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Posted: 11 years ago
Main bahut emotional hogay 1st half mein...
Pata nai kyon !!!! I felt sumthng...
Wonderful updtd thy were
I loved both d updtd
2nd half was lvly.. Asad *sob*
Woh akhela ttha... Liked Maya alot... She is vry Nc..


Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsm update.
Superb one.
Luvd it.
Cont asap.
Thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res

Unress

Saima Di!πŸ€—

Happy Friendship Day!πŸ€—

The update was AWESOME..πŸ‘

Two long parts to read and I still want to read more..😳

Zoya is staying at Asad's home..😳 Asad's home sounds beautiful.. But poor him.. Has to live alone and lead a lonely life..

Maya is really nice..😳 Introducing to everybody so that Zoya doesn't scared..😊

He wants Zoya to be formal but when she really is he gets disturbed..πŸ˜” Uff he is so complicated..πŸ˜†

Poor Zoya!! What she must have gone through during testifying..πŸ˜• Asad was by her side as always..😳

Maya talked to Zoya about Asad.. πŸ˜ƒNice that she told what a bewakoof Asad is..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Zoya is going to stay for some more time..😊 She has realised and will fight for her love I hope..😳

Asad taking a leave is quite shocking.. πŸ˜ƒHe is so sincere.. Wish I was like him..πŸ˜†

Great update Di..😳

Waiting for the next..😊

Love you! ❀️
Edited by pinks2911 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice updates
Asad and zoya the feelings he is fighting it wouldn't indulge it and she doesn't know what it is
She asked for asad to be by the side and he can't give her and answer she doesn't want Dr.Khan
When he walked away she felt as if a part of her is lost
Aman asked him what is going on he say not phong more than doctor patient relation and that is all it would be
Zoya is hurt by his indifference when she came to visit in Bhopal and he couldn't help being sad when they drove off he couldn't work anymore
So zoya have healed and progress well she is a totally different person now
She have convince herself there is nothing between her and asad he is just her doctor and as she was going through a phase she was dependant on him
Really is that true ...asad and haider comes to take her to testify and asad is bowled over seeing her
So zoya pays asad no attention and he is feeling a pain inside and wonder y is she ignoring me
Zoya blown away with where she will be staying when she learn it is asad house she is shocked
Asad just 24 hr to hold it together she is tht close
Oh she thanks him for having her intoeducemto,everyone so she is not scared
They have a silent lunch and now she wants to walk in the garden with him πŸ˜‰
Oh the walk in the garden is going good zoya compliment him thank him is grateful to him
And he is stuck he questioned her y is she so formal units she behaving like they r doctor patient
Isn't that what u r asad oh he walked away saying he have overlook the boundaries
Oh maya is sad when she learn zoya will be leaving she wished she wasn't his patient
Omg maya tells her about asad reactions abt her when he talks to aman every spare time he has
And how he looks at her and how she believes he has fallen for zoya but wouldn't step over his protocol
Oh zoya is scared he comforts her and calm her they speak through their eyes what the lips can't say
No one can sleep that nite she tossed and he prayed for strength of her to get through the court and a little for him to watch her walk away
So zoya was able to identify her attackers from a line up,with asad full support
The lawyer wants her to stay in town in case she has to testify so a week or more at asad house😊
Maya asked asad to tell zoya what he feels he reprimand her
Zoya remembers his support and reassurance he give her at the police station and know what she feels of him is more but he would never step ove his duty but she is determined once she is not his patient anymore she is not leaving without a fight for what this May be
Wow he took a leave of absence for her a whole 2 wks
She slept on sofa waiting for him like a wife maya is pushing him
He is not taking the bait oh zoya wakes up refreshed and looking for. Asad
He is in gym emmm shirtless hopefully
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Posted: 11 years ago
aww
nice
loved it
zoya is determined to give it a try
yayyy
plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sis, I loved the update. I like the fact that Zoya will be fighting for whatever is between them at the moment and I hope she wacks his head for the delay, after he admits his feelings.

Glad that she tried her level best to act formally with him and it did hurt her.


I loved the 2 times he's trying to rebuild his confidence telling himself that she is there for less than 24 hours and then asking Allah to give him strength too to see her walk off.


I love him here for his desperation to stay away from her which he is not able to keep.


Loved it so much sis πŸ€—
Posted: 11 years ago
Its Amaazing...i cant even express what i feel :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
AWESOME UPDT SAIMA DI PLZ UPDT NEXT PART VERRY SOON
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...πŸ‘

Just love it...😊

Update nxt part soon...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
'You really don't see it...he will never admit it because he is bound by his own protocols...in all the years I have been here I have never seen him worry so much for anyone, at the time I didn't know it was you but every spare moment he had he would be calling Dr Aman and asking about you, the way he smiled when he heard you were doing well, the concern, the panic he displayed when he heard something bad...if I didn't know any better Zoya I would say that Dr. Asad Ahmed Khan has fallen for you'.


Thank You Maya Jee! πŸ‘


"Asad rested his cheek on the top of her head and as she started to calm down he felt his heart beat in sync with hers, drowning deeper and deeper in each other's scents they couldn't bring themselves to pull apart."



"At that precise moment Zoya looked deep into his eyes, they both stood there for a few moments relaying their deepest emotions, their silent stare managed to say what they would never be able to say to one another using words."

*sigh*


'will you be ok to carry on staying at my place?' Zoya nodded.


Dr. Khan did you really think that was a necessary question? πŸ˜‰



'as of next week I will no longer be your patient Dr Asad Ahmed Khan...and after that I will make you break through that barrier that has divided us...Allah brought me to you for a reason...and if the reason is this then I am not going to walk away without giving it at least one try'.


And someone sees the light!


'for you silly, he wanted to make sure he was here with you until your case was over'


Dr. Khan, really? πŸ₯³


You must think I don't see anything beyond AsYa.


I do


I really do


I thought the chapter was remarkable. ⭐️


Another extraordinary women added to the equation, Maya - Amazing!


P.S Is Zoya visiting the gym too? ☺️ πŸ˜†


P.S.S I wont ask when you would be updating again, I hope soon tough. 😳

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