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beautiful story
i dont have words to appreciate this wonderful piece of writing...tooo awsume

finally two lonely souls together
thank u sooo much dear for such wonderful story

loads of lov
shona

That was an amazing story...loved it to bits😳...the confession...their trip to Goa☺️...

This was a treat Di 😃
Totally loved this long update.
And what a beautiful end:)
AsYa confessing in the swimming pool was epic :)
Loved the last line. Amazing story Di 👏

Lots of Love,

Vinita

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

Res 😃
Unres 😳

Aapi !! Huge jadoo ki jhappi !! 🤗 u did a fantastic job !! ❤️
It was too cute to see Zoya drooling over him !! 😆
Loved the way she put him on the corner with her questions ! 👏 but even his reasons were understandable ! 😕
Why do AsYa always land up in funny situations ? 😆 confessing in the swimming pool ! It rocked ! 😎 😳
I love Maya ! She really is a sweetheart !! ❤️ she cares about Asad the way she would with her own son 😳
So they r going to Goa !
Aapi, i'm amazed by your GK on India ! I mean that i read many of ur FFs and i always was surprised with ur knowledge about that country where u never went ! (Did u ? 😆 )
Awww it must have been beautiful to see the sunset on the beach !
Zoya is still having effects of what she has been theough, sad that this would keep comibg in her mind 😭
Nice to see Asad and Zoya spending quality time with each other ! ❤️
And their little holiday gets over because they have to go back for the court hearing
Finally those bas***ds got punished and that too without Zoya having to testify ! 👏
Loved their discussion at the end, even though Asad has to leave her there, after those 2 weeks thet'll be back together forever ! ❤️ and then ut ended with a cherry on the top with both of them voicing their love for each other ! ❤️

Loved this story a lot !!! ❤️ cant believe that its already over ! good things never last ! 😆 beautiful story this was !! Loved it to the core but still not more than u !! 🤗 ❤️

PS : when is ur next piece of work coming ? 😳

Originally posted by: ap3h7u

That was an amazing story...loved it to bits😳...the confession...their trip to Goa☺️...

the ending was perfect😳...waiting for your next story😳

Originally posted by: vinita459

This was a treat Di 😃
Totally loved this long update.
And what a beautiful end:)
AsYa confessing in the swimming pool was epic :)
Loved the last line. Amazing story Di 👏

Lots of Love,

Vinita

Originally posted by: fanraya

Thanks for writing this amazing story, really beautiul👏

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

Badi Aapu !!!!
Loved it!!!
Asad he is just perfect ...
Maya - i love her !!!!!
Zoya u r strong girl wid Asad beside you!!!
I loved it!!!
They are just a perfect couple!!!!!
I love u so much!!🤗...
p.s:my like button nt working 😭

Originally posted by: jas91

so d culprits were punished

Zoya was relieved after d justice

she has 2 go back 2 d clinic 4 completing treatment

Asad told her he'll take her home where they'll put d past behind

finally they said ILU

awesome end

loved d story😃

Originally posted by: lovebluez

Thank You for this mini SS!! Keep writing!! Love reading your stories!!😊