SaHil FF: ~Sau Dard Hain~ Index Pg 7, Part 4 UP! Pg 11

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Hey Guys! I am a huge fan of Qubool hai, Aahil Sanam and SaHil ofcourse ❤️. Both Karanvir and Surbhi are doing a fantastic job. I am silent reader but I keep commenting on posts. So I thought to write something on SaHil. So this is my first work, first FF on SaHil. I hope you all will like it. Happy reading! 😊

Hey Guys! Thankyou for appreciating my work. I am glad that you all liked it so much so I have decided to change this TS into FF. I don't know how many parts this FF will have. Hope you all will like it. 😊

INDEX IS ON PAGE 7!

Here is the direct link: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4102625&TPN=7&#p110607115
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SaHil FF: ~||Sau Dard Hain||~ PART 1

This night was not an ordinary one. This night had something special, something unique in it. This night was a turning point in lives of both the indivivuals Aahil Raza Ibrahim and Sanam Ahmed Khan. None of them knew this is what was gonna happened with them. Did they knew? NO!

But there is something called "Destiny". Yeah! May be they were destined to be together. Because destiny made them come across each other everytime. Yeah! Someone had said something very true that everything happens for a reason.

The two mere words "Qubool Hai" locked them in a relationship which has no values that too for three months. Till three months they have to fulfill the requirements of this Nikkah or can better say a contract. This Nikkah was not based on love and understanding, this was based or hurt, pain and sacrifices.

AAHIL- He was hurt beyond the repair, the pain was so evident in his eyes. He hated himself for being so much in love with her and more of it he hated the fact that he cannot help himself. And he know that she did this Nikkah without her will. He know that she doesn't reciprocate his feelings. He know that she doesn't love him but Rehan. Yeah! He thinks that she love Rehan who was also heart broken like him seeing her with someone else.

SANAM - This poor soul was at no fault but still she is paying off for what she didn't did just because of her "Badi Ammi" just to return the favor to Begum Sahiba. She never wished for anything except to look after her Badi Ammi, Haya and having a life partner who can completely understand her. But, this is what she ended up with.

The rituals after Nikkah were going on. Everyone was preparing to welcome the new Bride and Groom. Tanveer was happy that finally her goal is accomplished.

Aahil: (Looking at her) Main sahi tha "Mohabbat dard ka dusra naam hai" itni takleef mujhe kabhi mehsoos nahi hui janta hun tumne yeh Nikah apni marzi keh khilaf kia hai. Per shayad Khuda ko yehi manzoor tha. (He looking at her, as if he was asking answers to every of his questions, he was asking that why she did this Nikah, WHY??)
Sanam: (Looking him back) Ya Allah! yeh kesa imtehaan hai? Aaj me uss insaan keh sath hun jisse me sirf nafrat karti hun. Jiske liye kisi ehsas ki koi ehmiat nahi he. Jiske liye insaniyat ki koi ehmiat nahi hai. Jiske liye kisi ko bezat karna koi bari baat nahi hai.

Tanveer (Begum Sahiba): Chalo Aahil Beta, Sanam ka hath pakar keh haveli me dakhil ho.
( She was grinning at them)
They were about to enter when Sanam's foot tripped.
Sanam: OUCH!!
Aahil immediately come closer to her and tried to her help but he moved away.
Tanveer (Begum Sahiba): Sanam tum theek to ho.
Sanam: (Managing to get up but failed) Haan me theek hun Begum Sahiba.
Tanveer (Begum Sahiba): Offo Sanam abb se tum mujhe Ammi keh ke bulaogi. Or Aahil Sanam keh paer me chot ayi he to tum usse kamre tak utha keh le jao.
Aahil: Per Ammi..
Tanveer (Begum Sahiba): Per wer kuch nahi.

Sanam Aahil both were looking at eachother. And he picked her up in his armsand carried her to the room. He was continiously look at her while she was looking away. Tears were flowing from her eyes as if some sort of river.

They both came to the room and he let her down. And she started walking towards the bed to take pillow and blanket.

Aahil: Sanam mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai..
Sanam was trying her best to ignore him all the while because she know he will question her and was in no mood to answer any of his questions.
Aahil: Sanam are you listening to me?
She took pillow and blanket and started walking towards the sofa when Aahil held her by her arms.

