Th#6 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 18 to 20 - Page 28

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

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Chappi 10

M very much RELIEVED aftr this update😳

Razia n her kamini aulaad saiqa atlst gt wat thy dn to INNOCENT zoya🥳

HUMZI read the note wat zoya wrt fr her..n gethered her all courage to call her😳..

I love the convo..n the best part is humzi PROMISED her to meet..

I like the flashback dis tym😃

Her BEFKUF GOFFY died..she had nothing left in dat house fr whom she stayed..

Atlst NISHA gv her much needed courage to leave the house😳..

I love this asad hu ORDERED her evey tym..hu DOMINATED on hr😎..

I thnk she need that KINDA PERSON hu gv her gud GUILDENCE to mk her life better..

The whole scene btwn asad n zoya ws very BEAUTIFULLYwritten👏. .

He wanted her to STAY at his plc..bt she ws HESITATING. .

He ws OVERPROTECTED to zoya. .which she liked very much..bt didnt ACCEPT it😳😆..

Overall I love their love dovy MOMENTS❤️😳

off to nxt CHAPPI

LOVE

SHREYA😉

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

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CHAPPI 11

AMMI MERE LOVE BIRDS KI DUSHMAN HAYYE HAYYE😡

temme a thng..y dnt UUU like thm romancing..har tym kabab mai haddi bn jati hai😡

i love the way he tried to STOP her...he was so concerned fr her😳...

she like being cared..n PROTECTED by asad...😉

zoya was so CONCERNED of everyone thnking..wen she vl tk tis step..its so obvious..very nicely written👏

n so happy that she is out of that HOUSE...

bt i KNOW u very well..

u must have PLANNED sumthng very bad fr her...🥱

bt rite now m very HAPPY fr her😃

AWESOME chappi

off to nxt chappi

love

SHREYA😉

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

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CHAPPI 12

very emotional chappi

humzi tried to convince her sister..bt she was so ADAMANT to leave the wahiyaat house..

this nisha's mom is very much weird yaar..🤓 kuch to garbar hai🥱

atlst humzi cm to meet her..thy both wre really EXCITED .,spec. zoya as she met her love one aftr so long tym😊

woohoo..that JAHAPANHAH label is here...i love dis jahapanah six packs ...☺️

oh my my..ur asad is gtng out of CONTROL...thora samhalo isko..😆

off to nxt CHAPPI

love

SHREYA

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

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Frstly thnk u so much fr dedicating the chappi to me😛..

It means a lot to me😳..

Love u too buddy🤗

Bck to update

Chappi 18

Mrs SAXENA ws such a sick lady hu wanted to ruin zoya life by using her own SON😡🤬..

I knw ..nisha wud SAVE her ..thnkfully sumone ws thr fr her alwys in her TOUGHER tyms..

I cnt understand y money bcm so important fr a person that she cn go ny extent to earn it..Is money that much important that a person frgt all humanities..that a person frgt that she herself a human being...hw cn a person frgt that one day god vl punish her fr wrong doings..

Thnkfully nisha stood fr her..AGAINST her mom n her brother👏

Nw that very much TRUE..life is not a CINDRELLA story..its far frm stories..every turn gvs a new twist ..n change DESTINY..to bkoff is nvr a SOLUTION..bt wen we face it..that the best CHALLENGE. .zoya choose to FACE her life..bt on her own terms and CONDITIONS. .

Fr me..she is a WINNER⭐️..hu face evils in her life n still stand STRONG...rite frm her house to her profession..she WITNESSED only HARRESSMENT. .torture..either PHYSICALLY or MENTALLY that hurted her EMOTIONALLY...

Yeey she came bk to SURPRISE him..n as EXPECTED he ws surprised❤️. ..

She scanned the large room and appreciated his choice of elegance and design. Asad was standing near the window, busy on the phone in a light blue shirt and black pants. His black coat was placed on his chair near the window with the table full of files and his laptop in a corner of it. A couch on the other side of the room and a LED TV on the opposite wall of the window.

I like the way u DESCRIBE asad's cabin..specially his coat...its REMINDS me asad's BREAKFAST scene in QH..wen he put his coat on chair...HAYYEEE

N thy kissed..dnt u thnk asad is gtng NAUGHTY day by day☺️..

Haww😲..hw INNOCENT he is na...a handshake or coffee..kk nw dis tym i want ur zoya to comply his demand🥱..

Nw she is his OFFICIAL girlfriend. .iske b rules...ya allah...

Bt dis tym I really want that she wont BACKOFF frm dis relation..

Thy both must try to wrk on RELATION..😳

Last bt not least..abt A/N😳..

I dnt knw y readers narrate the story in other way..frm chappi 1..we witnessed a weird zoya..she was sitting all alone..evn aftr gtng awrds..world ws on her feet..bt she was so lonely..her bitter past still haunts her..

AND SHE IS NOT A PROSTITUTE. .FR GOD SAKE..she is here in dis industry bcz of that evil lady..it ws not her choice..n I thnk ppl knw abt prostitutes. .I dnt thnk there is a need fr ny description abt their nature of wrk..ppl sud b enough mature to understand difference btwn Prostitutes and zoya's character..

We all knw that all big names dfntly witnessed casting couch or harressments ..parde ke piche ki kahani hardum kuch aur hoti hai..n few of these admitted it..their lives are so tough ..thy wrk hard to b in limelite alwys..

M very much thnkful to u that u r wrtng this ff😳..I knw I ws the one hu compelled u to write dark ff..n I dnt hv any regrets😃..bcz u r an amazing wrtr⭐️..specially fr dark ffs..whr story is the real hero..instead of main leads..characters has to react according to the story⭐️..

KIP WRTNG😳 ...

Love

SHREYA😉

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

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Originally posted by: kals82

that was an awesome update iqra...

life is never full of roses... it has it thorns...

what zoya went through was bad.. really bad... but it is just a phase of her life...

she is not clinging to her past... she made a good recovery.. with asad as partner.. she will be completely happy...

the best part of being human.. you have a mind.. which helps u forget the bad times.. and time really heals people to move on...

so happy to people zoya move on...

rape is an accident... you recover... and you move on...

i am so happy u r showing things in a positive light...

even is she forgets and move on.. the surrounding people doesn't let it be...

hope asad helps her.. and now waiting to see the love story...

as usual awesome update

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

still thread 5 is left 🥱

Originally posted by: BeYourself

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Unres!!

Congrats on the New Thread!!!!!!🥳

Let me start backwards this time!!😉

The Note... 👏
Can i just say that i agree to every word of it?? 👍🏼

Life is definitely not a Fairy Tale!!! It can't be... it's about reality...

so i completely understand your POV and deffo support you on that...!!!👍🏼

and coming to the update...

i loved Nisha's entry in the flashback!!

it's not easy to go against your own mother for you friend... so i really appreciate her for that... i wish she could come a little earlier...

but again, everything has its own reasons... Zoya atleast became The Zoya Farooqui and the whole incident did make her confident enough... 😳

now i really hope, wish and want Asad to bring her out of the feeling that she has lost her 'Everything'... she still has a Long way to go... with him, their love and her self respect by her side... 😳😛

the office scene was so cute!! 😳

i loved the way he enjoyed the kiss from her side yet pretended later...☺️

such a cutie pie he is!!☺️

i wonder what his rules are going to be!😉

waiting for the update Bubba!! 😛

love you!!🤗