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Posted: 11 years ago
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How many centuries have passed? I mean what is going on?! Seriously. It's been like three weeks I've not logged in! THREE weeks. Gad, I love this place!
So here was a short poem I wrote, in Hindi. Hindi is not my first language so bear me. This poem is about the eyes that mesmerized Ahil for the first time and SJ has lovely eyes <3
Miss you Farz :) :*

Written from Ahil's perspective :)






~Wo Ankhe~


Ek ehsaas si hai
Jo dil mai chaha gayi
Ye jism mei jaan si
Ayi aur behe chali

Uss ankho mei hai musibat
Takra gaye hum gam se
Jab uss ankho ne ki zurm
Iss rookhi si dil pei

Man chala teri ore
Kohi isse waapas kheech le
Gum se hame gum nahi
Par ishq se kohi bacha le

Uss ankho mei koi sharab si
Jo ishq ko junoon bana de
Uss ehsaas mei koi jaadu si
To khud ko bekaboo bana de

Uss ankho mei nami
Hame hargis qubool nahi
Par nami mitaye bhi to kaise
Hume ijazat jo nahi hai

Muskurati hai wo ankhe jab
Hame aur kuch nahi raazi
Aarop bhi to kaise lagaye
Jap aap to hai shehzadi

Bhikhra hoon mai, afsos, mai kya karoon
Mujhe kya hua hai, pata nahi
Par uss ankhe ko muskurate dikhta hu to
Hame kohi etraaz bhi toh nahi

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That was hard to type, damn auto-correct!
Tell me how it was :) Back after a long-long time!



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ethereal.Surbhi

beautiful poem. welcome back


😃🤗 Thank You!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice poem..
surbhi indeed has very beautiful eyes
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh my gawdd!! That was just beautiful! <3 :')
This is such splendid writing! Truly truly DIVINE! <3

Uss ankho mei nami
Hame hargis qubool nahi
Par nami mitaye bhi to kaise
Hume ijazat jo nahi hai

This. Was. :') Truly truly heart touching!
Ijazat tumhe hi hai Aahil miyan. par ijazat lena bhi toh tumhe ganwara nahi 😆
Edited by Prags_Sociopath - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I'm writing this with non existent internet..am at my Nani's for EID!!!


SPARKLE!!!!!



I've missed you too my darling sweetheart!!!!



What an entry yo!



Brilliant brilliant BRILLIANT!!!!


THE BESTEST SUPER DUPER!



Uss ankho mei nami
Hame hargis qubool nahi
Par nami mitaye bhi to kaise
Hume ijazat jo HAI NAHI ...


:'(




Truly heartfelt!


Yes you see the change I did to the end bit...that's just for rhyming purpose! You know me and rhymes.



Awww my sparkly sparkle!!!


How do you do it!!


Write with such brilliance! Your words are beautiful and their meaning when out together...Just hauntingly beautiful.


How!




Oh you!!


I wish I can say more!


But time (and internet!) is limited!



Love you so much!!!


SO VERY HAPPY TO HAVE YOU BACK!!


YOU HAVE NO IDEA!



HUGS!!!!




YOU ROCK!!



Mwahhh!


And...!!!


EID MUBARAK!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just coz I still can...!!!



Uss ankho mei koi sharab si
Jo ishq ko junoon bana de
Uss ehsaas mei koi jaadu si
To khud ko bekaboo bana de



Kabil-e-tareef!



Go buy yourself a tub of chocolate chip cookies ice cream from me.



You're my Junoon!



Beautiful.



Jo ishq ko Junoon bana de..



Imma want a hug!!!


Love!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ghum se hame ghum nahi par ishq se koi bacha le very touching poem yaar
loved it
welcome back :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful Poem! Ethereal! ❤️

- Mrina <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ATH_KTM_543

nice poem..

surbhi indeed has very beautiful eyes

Thanks! SJ is simply lovely!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

Oh my gawdd!! That was just beautiful! <3 :')

This is such splendid writing! Truly truly DIVINE! <3

Uss ankho mei nami
Hame hargis qubool nahi
Par nami mitaye bhi to kaise
Hume ijazat jo nahi hai

This. Was. :') Truly truly heart touching!
Ijazat tumhe hi hai Aahil miyan. par ijazat lena bhi toh tumhe ganwara nahi 😆


😆 Ijazat tumhe hi hai Aahil miyan. par ijazat lena bhi toh tumhe ganwara nahi . This.

I literally suck at Hindi😆 Guess not!

And thank you for saying that! Muah!😳

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