Th#6 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 18 to 20

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mwahhh😳 Im First😎
Blehhh🤗
i love yahhh😳❤️


Sabse pehle tou "kadi mera wi comment quote kardeya karo maliha tarah"😡
the note was👏
Some ppl need to adopt a mature approach n mindset towards the story..It deals with crucial realities..So those who have issue should kindly not read the story n try to demoralize the writer🥱 Some r in dire need of a "Reality Check"😵
Mrs.Saxena is one hell of a ghatia aurat..she tried to keep zoya in control by forcing her to marry her son🤢
Her son Jedi is an Assh***🤢 he was ignorant the whole time zoya's life was ruined in that one year.. then he has the audacity to question her character..despite knowing the truth🤢
i was angry at Nisha..but now i loved her... for saving zoya n sending those sick creeps to jail..
Mrs.Saxena is a woman with such double standards🤢 the thought of nisha in zoya's places was unbearable for her that she slapped nisha🤢 how could she do the same to a helpless girl who trusted her🤢
zoyas surprise for Asad n the peck on lips which turned to a passionate kiss☺️
hayee love them both😳
zoya should tell asad the entire truth before starting her relation with him..this can create a chaos..🤔
undoubtedly she deserves to move and start a better life without sorrow n pain
Flawless piece of writing..apke haaton mein jaadu hai..kya likhti hain aap😉👏
love u like Broadway Pizza😳🤗
Mwahh mwahh😳❤️

Mahuuu😈

Edited by maha2012 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res😆
Hum gye mahu..bhagooo



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Edited by shreya11mehra - 11 years ago
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Maliha was late in res'ing and I updated it earlier than usual
so this post goes as a 'res' for her !!
Here is her unres'ed comment 😳❤️
Haaww Mals you have got soo many likes already 😲😆


Originally posted by: -Maliha-

Another BANG ON update,..👏

Today am doing alil wiered thing,..
Last things first: that Note,..
like i cant expect people to narrate the story their way,..its upto writer,.. te way he/she has decided it must go on that way,..whether you like or not!!
from the day 1 i knew the every bit of Zoe's flashbacks coming,..
the way she was found on lake side crying in a red party gown with 2 awards in car,.. i knew it,.. that bitter world ate her up to!
No wonder,.. cox its the way world is,..
Name the big poilitician women tehy have also gone through harassments,.. Name big stars,.. they have always been alleged for affairs and live in relationships,..

now coming to the update
Flashback,..
well i knew Mrs.Saxena is cheap,.. but this much,.. like firstly making a girl to live a dirt life,.. and when she speaks up then trying to bound her in a relationship,.. who means nothing but life time slavery to her and his nerd nut!
and am glad that finally Nisha came to know about her Bitch Mom,..
and that wasa really slap on her face that Nisha kept herself on Zoe's place,.. and she failed to even think about that,..
whata double standards,..
and Good,..that her useless son is also with her behind the bar,..


and present:
well i loved that light asya moment,.
she flied here in advance to just give him surprsie,..
Good going To Be Mrs. AAK,..
he wanted more of the kiss but Gosh,.. he is so amusing,,.
showing her that it was only her,..jumping into the kiss,..
and the rules,.. Yup,..
i just wish one is that she wouldnt ever back off now,..

and what about that heavy book she was picking up??

Update soon,,.
and i just loved it,..

Edited by --Bubble007-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful Chapter !!👏
I knew Nisha would save her !!!!!
Was money everything for Ms Saxena 🤢
She nvr even loved her daughter😒
Poor Nisha must be feeling so guilty and helpless
But it takes llots of courage to go against ur own mother 👏
And the fact that Zoya still trusted her and now she supports her ...that need a pure soul like Zoya 😳👏

And you are right ...this is a harsh reality ...people say she could have done this ,,she could have done that ...and there is always some other option but whn you are entraped in such a situation you dont know what to do specially when you are mere 17 or 18 year old and you have been betrayed by your own father and mother and now by that aunt whom u thought is like a mother and now u are left with no one but your own scared reflection...
Oh yeah there is one option SUICIDE but is that an option even its a crime!!!!!!!


Sooo she is officially his girlfriend now...😆
Becharii girldfriend hone k bhi rules 😆
ab aurr kaha phass gayii yehhh😆



And and I dunnno but I am niharofying this pic of his since evening and feeling like...☺️

I think this might be close to the look he gives her while skyping when she comfronts him of his german comments on her ☺️











Edited by treasure11 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Frstly thnk u so much fr dedicating the chappi to me😛..

It means a lot to me😳..

Love u too buddy🤗

Bck to update

Chappi 18

Mrs SAXENA ws such a sick lady hu wanted to ruin zoya life by using her own SON😡🤬..

