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Posted: 11 years ago
Mind blowing!! I must say!!
this is the most sophisticated case for any girls!!
I have some experienced relating this issue!!
I sometimes go to NGO's and found some young women who are assaulted physically and mentally!!
Worst part is their family abandoned them after they were rescued!!
Some never comes out of this trance and become mentally unstable!!
but some are real fighter!! hat's off to them!!
Zoya's angst was written beautifully and I am already craving for next part!!
Thank you so much!! for this wonderful story!! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing...👏
everything was beautifully penned...be it Asad's inner feelings confusion or Zoya's angst n restlessness ...👏👏

she is so cute...n fighter of course...Asad help her out soon 😳😆

Thanks for pm..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
So zoya having to love through her ordeal all over again in her therapy session
Asad is feeling things he is not suppose to be feeling
Aman thinks she will not be ready and that asad should tell her about testifying
Oh she wants to go home she asking him to take her home
Omg the painting session she painted everything she faced it is all their on canvas
She has not been eating he see she has lost weight
He keeps caressing her hand tell her to fight he knows she is a fighter
Continue want to see if asad will step over doctor/patient relation

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome story
Very well written parts
Zoya suffered too much & asad as a doctor helped her
Asad started feeling but restrain himself as it is against ethics
Haider recovered zoya & investigated on that case
Humeira helped zoya during starting days
Asad left her in his private clinic
She made a picture & took out all emotions inside her
All doctors & nurses including asad was shocked to see
She gain consciousness & saw asad in front of her
Continue soon plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful part dear
finally zoe is progressing n she has responded wondrrfully in her firsst session only...great

she misses asad n only trusts him...dats amazing part
the painting depicted her past...which she couldnt speak she painted...wonderful concept

waiting for next part
continue soon dear
lov
shona
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed


Lol

U can start pestering about that from next Monday 😉



Nahi not that that i will not pester you for, the one you did for me today (proofreading) 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PriyaKabhi

Thanks for Update.

It was so nice part.
Asad(KSG) was thinking about Zoya and wished to get well soon,It was so nice.
Zoya was screaming in fear,it was so sad.
Aman and Sasha was so nice,they both taking care of Zoya so nice.
Asad(KSG) and Zoya message part was so nice.
Zoya's painting part was very Interesting,she said through this about the incident,it was so nice.
Zoya unconscious because she didn't eat anything and she piling it in Dustbin,it was so sad.
Zoya gain Conscious and she became happy to see Asad(KSG),it was so nice.😊
Please Update Next part soon,I am waiting here.
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(ASAD will be KSG ONLY,ASYA=KABHI ONLY,MISSING ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)
PRIYAKABHI.


Thank u so much Priya

I really appreciate your feedback

Lots of love 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank u 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _Tanaz_

Amazing update. Loved it.


Thank u so much 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: swapno

Mind blowing!! I must say!!

this is the most sophisticated case for any girls!!
I have some experienced relating this issue!!
I sometimes go to NGO's and found some young women who are assaulted physically and mentally!!
Worst part is their family abandoned them after they were rescued!!
Some never comes out of this trance and become mentally unstable!!
but some are real fighter!! hat's off to them!!
Zoya's angst was written beautifully and I am already craving for next part!!
Thank you so much!! for this wonderful story!! 😊


Wow

It's a sad fact and even sadder reality of today's world...families 😡 Why would you Abandon your own will never understand

Thank u so much for liking it 😊

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