ASYA OS: That First Glance

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potternerd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Very very beautiful OS 👏

I loved it 😊

Especially the end 😊

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Omg it is such a brilliant work that i m speechless

Asad falling for a naive Zoya

him going in English class 4 her

Volunteering 2 b Romeo

It was a wow story its not crap get that

One of d best one shot i have read

I will just say in Remo's style

This is it

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Aishwarya

@--Aishwarya--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Heyyy!!!

Its not at all an okay okay story, it was fabulous and I loved it!!! 👏

It was such a cute OS and Zoya too was cute!! 😳

Wonderful work dear!! 😊

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

wow tis is totally fabulous...

lovely...

asad n zoya is so cute...

luv it...

mindblowing...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Beautifully written OS
Thanks for pm

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Brilliant OS!

I loved the way you have adapted Shakespeare! ❤️

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

That was seriously amazing. You know, I've read stories that tons of people have written, trying to capture a concept like this. But no one can do it like you. This was flawless!

But those few ending lines? Brilliance! That was my favorite part right there, because it's true - Romeo and Juliet did forget to have a happy ending. And Asad said it so smoothly and *swoon*.

I loved this! :D

-Fari.