Th#4 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 10 to 13 - Page 76

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Posted: 11 years ago
super amazing ...just luvd it thruout ...
update soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh i love you for this update!!!
it was mindblowing!!!! OMG! the last scene was the dead of me!☺️
so passionate...Mr khan, u r indeed a killer!!!!❤️
won't complain that u stopped there...next update is definitely worth the wait!...update soonish...pretty please?!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful part
asya convo and jelousy was amazing
wow asya kissed and wondering for zoya's reaction
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome Awesome Awesomeee!!
Loved it to the coreee!!
Hahaha I was laughing at the way asad was behaving with sunil
It was hilarious😆
Really love jealous asad
It was really nice specially the last part left me shocked becoz I thought zoya as always will back away or leave but wow she is responding to him
Hope she realises that he is truly meant for her nd her loves her
Though I know the past will come up again where she will think that he left her (zohura) because she wasn't good nd all hope everything is cleared but for now I'm just enjoying this german asad and beauty queen zoya
Love asya
Love u as well for giving such an awesome story
Plzzz continue asap and tell me when u will update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Asad was jealous to see zoya friendly with Sunil
He doesn't like Sunil. The way asad called zoya love, shocked both zoya & Sunil
Zoya wanted to do the same & she did it
Nice dance between asad & zoya
Asad told her to let her guards down & live her life
He confessed in German & then translate it
Omg finally the kiss
Curious to know zoya reply
Continue soon plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was amazing!!! They kissed and loved seeing a jealous Asad. I just hope Zoya doesn't run away.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update!!
I want knw what happened in Zoya's past!!!..
.Sunil thank God dat u left in one piece 😆...
Zoya trying to ignore her feelings!!
She was jealous!!!
Asad confessed again but in German ...
They kissed!!!☺️...
Ms.Cliffhanger Queen!!
Edited by AsyaManeet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--



No not with Asad for sure😛
yeah u r right but in a way its possible if Razia tells everyone that Zohura is dead now as their family haven't seen Zohura anyway since years after engagement😉
Yup I know very well what u mean by that ,,
thats why I am preparing you although I myself am hell nervous
Aww thanks for that yup my mood is all good now🤗


I m afraid to read dat part den!!
i hate sad parts!!😭...
Zoya 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Jealous Asad is always a delightful read.


"I mean we won't need him to drop you home, right Love ?"


I like this cocky side to his personalty.


"You are hurting me Mr Khan !" She said as she tried to control her heartbeat and looked into his eyes confidently. The last few guests in the hall were also leaving.

"You are hurting me Zoya !" His grip loosened on her arm lightly which he had twisted but stayed tight on her waist to make sure that she won't run away again. "And you are hurting yourself too in this process, you know that." He said each and every word sharply with his nose against her nose and breath against her breath, controlling hard to not press his lips against her lips !

"You just need to loosen up and let happen what's coming your way." He said as he slightly moved his face towards her ear and she sucked in her breath. "Its not necessary that everything goes wrong --- every time." He said huskily in her ear, inhaling her scent while her chest heaved up when he moved down towards her neck, slightly pressing his lips on her ear. "Sometimes results come out positive too." He said in the same tone while she stayed quiet, waiting for him to go ahead. "But for that first we need to have self believe first. You need to give in !" He said as he lightly pressed his lips on the crook of her neck where his breath has been tickling her. "And for that I need to ---." He said as he went ahead and she gasped when he started pressing his lips on her soft skin, his hand playing with the strap of her dress.

"Iche liebe dich." Unintentionally his tongue twisted back to German as he was more used to talk in that and for a change she didn't mind it at all, too lost in the moment. "Sie mich verruckt --- habe ich immer sagen, dass ?" She held his collar tightly when he nibbled her skin softly and then went hard on it. She sucked in her breath and moaned which made him look up at her. Iche liebe dich = I love you, Sie mich verruckt --- habe ich immer sagen, dass ?= you drive me crazy --- Did I ever tell you that ?'

"Are you getting what I am trying to say Zoya ?" He asked in the same tone and she nodded in yes as soon as she opened her eyes but were closed immediately as finally he pressed his lips against hers !


This scene was the most beautiful one of this FF to date. Really wonderfully written, it had a serene yet passionate sense.

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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update 😊 loved it
waiting for the next update
take care and thanks for the pm...

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