anything wrong to happen I don't know what to do 🤔
haha ok 😳
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Hey Aniha 😳
how are you ??😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: BeYourself


right now i am a reader...and i am upset coz Shree has made a record and i couldn't!! 🤔🤣


plzz don't ever break her record 🤔

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