Th#4 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 10 to 13

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rakshaanra

@rakshaanra

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#821

Whoa! Naughty, hot and jealous Asad, poor Sunil

Dude totally deserves it

Moral of the story

Do not go uninvited to a party with a single attractive woman!

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Amulya

@Amulya9

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#822

update is amazing...
possessive Asad is a treat 2 watch..
jelly ASYA.. 😆
I loved d way he said dance with me..
the last part is fantastic.. read it many times..
yes she needs 2 loosen up... n German me he confessed again 😳 ...hayee
n Kiss is unexpected... love u fr that... hope Zoya doesn't get angry on him...
hez already missing her a lot n uperse she came with Sunil n made him jealous so Kiss tho bantha hai..
I knew it... u vl stop there 😡
continue soon

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#823

awsm update.
Superb one.
Luvd it.
Cont soon.
Waiting 4 d nxt part.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#824

wow what to say yaar

sunil ki entry ne to kuch ziada hi kamaal kar dia 😆

I really love the character of asad with dominating form .

and love the he acts here really awesome yaar 👏

and what did zoya mean by she knows what he is saying 😲

eagerly waiting for next

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#825

very well written update..good...👍🏼

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#826

u r very very evil Bablu ki bachi😡

how can u stop at that😭

lobly updt👏

Asad ignored Sunil😎

but foolish Zoya was ready 2 rile him up😡

she introduced him even after he ignored it

than she stayed wid sunil & danced wid him 😲

aur phir jealous bhi ho gayi Asad ko kissi aur ke saath dekh ke😆

My god Asad insulted Sunil i felt 4 poor him...he wasn't bad😉

"There is nothing there." She turned back to tell Sunil who was self-consciously running his tongue over his teeth.😲 "I promise." She told him gently. He nodded and then smiled, not showing his teeth !😆

Zoya thought 2 give it back 2 him 😈

but Asad just overpowered her senses

& we got a kiss😳

ur bad mood continued wid half of this updt😆

I loved d last bit d kiss😉

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#827

Thanks for Update.

It was just an Super PART.

Asad(KSG) was jealous on Sunil,it was so interesting.

Poor Sunil ,Asad(KSG) shouted at him to leave.

The conversation of Asad(KSG) and Zoya was very nice and interesting.😊

The sudden confession of Asad(KSG) was so interesting.

ASYA(KABHI) kiss was so cute.😳

Please Update Next part soon,I am waiting here.

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(ASAD will be KSG ONLY,ASYA=KABHI ONLY,MISSING ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)

PRIYAKABHI.

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kanika

@kank_dah

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#828

superb loved it.asad is so lovely.he was so cute to show sunil the exit door.continue soon

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#829

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

haaaww was the update that bad ?? 😲😆
yes mayb🤣
Well kids are very much mature these days ,,
true😉
yeah her mom is fishy yeah Allah thats a nice scenario u should start writing for sure 😉😆
Na i can't take that tension of updts
I m happy as reader only😎
haha no she never married Asad he wasn't here anyway ,,
yippee i gud thing u did😉😆
yeah made for him only 😆
haaww don't u feel bad for my Sunil ?? 😆
see my new comnt😳
Well I guess I am gonna make sure that ur fears come out to be true ,,
No😲 u r evil😡 i m crying😭 i knew this would happen my guess is hardly wrong😎😆
MY poor Zoe😭🥺
Will be updating in an hour 😊