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Posted: 11 years ago
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So beautiful and heart felt.
You are very talented. Do write more.

I love poetry that tugs the heart and yours surely did.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

I'm writing this with non existent internet..am at my Nani's for EID!!!


SPARKLE!!!!!



I've missed you too my darling sweetheart!!!!



What an entry yo!



Brilliant brilliant BRILLIANT!!!!


THE BESTEST SUPER DUPER!



Uss ankho mei nami
Hame hargis qubool nahi
Par nami mitaye bhi to kaise
Hume ijazat jo HAI NAHI ...


:'(




Truly heartfelt!


Yes you see the change I did to the end bit...that's just for rhyming purpose! You know me and rhymes.



Awww my sparkly sparkle!!!


How do you do it!!


Write with such brilliance! Your words are beautiful and their meaning when out together...Just hauntingly beautiful.


How!




Oh you!!


I wish I can say more!


But time (and internet!) is limited!



Love you so much!!!


SO VERY HAPPY TO HAVE YOU BACK!!


YOU HAVE NO IDEA!



HUGS!!!!




YOU ROCK!!



Mwahhh!


And...!!!


EID MUBARAK!!!!


Farz! *sigh* Finally!

Missed you like crazy!

Hee, Nani's are cool but yeah, limited internet...been there done that. 3G and all!

Hey! You made it rhyme. Like actually. It took me forever to rhyme some words there and you rhymed it like a boss! Wow, you're awesome, you know that :D

I'm sooo happy to be back! Yeah, we can talk now and Spam ATs and FFs!

I'm really veeery happy!

And yeah! Eid Mubarak! Actually a friend of mine had this iftari at her parents, and it was simply delicious...and now I'm complaining why am I not a good cook(I used to think I was, oh well). OMG the food!

Hugs and kissed! Muah!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Just coz I still can...!!!



Uss ankho mei koi sharab si
Jo ishq ko junoon bana de
Uss ehsaas mei koi jaadu si
To khud ko bekaboo bana de



Kabil-e-tareef!



Go buy yourself a tub of chocolate chip cookies ice cream from me.



You're my Junoon!



Beautiful.



Jo ishq ko Junoon bana de..



Imma want a hug!!!


Love!!!!


Ok, I'm having my treat :D

Hehe, thanks for that again!!


Muaaah! Here's a virtual hug <o>
Those are my hands :p the < and >

Hehe! Bye!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Saffi-Surbhi-

Ghum se hame ghum nahi par ishq se koi bacha le very touching poem yaar

loved it
welcome back :)


Thanku thanku thanku!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Beautiful Poem! Ethereal! ❤️


- Mrina <3


Thank You Mrina!

And did you update Zehnaseeb? Of course you did *runs to read*

Thanks for commenting!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

So beautiful and heart felt.
You are very talented. Do write more.

I love poetry that tugs the heart and yours surely did.


Thanks for saying that! And your poems are just perfect! Your works describe your username so well!

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