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SH7_Sunny

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Posted: 11 years ago

#971

udta hi phiru inn hawayon mein kahi

yaa mein jhool jau in ghatayon mein kahi

udta hi phiru inn hawayon mein kahi

yaa mein jhool jau in ghatayon mein kahi

Pehla nasha pehla khumar 🥳

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SH7_Sunny

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Posted: 11 years ago

#972

usne baat ki kuch aise dhang se

sapne de gaya wo hazzaon rang ke

reh jau jaise mein ahar ke aur chume wo mujhe pyar se

pehla nasha pehla khumar

naya pyaar hain naya intezzar

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SH7_Sunny

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Posted: 11 years ago

#973

Originally posted by: maha2012
suno na sangemar mar ki yeh minarein😳❤️

kuch bhi nahi hain aage tumhare 😳 😆

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--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#974

Originally posted by: jas91
Bablu sorry i disappointed u but buddy it was not about being virgin did i said that. I accept its not possible u get a virgin partner & hell its not even my point even. The thing was Zoya was helpless 1st time but if i remember that scene she was already feeling disgusted & felt she lost her soul & frankly i think when a person realizes that they give there full strength 2 fight against injustice. Don't know what u planned in future but i know Zoya never wanted 2 b actress so why d hell she was sleeping wid directors 4 1 whole yr 2 get films. That was really disgusting 4 me 2 read i m sorry again if u feel bad or think i have a sick mind. Myb i m 2 old school. After that rape if she would have fought & walked out of there i wouldn't have complained but her sleeping wid different men was truly cheap i must say. & in d latest updt when that person whoever his name was came & give her money & asked 2 undress herself it felt like she was a prostitute so didn't she felt disgusted serving herself as a pleasure giving body. This might have been happening from 1 yr & she was meekly doing it that's gross. Whatever u say i still say she doesn't deserve Asad cuz if she would have loved him she would have told d whole truth b4 giving him false hopes didn't she thought after knowing her this dark side will Asad accept her. She would have 1st told d truth than started d relationship.

Things like such happens 2 ppl who r locked up otherwise nobody is that dumb 2 let them 2 rule over them.

Having said that baby don't get this 2 heart & ever forget i love u regardless of d fact that we have difference of opinion about this story. I still love u & will always & it doesn't change d fact that i love ur writing style. Hope it won't affect our frndship.😭

I think i m very old school

& Trust me Sasir just liked d post i was not bharoing anybody's kaan here.😳😆

well Zoya never wanted to run away from the house too but she did ,,

its all unplanned for her !!

and as I told u again I wil lrepeat the same thing whether she would have done movies or not she was trapped in Mrs Saxena's web !!

and she wasn't strong enough to fight with her ,,

and how the hell do u want her to fight ?? at least think about it ??

she isn't having anything to fight with !!

and where do u want her to walk out buddy ?? I am not getting where u want her to escape to ??

she did feel disgusted but she is helpless she can't do anything ,,

and coming to prostitutes well honestly speaking I respect them too ,,

they are suffering too and no one knows what made them go towards this kinda job !!

coming to Asad deserving or not ,,

he is not some stupid man she did all the time run away from him but he is the one forcing her into everything ,,

and what kinda girl will tell about this disgusting past to a stranger ?? she will tell him when the right time comes ,, right now she is just unsure of her feelings even !!

no its not gonna affect anything ,,I was just discussing my POV with u and u r free to discuss it with me (:

yeah I know that already soo don't worry about that LoL !!

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SH7_Sunny

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Posted: 11 years ago

#975

khambe jaisi khadi hai

shola hai phooljhadi hai

pattakhe ki ladi hai

Ankhon mail ghussa,

Labon pe gaali,

Dekho zaraa khudko samajhti hai kya. 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

#976

Originally posted by: cale
nice update
Then why does Nisha and Google doesn't agree on it ...this is🤣🤣
and past...how low nisha's mother will stoop?? sick lady,😡😡 i hate her so much
i m glad zoya stood up for herself
update soon

haha thanks !!

I am glad that you liked it 😳

yup she is gonna fight back now !!

will try updating sooon 😊

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treasure11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#977

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

kuch bhi nahi hain aage tumhare 😳 😆

aj se dil pe raj tumhareee

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--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#978

Originally posted by: jazsidhu
wonderfull n amazing...
zoya found out the meaning of wat he told her...
asad is flirting with zoya...
luv it...
zoya took a stand for herself n hope she will fight for wat she believe n wat is right...
wonder wat is the lady up too...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

Thanks 😳

I am glad that you liked it !!

Will try updating soon 😊