Th#4 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 10 to 13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#851

Originally posted by: ...Mallu...
Amazing Work !!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#852

Originally posted by: Aneezarp27
Goddd bubble!
The last scene definitely was the favorite part of 'Across the shadows' till date.. of most of the readers following this story!
And no doubt! Mine too...
Beautifully written...
And hey...Zoya understood German from the very beginning??
Does it imply on : Zohura lived in Germany with her family when she was child?? You're confusing us...now c'mon continuee soonish!
- Anee

haha yeah I guess the same 😆

Aww thanks !!

I am glad that you liked it 😳

well no at the end she is referring to his words other than German only ,,

soo no she isn't aware of German 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#853

Originally posted by: Shubh007
Awesome update with hot ending...👍🏼😉

Asya scenes r mindblowing...👏

Just love the update...😊

Update nxt part super soon...😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#854

Originally posted by: -Xpress-
Amazing .. interesting update <3
Loved it

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Posted: 11 years ago

#855

Originally posted by: rakshaanra
Whoa! Naughty, hot and jealous Asad, poor Sunil
Dude totally deserves it

Moral of the story

Do not go uninvited to a party with a single attractive woman!

haha yeah AAK rocks 😳

Sunil was having a bad day for sure 😆

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glad that you liked it ,,

haha I love that moral 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#856

Originally posted by: Amulya9
update is amazing...
possessive Asad is a treat 2 watch..
jelly ASYA.. 😆
I loved d way he said dance with me..
the last part is fantastic.. read it many times..
yes she needs 2 loosen up... n German me he confessed again 😳 ...hayee
n Kiss is unexpected... love u fr that... hope Zoya doesn't get angry on him...
hez already missing her a lot n uperse she came with Sunil n made him jealous so Kiss tho bantha hai..
I knew it... u vl stop there 😡
continue soon

Thanks Amulya 😳

I am glad that you liked it !!

yeah he always orders her 😆

Aww how many times did u read it ?? 🤓😆

well she will get angry for sure but first I will let them enjoy the moment ,,

haha thats my style u know 😎

Will be updating tomorrow !!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#857

Originally posted by: AMMY12
awsm update.
Superb one.
Luvd it.
Cont soon.
Waiting 4 d nxt part.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#858

Originally posted by: Amin21
wow what to say yaar
sunil ki entry ne to kuch ziada hi kamaal kar dia 😆

I really love the character of asad with dominating form .

and love the he acts here really awesome yaar 👏

and what did zoya mean by she knows what he is saying 😲

eagerly waiting for next

haha yeah but bichaare ko kuch mila nhi end mein 😆

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she didn't mean it literally ,,

Will try updating sooon 😊