Aahil: Sunayi nahi deta tumhe? Kabse bol raha hun baat karni hai mujhe tumse?
Sanam: Choren mujhe dard horaha hai..
Aahil: Dard? Tumhe pata bhi hai dard kya hota hai? Jo mere andar haina woh dard hai, jo me itne dinon se mehsoos kar raha hun woh dard hai.
Sanam: Magar apke dard ki wajah mein nahi hun.
Aahil: Tum ho, mere har dard, har takleef ki wajah tum ho (He shouted, by pushing her against the wall)

Aahil: Tumhe jawab dena hoga..
Sanam: Konsa jawab? (Trying to free herself)
Aahil: Kyun kia tumne yeh Nikah? Kyun kia (He said it loud)
Sanam: Main apko kisi bhi sawal ka jawab dena zaruri nahi samjhti.
Aahil: Zaruri nahi samjhti? Yeh Nikah tumhare sath sath meri bhi zindagi ka sach hai. Tumhe mujhe batana hoga Sanam, kyun kia tumne yeh Nikkah. Bolo Sanam, btana hoga tumhe, btao..
Sanam: "MAJBOORI THI" (She shouted,because it was now wnough) Haan, Majboori thi, ehsan wapis karna tha. Warna me ek aese insaan se kabhi Nikah na karti jo mujhse or main jisse sirf nafrat karti hoon. Uss insan se jisko kisi rishte, kisi ehsas ki koi qadar nahi hai. Yeh Nikah ek shart he teen mahino ki, or mein 3 mahino tak iss Nikaah ki har shart nibhaungi. (Tears were rolling from her eyes endlessly)

Nothing hurted him this much ever then the words he just heard from her mouth. His world was completely thrashed, he was broken, he was hurt badly. He punched hard on the wall. Ahhh! (While, she was scared with his reaction)

"You doesn't matter to me". Sunna tumhe, tum mere liye koi ehmiat nahi rakhti. (And he left the room) Saying was crying, she was crying badly, she was crying like never before.

Aahil going outside went towards his car. And shouted "Kyun? Kyun karti ho tum mujhse itni nafrat? Kaashh kasshh jo mene tumse kaha woh sach hota, kash tum wakai me mere liye koi ehmiat na rakhti..KASSHH!

"Rukhi rukhi si yeh hawa aur sukhe patte ki tarah,
Shehar ki sadkon pe main, laawaris udta hua,
Sau raaste per teri raah nahi,
Sau dard hain, sau rahatein,
Sab mila dil nashi, ek tu hi nahi".
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P.S: Finally I am done. Feeling so much happy. 😃 Spare me for all the mistakes because I didn't had a proof read. 😃

P.P.S: Please leave your likes and comments and let me know how was it. Lots of efforts has been put in. Appreciation and criticism both are welcome. Your comments means alot. 😊




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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ah angst...u hav beautifully penned down ahilz predicament n inner turmoil. ..his helplessness at sanamz justified hatred 4 him...iv dis feeling dt in da serial events vl play out in dis manner mayb...u shud write more...
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That was such a beautiful OS..

Aahil's feelings were scripted beautifully... I could see KV while I read the story..

Great job.. DO write more..

PM me when you update something new..

Thanks :)
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its amazing i hope that you continue soon
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OMG This was just amazing totally awed right now.
The way u described the emotions fantastic
U really have to write more stories :)
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Originally posted by: lastdesire

Ah angst...u hav beautifully penned down ahilz predicament n inner turmoil. ..his helplessness at sanamz justified hatred 4 him...iv dis feeling dt in da serial events vl play out in dis manner mayb...u shud write more...


Thankyou so much 😳
Yeah! I want a situation like this.
I want Aahil to confront Sanam.
And yeah will definitely write.
Thanks again 😊
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Thank you 😳
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Originally posted by: pinks2911

That was such a beautiful OS..


Aahil's feelings were scripted beautifully... I could see KV while I read the story..

Great job.. DO write more..

PM me when you update something new..

Thanks :)


Thankyou so very much 😳
Yeah will write more and will pm you 😳😊
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Originally posted by: CHAYMA

its amazing i hope that you continue soon


Thankyou so much 😳
Yeah I will but depends on how many of you want me to. 😊
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Thankyou so much 😳

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