CLOSING THE DOORS....

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This one is for Nikita and Divs...and for anyone else feeling sad about the twist in the tale...😊

This is a thought that I have been wanting to write down for a long time. For some reason, I could not write it. This is inspired by the scene where Aahil closes the door (symbolic of the doors to his heart) after he watches Sanam leaving with Nida's sandals. The pain in his heart is so great that he cannot see Sanam's tears of humiliation just then.



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CLOSING THE DOORS...

She walked in uninvited...

I had not known doors should be guarded...

She laughed, she sang, she danced her way around...

Her footproints scattered all over my soul...

They lured me on to a new journey...

I followed, abandoning all caution...

I lived a dream...

Alas! Dreams are shortlived...

I groped around in darkness...

A nightmare it had turned into...

I reached out...

She turned elsewhere...

And she left...

As easily as she came in...

Leaving no room...

For anyone else...

Reality strikes...

I am all alone...

She will not walk...

With me...

Wisdom comes late...

I lock the doors...

But her trails are indelible...

On my heart...

Each memory shines brighter...

The thorns remain sharp...

I have paid the price...

For not guarding my soul...

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For quite some time I have been wondering why the montage has not changed! Even today, I burst out laughing 🤣when the show started, because this is a wedding track...and we have the bride wielding the rolling pin😆...I mean, all through the intense track, this montage has stayed...😳

Aahil simply puts on his shades...he has closed the doors to his heart...his eyes are the mirror to his soul- he is not letting Sanam see what he is trying to bury...he is confident...he can handle this.

Sanam is not giving in...she knows she is her own master...nothing can keep her down...especially when she knows she has done nothing wrong!

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Apart from this, I found the marriage track very very nicely done... THE STAR OF TODAY's EPISODE WAS SJ for me...in the MIRROR SCENE...she looked like a baby...how is it possible to look so young all of a sudden? She looked like a teenager❤️...and the attire was beyond best!👏 Funny that I drooled over KVB when Sanam said QH and am drooling over SJ the day Aahil said QH!😳

Rehaan was brilliant! - Not an expression out of the way...👏

He blames only one person- his Ammi- and shuts this chapter in his life! In fact, he vows there will be no more chapters on love! But the ring on close up😲...well, the ring😃...I could write another story on the ring!...ofc, that does not have to be the story Gul is writing!!!😆



Wait...I might write a short post on that too...



Here goes...😳


The Story Of the Ring..

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/4104901/the-story-of-the-ring


Behind Closed Doors...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/4104921/behind-closed-doors




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KhatamKahani thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful poem.
Glad Rehan blames his Ammi.

The situation is hard for everyone, and I can understand everyone today and how they are reacting as of now.

I hope it keeps up.

And again, beautiful poem.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Soup please write another post😳
This one is brilliant . I liked the episode.
Brilliant acting by all👏
Although the precap reminds me of IPK, still I think everything is not going to be like IPK.
We can hate billi again😡But the truth is Sanam really got married to Aahil for money😆Although Billi twisted the situation, but Aahil doesn't know that. An arrogant Nawab who doesn't believe in love one day he fall for some simple girl and before his confession he got to know that his beloved brother loves the same girl..ouch! It hurts
Still he has some respects for Sanam, he respects her khuddari, but alas! Today he shattered to know that Sanam married him for moneyHow will he react?
But eventually everything is going to be fine for them. We know that😛Till then we just have to keep faith on the show😃
Edited by subhkisonu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautifully written

I felt for Rehaan

He was heart broken and his ammi is the one who orchestrated his heart to break

If he had proposed and Sanam refused then that was different case but his love did not even get a chance and now he will never give love a chance

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Montage not changed I feel because Ahil still has ammi naam ka chashma on his eyes and Sanam is still alone against the world she has to fight her battles and the biggest one is coming in Ahil's name and face

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Yes please do write something on the ring

Like the ring was not put on the finger which its master wanted but the ring will find a finger which it want to be on and will be the best for its master

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: KhatamKahani

Beautiful poem.

Glad Rehan blames his Ammi.

The situation is hard for everyone, and I can understand everyone today and how they are reacting as of now.

I hope it keeps up.

And again, beautiful poem.


Thanks a lot...😊 Really glad U liked it...because I felt I did not spend enough time with it...considering I had it in mind for a long time..😳

As Of Now...everyone has reacted perfectly blind!👏 Except for Rehaan who has seen it...He knows the true story!👏

I wonder how Bili will explain Nida under the Samosa table!!!🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😡

😆

Achha Good Night boleee..

🤗
Edited by chicksoup - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chahanya

Beautifully written

I felt for Rehaan

He was heart broken and his ammi is the one who orchestrated his heart to break

If he had proposed and Sanam refused then that was different case but his love did not even get a chance and now he will never give love a chance

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Montage not changed I feel because Ahil still has ammi naam ka chashma on his eyes and Sanam is still alone against the world she has to fight her battles and the biggest one is coming in Ahil's name and face

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Yes please do write something on the ring

Like the ring was not put on the finger which its master wanted but the ring will find a finger which it want to be on and will be the best for its master



Hope U like the ring's story...😃😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res...res...!
Thanks soo much dear🤗

Will read n comment asap!😃


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Awesuummm 👏
you penned his feelings with such beauty n ease. emotions so poignant yet beautifully brilliant. ⭐️
I loved it completely dear!!❤️

Please soup keep them coming more often! Will make my day n my mood. 😳
once again thanks soo much for this 🤗

p.s. ya even i was thinking why didnot they change the montage yet!!😕 they might do from today...well maybe...?!!

and ya Sanam/SJ was looking lovely!! so beautiful n elegant. n the attire too was gorgeous!!❤️
KVB as usual looked handsome. 😃 he left no stone unturned in portraying Aahil!👏 SJ was equally fabulous!!👏

Rehan..i felt bad for him. :( but happy to see him not blaming anyone accept his Ammi.
all in all the epi was great except the misunderstanding track.

wish Sanam stands up for her right n gives apt reply to Aahil.
Edited by Paint.It.BlacK. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome post.
This is a very good poem.
Loved it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: subhkisonu

Soup please write another post😳

This one is brilliant . I liked the episode.
Brilliant acting by all👏
Although the precap reminds me of IPK, still I think everything is not going to be like IPK.
We can hate billi again😡But the truth is Sanam really got married to Aahil for money😆Although Billi twisted the situation, but Aahil doesn't know that. An arrogant Nawab who doesn't believe in love one day he fall for some simple girl and before his confession he got to know that his beloved brother loves the same girl..ouch! It hurts
Still he has some respects for Sanam, he respects her khuddari, but alas! Today he shattered to know that Sanam married him for moneyHow will he react?
But eventually everything is going to be fine for them. We know that😛Till then we just have to keep faith on the show😃


IPK!😆

No this was not like IPK...where Khushi was heartbroken by her Arnavji's actions...this is Sanam who has been avoiding disaster like plague! She will not bow down...she has no sister to protect from Aahil!😉 She has only her sense of duty to the promise she made to Billi!

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