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Marybarton

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Posted: 10 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: Tannakstar
!!!!!!
I cannot deal .

They had their first hug where she was actually conscious for it! And then THAT KISS. And she was kissing him back.

And Aahil - what a gentleman. He actually pulled back and gave her space. It's so sad that he thinks he's repulsive.

And OMG, YOUR GIF OF KHUSHI HUGGING HERSELF WAS ANOTHER LEVEL OF CUTE! Sanaya was amazing as Khushi, god I miss IPKKKND.

What made me laugh even more was Arnav's GIF when Khushi kept ordering her Laad Governor around LOOOL. Such a great couple. You're quite right. Arnav and khushi's gorgeousness disturbs me too, and by disturb, I mean insanely jealous.

When Sanam dipped her toe in though! Just to challenge Aahil. Wow. That just captured their relationship in one movement AHAHAHA.

Loved it!

I love that gif of Khushi! It just sums her up. Aahil is going through some torture because I am evil 😈. I am also trying to keep both in character. So happy to see you enjoying it.

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Marybarton

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Posted: 10 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: music1
That was a moving one...so close yet so far...wish the love lightning should strike and these two would actually see the other...

Maybe they will, maybe they won't 😈

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Axiom

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Posted: 10 years ago

#203

B E A utiful!

Read all the chapters together - wonderful descriptions, love how the intertwine.

Well done!

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Marybarton

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Posted: 10 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: sageflower7
Mary !!!
This was gorgeous !! I love the way you keep the story tight despite having so many characters to incorporate in...
Aahil is so embarrassed that Sanam thinks so lowly of him. Poor fellow. One never wants their loved one to see them at their worst.

Khushi's a breath of fresh air! Love her and Arnav's chilled out presence, while these two are all muddled in their misery...

Nice balance of gloom and light.
Loved it! ❤️

Thank you Sage, it is great to hear that from you. I hope you are continuing your FF.

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Marybarton

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Posted: 10 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: ssafdar
Just read the last 2 parts and OMG they kissed!!!!!!

I loved the way Sanam brought up the hay romp...she was so matter of fact yet Aahil burned with embrassment and he was leaking heartbreak all over the bedroom.

the dancing in the rain chapter where Aahil playing hero and spoiling the girls fun didn't go down well with ladies and Sanam dipping her toe into the pool to say "what are you going to do about it?" was priceless.

your Gif's are brilliant and bring back great memories.

IMO this is your best story by far...we have Sahil, Arshi and half of Aslok. what could be better?

Haha, leaking heartbreak is right!

Whether Aahil gets mad or not, it is this defiant part of Sanam that he loves. It is his turn on, a girl who defies him.

God I also wish Khushi was around.

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Mandy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#206

Loved this chapter Mary and the kiss was really good. It had the right amount of passion and hesitance. Aahil the player pulls back! Good one.

The Hay romp. That follows Aahil around like a death knell. I brought it up twice in my story. The first time Aahil avoided discussing it. The second time he tried to joke about it, and got Sanam's wrath in exchange.

Here he was just plain humiliated. He didnt know how to react to finding out she knew about that! Especially in the wake of his rejection and heartbreak, him finding out she saw him at a low point just didnt help. He thinks she thinks he is incapable of finer feelings and that is why she rejected him. Poor guy has all but given up hope! It must be tough when you have made poor choices sometimes in life, and then you meet someone you want to change yourself for. But they dont want to know coz they dont think you are capable of changing? That must really break a person's heart. That is what Aahil is experiencing.

Arnav and Khushi, my favourites. I love them and I never get tired of reading of their antics. Hey hope you caught my last update on Dil Jale. I am writing an epilogue for it soon! DO let me know what you thought of the last update when you get time!

Cheers

Mandy

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sweetheart143ja

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Posted: 10 years ago

#207

Plz update soon... Im waiting eagerly...

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Marybarton

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Posted: 10 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: namrutha
Awesome update!! I couldn't get enough of it, so read it twice.
You portrayed their passion for each other quite brilliantly. That kiss was haawtt!! I hoped they won't break free but they did and Sanam thought he regretted kissing her, oh no! .May be in that irritated state of mind she brought up that shameful chapter of his. Hope they will soon clear their MUs.
That whole rain scene was beautiful and I loved how Sanam challenged Aahil and love all those GIFs.

Aww thanks, that's so sweet you read it twice. This part was written with a lot of love.

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Marybarton

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Posted: 10 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: Axiom
B E A utiful!

Read all the chapters together - wonderful descriptions, love how the intertwine.

Well done!

Stick around😊

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

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Posted: 10 years ago

#210

Hey Mary. I know I know I have been a jerk for not posting for 7th and 8th part's comments. I am sorry, I have been busy these days, was sick too, and then I juts forget things so easily, actually these days I am forgetting quite A LOT MANY things 😕😆

So umm, I am gonna be short here. So part 7 was all about how they were celebrating the birthday and all and how Aahil was frustrated with the recent developments in their relationship. Ah, these both, they want to be together but still don't want to be together if that is even possible. Loved the Aahil and his buddies having a bro code there and talking about their stuff. I read it before and now I forgot what actually happened see? Ugh.
I just remember that haystack girl is gonna be coming in the next part 😆

And part 8. WOW! I had to comment on this. Like it was so beautiful. They hugged! OMG! Like it was so outta blue and she was crying because he ignored her and din't talke to her all dayy..aww! Poor baby, she is such a sweetheart. I LOVED how they hugged!! It was so passionate, emotional, and romantic too <33
And then. THEY KISSED. LIKE ACTUAL. OMFG!! They actually kissed, and she kissed BACK!! Damn, it was just gorgeous, and he being all gentleman pulled away he seemed regretful about it :(
These two man, sigh!
And then she appeared on TV as a model! Haha. Lol poor Aahil, how Sanam so directly said, you were having sex with her, He couldn't believe she would say like this. Aahil Aahil Aahil, he is in for a big surprise. Aww baby he was so embarassed, no wonder what he thought about after that, that he doesn't feel deserving of her love :'( Poor baby. He was so broken, he felt so complexed.

And then the morning when she wanted to cuddle aww, would have loved to see that though. And he was drenching in rain thinking about all that happened, he was really broken.
And when he came, he couldn't help but care for her. Lol Sanam is such a tease man. I loved how she dipped her toe to challenge him 😆😆
So looked like they are back to what they actually do, challenge and fight. Yeah thats SaHil for you!

And yes, ARI is whipped, SO DAMN WHIPPED ;)

Loved it Mary!! Can't wait for the next part!! You doing such an awesome job!! Love! <33

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