CLOSING THE DOORS....

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Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Aww..thank you so much Soup 🤗 What a beautiful poem this is! ❤️

How well executed were the last two episodes! Engaging till the very end.

Now we await the journey which the very artistic montage symbolizes 😳 😆

Now off to read 'The Story Of Ring' 😳

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Tamara27

@Tamara27

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

This was beautiful. So sad though...

And yes please, when will that damn montage change?

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Avie

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Poem was beautifully written ❤️

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: chicksoup

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Achha Good Night boleee..

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- 23 July 2014 at 7:01am

^ Meri night hi hai 🤣

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BeIndependent

@BeIndependent

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Beautiful poem...👏

last episode was really good...Brilliant acting by all.👏..specially sahezad 😳👏.else he is known for only two expressions..😆...SJ ...she was excellent mirror scene was my fav too...wonderful direction + awesome acting..⭐️...Ahil n rehaan scene was good too...😃...All the three main characters pain was nicely shown and it has touched the heart..😳

so true montage is so funny and doesn't suits now...they should change it...😆

once again nice poem...😃

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vm17

@vm17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

[QUOTE=chicksoup]

This one is for Nikita and Divs...and for anyone else feeling sad about the twist in the tale...😊

This is a thought that I have been wanting to write down for a long time. For some reason, I could not write it. This is inspired by the scene where Aahil closes the door (symbolic of the doors to his heart) after he watches Sanam leaving with Nida's sandals. The pain in his heart is so great that he cannot see Sanam's tears of humiliation just then.

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CLOSING THE DOORS...

She walked in uninvited...

I had not known doors should be guarded...

She laughed, she sang, she danced her way around...

Her footproints scattered all over my soul...

They lured me on to a new journey...

I followed, abandoning all caution...

I lived a dream...

Alas! Dreams are shortlived...

I groped around in darkness...

A nightmare it had turned into...

I reached out...

She turned elsewhere...

And she left...

As easily as she came in...

Leaving no room...

For anyone else...

Reality strikes...

I am all alone...

She will not walk...

With me...

Wisdom comes late...

I lock the doors...

But her trails are indelible...

On my heart...

Each memory shines brighter...

The thorns remain sharp...

I have paid the price...

For not guarding my soul...

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For quite some time I have been wondering why the montage has not changed! Even today, I burst out laughing 🤣when the show started, because this is a wedding track...and we have the bride wielding the rolling pin😆...I mean, all through the intense track, this montage has stayed...😳

Aahil simply puts on his shades...he has closed the doors to his heart...his eyes are the mirror to his soul- he is not letting Sanam see what he is trying to bury...he is confident...he can handle this.

Sanam is not giving in...she knows she is her own master...nothing can keep her down...especially when she knows she has done nothing wrong!

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Apart from this, I found the marriage track very very nicely done... THE STAR OF TODAY's EPISODE WAS SJ for me...in the MIRROR SCENE...she looked like a baby...how is it possible to look so young all of a sudden? She looked like a teenager❤️...and the attire was beyond best!👏 Funny that I drooled over KVB when Sanam said QH and am drooling over SJ the day Aahil said QH!😳

Rehaan was brilliant! - Not an expression out of the way...👏

He blames only one person- his Ammi- and shuts this chapter in his life! In fact, he vows there will be no more chapters on love! But the ring on close up😲...well, the ring😃...I could write another story on the ring!...ofc, that does not have to be the story Gul is writing!!!😆

Wait...I might write a short post on that too...

Here goes...😳

The Story Of the Ring..

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/4104901/the-story-of-the-ring

Behind Closed Doors...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/4104921/behind-closed-doors

[/QUOTE]Beautiful poem capturing Ahil's state of mind.I loved it.Aaj to we got a treat tree posts👏Yay .

I loved the nikah.I think SJ was wearing the same outfit which SI wore in RR.Surbhi loked very pretty inside the veil.Ahil,Sanam and Rehan's acting was brilliant.I loved Ahil.So many emotions flitting on his face before he said QH.He was amazing.I did'nt like his dress.Tanu as usual played her cards well.Ahil was concerned about Nida.He is a true gentleman.Billi trapped Ahil by saying Nida ran away and Rehan knows that the reason for His dreams turning into dust is his owm mom.He does'nt wear blinkers like Ahil.He did'nt blame his Ahil bhai or Sanam,only his ammi.

Iloved the fb's of Rehan'Ahil and Sanam.the bg song was nice too.

What a contrast there is between Ahil's and billi's views on nikah.He says that it is a lifelong "waada"and acc.to Tanveer it is only "nikah" a contract.

Billi has effectively turned Ahil against Sanam by telling him that Sanam married him for money but she conveniently did'nt give the reason.I hope she does'nt turn Rehan againt SAhil too.But i think somehow Rehan will be the reason for billi's downfall and it would be a fitting punishment for tanu

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GitaIyer

@GitaIyer

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Lovely Poem Soup.

Ahil had promised not to love her.

Now he has promised to hate her.

He lost faith in Sanam.

Rehaan had promised to love her.

Now, he has promised never to love again.

He lost faith in love.

Sanam always accepts whatever Allah gave her.

She knows there is no love written for her. oNly if she knew.

Believe in yourself and in your Allah Miyaan is the only advise for you now.

You have beautifully explained the significance of the montage. Even I was expecting a montaage change and was pleasantly surprised to see the Sanam with belan. But yes, it is an indicator of the future track and an assurance to us that there wont be any abuse in this married life.