Mini SS - Broken: Part 5 (Completed) Page 61 - Page 31

Created

Last reply

Replies

535

Views

42.5k

Users

75

Likes

1.3k

Frequent Posters

Divya.S.R thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

kya hua??🤣
Saima-Syed thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

Res 😃
Unres 😳

Superb amazing update !! 👏 throughout it i couldnt help but thinking about what is coming next and next and next but then it ended ! 😆
Even Humaira noticed about the little changements in Dr. Khan, but he's still that ZIDDI ! 😆
Sweet ! Zoya staying at his place ! 😳
Ghar agayi toh Asad aur bhi counscious aur 'stressed' ho gaya hai ! 😆
Poor Asad ! It must have been hard for him to live in such a big villa alone ! thats why he's so lonely
It was very thoughtful from Asad to introduce her to his staff so that she dosent get scared 😳
Ab jab Zoya formally behave kar rahi hai toh Asad irritate ho raha hai ! Serves u right ! 😆
Maya is really sweet 😃
Finally somebody to tell Zoya how complicated man Asad is and would never admit his feelings ! 👏 😆 its good that she told because Zoya was quite surprised hearing that 😳
Awww... Poor she ! She was si nervous and scared more like frightened with all that ! 😭 at least she had Asad to hold her ! 👏
She did all that with Asad's support and now she needs to stay some more time for the court hearing at Asad's place ! 🥳
Finally Zoya has decided to fught with him for their love! 👏
So Asad took holidays for the first time and that shocked everybody ! 😆 how dutiful he is towards his job ! I'm proud of him ! 👏
The new morning felt like a new beginning for them ! 😃 ❤️
Loved the update Aapi !! ❤️ sad that it would be ending with the next update so i'm not sure to ask u to update soon ! 😆

Love u Aapi !! 🤗 a lot more than what u imagine ! ❤️


I don't think saying thank you would suffice

Am so grateful little Api, I was just saying to Divya that I am not happy with the way the chapter turned out.

I fitted a lot into one part, so wasn't sure if I over loaded it too much.

Lol yes next will be the last one but similar to this in two parts...if it stretches will make it three.

Am aiming to start writing it and completing it by Monday, if I do will post Monday night if not then pakka on Tuesday

🤗
Saima-Syed thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Little Api why the sad face
asifiqbalsh thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
Wow lovely update
Zoya decided not to listen to her heart
She reached asad home & surprised to see a beautiful architecture
She was amazed by asad behaviour towards maya & others
Maya told her that asad really felt for her as she saw concern in his eyes
He was happy when ur sessions go well
Maya told her that he was fallen in love with u
Asad & zoya reached police station with haider. She recognised the person who raped other girl
When she told abt the other person who hit her, asad wanted to kill him
He controlled himself for zoya. He hold her & give her the comfort which she required
Humeira & zoya met & she told zoya that asad took annual leave first time in two yrs for her
She was happy to listen that & admired him more
Maya told asad to told her as his eyes telling everything
She told him that zoya was not his patient technical & he said no to start that topic again
Nice maya asad way of understanding
Zoya heared everything & decided after finished case she will try
Maya was surprised when zoya asked abt asad as his first name not as Dr Khan
She told zoya to call him asad as very few people called him with his name
Hope asad will confess soon to zoya
Thanks for pm
Saima-Syed thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Wow lovely update
Zoya decided not to listen to her heart
She reached asad home & surprised to see a beautiful architecture
She was amazed by asad behaviour towards maya & others
Maya told her that asad really felt for her as she saw concern in his eyes
He was happy when ur sessions go well
Maya told her that he was fallen in love with u
Asad & zoya reached police station with haider. She recognised the person who raped other girl
When she told abt the other person who hit her, asad wanted to kill him
He controlled himself for zoya. He hold her & give her the comfort which she required
Humeira & zoya met & she told zoya that asad took annual leave first time in two yrs for her
She was happy to listen that & admired him more
Maya told asad to told her as his eyes telling everything
She told him that zoya was not his patient technical & he said no to start that topic again
Nice maya asad way of understanding
Zoya heared everything & decided after finished case she will try
Maya was surprised when zoya asked abt asad as his first name not as Dr Khan
She told zoya to call him asad as very few people called him with his name
Hope asad will confess soon to zoya
Thanks for pm


Thank u so much Asif 😊
Miss-Appy thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed



I don't think saying thank you would suffice

Am so grateful little Api, I was just saying to Divya that I am not happy with the way the chapter turned out.

I fitted a lot into one part, so wasn't sure if I over loaded it too much.

Lol yes next will be the last one but similar to this in two parts...if it stretches will make it three.

Am aiming to start writing it and completing it by Monday, if I do will post Monday night if not then pakka on Tuesday

🤗


Dont say that because u dont even need to thank me ! Aapi i only comment with heart and thats why u might see me on other threads with shorter comments, but i only give big comments when i feel like it was special thus it deserves praises ! U can say that the longer my comment is, the more i loved the update ! ❤️

U dont need to worry because i seriously loved it ! Or else i wouldnt give such long comment ! 😆 and if i loved it so much, then i'm sure that everybody will love it ! ❤️

It wasnt over loaded, it was perfect !

Then i'll have to wait till monday or tuesday ! *sigh*
Miss-Appy thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed



Little Api why the sad face


Its not sad face 😆

I'm telling Divya that i'm looking at her szying 'whatever', then ignoring her ! 😆

Kyon SR ? 😉 kidding ! 😆
Divya.S.R thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik


Its not sad face 😆

I'm telling Divya that i'm looking at her szying 'whatever', then ignoring her ! 😆

Kyon SR ? 😉 kidding ! 😆


Ignoring me!! 😡

aur kuch soch ke keh nahi payi toh SR... so Kiddish city.. naya soch nahi sakti??
ek mila toh usi ko pakad kar bait gai.. 🤣🤣🤣
Miss-Appy thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Divya.S.R



Ignoring me!!😡

aur kuch soch ke keh nahi payi toh SR...so Kiddish city.. naya soch nahi sakti??
ek mila toh usi ko pakad kar bait gai..🤣🤣🤣


🤣 🤣
Arey main kuch aur kyon sochoungi jab mujhe pata hai ke tumhe kitna napasand hai yeh nickname ! 🤣 🤣
vinita459 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
The update was great as usual di. I loved the part when zoya was ignoring him and Asad felt little jealous seeing her talking to Aman. He just looks so sexy when he is jealous.

Wow zoya came to stay at a Asad's house 😊 and she'll be staying longer. He is too stubborn to admit his feelings. Glad zoya is ready to fight for her love.

Some of my favorite moments from this update. When Asad goes to Zoya's room with dinner and sees her praying 😳 I don't know but I just loved this scene so much. Also when he comes back at night and sees her sleeping on the sofa. My my he carries her to the bedroom 😳

I just can't wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon :)

Related Topics

Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse · 1 years ago

[NOCOPY] Hello everyone! Happy to be here. I was searching for an opportunity to be here with all of you as a member after a long time as writer...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".