I knw ..nisha wud SAVE her ..thnkfully sumone ws thr fr her alwys in her TOUGHER tyms..

I cnt understand y money bcm so important fr a person that she cn go ny extent to earn it..Is money that much important that a person frgt all humanities..that a person frgt that she herself a human being...hw cn a person frgt that one day god vl punish her fr wrong doings..

Thnkfully nisha stood fr her..AGAINST her mom n her brother👏

Nw that very much TRUE..life is not a CINDRELLA story..its far frm stories..every turn gvs a new twist ..n change DESTINY..to bkoff is nvr a SOLUTION..bt wen we face it..that the best CHALLENGE. .zoya choose to FACE her life..bt on her own terms and CONDITIONS. .

Fr me..she is a WINNER⭐️..hu face evils in her life n still stand STRONG...rite frm her house to her profession..she WITNESSED only HARRESSMENT. .torture..either PHYSICALLY or MENTALLY that hurted her EMOTIONALLY...

Yeey she came bk to SURPRISE him..n as EXPECTED he ws surprised❤️. ..

She scanned the large room and appreciated his choice of elegance and design. Asad was standing near the window, busy on the phone in a light blue shirt and black pants. His black coat was placed on his chair near the window with the table full of files and his laptop in a corner of it. A couch on the other side of the room and a LED TV on the opposite wall of the window.

I like the way u DESCRIBE asad's cabin..specially his coat...its REMINDS me asad's BREAKFAST scene in QH..wen he put his coat on chair...HAYYEEE

N thy kissed..dnt u thnk asad is gtng NAUGHTY day by day☺️..

Haww😲..hw INNOCENT he is na...a handshake or coffee..kk nw dis tym i want ur zoya to comply his demand🥱..

Nw she is his OFFICIAL girlfriend. .iske b rules...ya allah...

Bt dis tym I really want that she wont BACKOFF frm dis relation..

Thy both must try to wrk on RELATION..😳


Last bt not least..abt A/N😳..


I dnt knw y readers narrate the story in other way..frm chappi 1..we witnessed a weird zoya..she was sitting all alone..evn aftr gtng awrds..world ws on her feet..bt she was so lonely..her bitter past still haunts her..

AND SHE IS NOT A PROSTITUTE. .FR GOD SAKE..she is here in dis industry bcz of that evil lady..it ws not her choice..n I thnk ppl knw abt prostitutes. .I dnt thnk there is a need fr ny description abt their nature of wrk..ppl sud b enough mature to understand difference btwn Prostitutes and zoya's character..

We all knw that all big names dfntly witnessed casting couch or harressments ..parde ke piche ki kahani hardum kuch aur hoti hai..n few of these admitted it..their lives are so tough ..thy wrk hard to b in limelite alwys..

M very much thnkful to u that u r wrtng this ff😳..I knw I ws the one hu compelled u to write dark ff..n I dnt hv any regrets😃..bcz u r an amazing wrtr⭐️..specially fr dark ffs..whr story is the real hero..instead of main leads..characters has to react according to the story⭐️..

KIP WRTNG😳 ...

Love

SHREYA😉



Edited by shreya11mehra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
Unres!!


Congrats on the New Thread!!!!!!🥳



Let me start backwards this time!!😉

The Note... 👏
Can i just say that i agree to every word of it?? 👍🏼

Life is definitely not a Fairy Tale!!! It can't be... it's about reality...

so i completely understand your POV and deffo support you on that...!!!👍🏼



and coming to the update...

i loved Nisha's entry in the flashback!!
it's not easy to go against your own mother for you friend... so i really appreciate her for that... i wish she could come a little earlier...

but again, everything has its own reasons... Zoya atleast became The Zoya Farooqui and the whole incident did make her confident enough... 😳

now i really hope, wish and want Asad to bring her out of the feeling that she has lost her 'Everything'... she still has a Long way to go... with him, their love and her self respect by her side... 😳😛


the office scene was so cute!! 😳
i loved the way he enjoyed the kiss from her side yet pretended later...☺️
such a cutie pie he is!!☺️


i wonder what his rules are going to be!😉
waiting for the update Bubba!! 😛

love you!!🤗

Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago
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bubble i m fast this time,reading before the pm 😃
for the note👏 ,i respect u writing this story
and asya is cute of course
nisha 👏 standing up against horrible mother and brother
before calling zoya anything we should kill this people who takes advantage of innocent girl
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She tried to get Zoya force married to her son.. 😲
Thank god Nisha came.. I'm happy that she called the police and her mom and brother arrested.. 😡
Loved Zoya's surprise. Asad is very naughty..
Waiting to know Asad's important rules.. 😉😆

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