Th#4 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 10 to 13

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Maha

@maha2012

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Posted: 11 years ago

#731

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

yeah 😆

mein kabhi naraz hoti hun bhala aap se😳

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potternerd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#732

Should posted on 100th page !!

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Maha

@maha2012

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Posted: 11 years ago

#733

Bubble is the best writer😳😎

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potternerd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#734

In the past 10 minutes I refreshed the page 100 times 😆

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#735

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Maha

@maha2012

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Posted: 11 years ago

#736

love yah bubba😳❤️ my amazing friend!! one who's always there❤️
firstly yeh kya likha hai aapne😲☺️
jab aapka mood kharab hota hai tou itna awesome stuff likhti hain aap😡☺️
Sunil as you know is the best😉
you wrote a complete mahuu type update which i always demand..but khair now you aint gonna dedicate the whole FF to me again🤔😈
asad was soo rude to sunil😭 my sunil wasnt shokha too😭
the way u portrayed a jealous asad was SUPERB👍🏼😉☺️
"Dance with me !" He ordered her and swayed around the floor on the slow song while her hands went up to wrap around his neck hesitantly.☺️
when zoya locks herself in the bathroom n is still feeling the sensations of their proximity☺️
asad indirectly asking sunil to get out🤔
the conversation between asad zoya at the end when she drags him away.. asad in all sexyy mode☺️😉
he pressed his lips on the soft skin😲☺️
Iche liebe dich = I love you, Sie mich verruckt --- habe ich immer sagen, dass ?= you drive me crazy --- Did I ever tell you that ?'😲☺️ Hayee Allah😳😆
then atlast the kisshhh mwah😳☺️
then as i knw the perfect zalalat..cliffy😡 dhishummm😳
super doooper awesome update!! u've proved urself as the best writer here again!😳👏❤️
lots of love to yah..remember me in ur layla tul qadr night prayers😊
mwah mwah :*

Mahuuu😎

Edited by maha2012 - 11 years ago

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potternerd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#737

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Bubble I was smiling throughout 😃

Super duper awesome chappy

I love jealous asad 😆

Poor Sunil hahaha you've got something in your teeth 😆

Ah Zoya gave him tit for tat...smart 😉

Loved the way asad was teasing Zoya

And omg THEY KISSED ❤️

Yippie 👏😃

Thanks for this awesome update 🤗

Edited by potternerd - 11 years ago

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-AppleOfMaEye-

@-AppleOfMaEye-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#738

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unres,..buh not removing that gif,..😆

his all anguish was poured IN th hug,.. a tight hug,..
i guess ASYA's frst proper wala hug,..
i thought Sunil to be a hinderance and he acted like all catalyst,..😆

she was upto mark fah her target to NOT GIVE IN,..
buh Asad finally made a way,..☺️

now after this scene i ffel Asad would be able to easily spend 10 days,..😆
this whole update was amazingly written,,
a HOT one,.. though i want it to get hotter n hotter,..😳

https://www.picgifs.com/graphics/l/love-it/graphics-love-it-474888.gif

Edited by -Maliha- - 11 years ago

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Pasya

@Pasya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#739

I was just waiting for ur update...
love u...

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Alone111

@Alone111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#740

Mine
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Y did u stop there bubble..
How could u l
Amzng updt
I loved it totally

Sunil 😆 bus yahi Kenna tha 😆
Thy kissed !!!!! 😳 wow...
I was like

I want to read more yaar
So zoya Germany jaayegi ????
Huhuhu nai.. Plz.. Michhh

Continue soon

Edited by gowtu - 11 years ago