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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetluck

Amazing...👏

everything was beautifully penned...be it Asad's inner feelings confusion or Zoya's angst n restlessness ...👏👏

she is so cute...n fighter of course...Asad help her out soon 😳😆

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Thank you so so much am really glad u liked it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank u 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice update

So zoya having to love through her ordeal all over again in her therapy session
Asad is feeling things he is not suppose to be feeling
Aman thinks she will not be ready and that asad should tell her about testifying
Oh she wants to go home she asking him to take her home
Omg the painting session she painted everything she faced it is all their on canvas
She has not been eating he see she has lost weight
He keeps caressing her hand tell her to fight he knows she is a fighter
Continue want to see if asad will step over doctor/patient relation


Thank u so much Anopama

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome story
Very well written parts
Zoya suffered too much & asad as a doctor helped her
Asad started feeling but restrain himself as it is against ethics
Haider recovered zoya & investigated on that case
Humeira helped zoya during starting days
Asad left her in his private clinic
She made a picture & took out all emotions inside her
All doctors & nurses including asad was shocked to see
She gain consciousness & saw asad in front of her
Continue soon plz
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Thank u so much Asif

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank you 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shonajain

wonderful part dear
finally zoe is progressing n she has responded wondrrfully in her firsst session only...great

she misses asad n only trusts him...dats amazing part
the painting depicted her past...which she couldnt speak she painted...wonderful concept

waiting for next part
continue soon dear
lov
shona


Thank you so much Shona

I really appreciate your feedback

Lots of love 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsm update.
Luvd it.
Cont asap.
Thanx 4 d pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice update...👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AMMY12

awsm update.
Luvd it.
Cont asap.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.


Thank you Ammy 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank you so much 😊

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