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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: HamariAduriKahn

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I was in the middle of writing the next part when I realized that this story mixes up characters from QH 1 along with QH 2. Is this confusing and should I change Rehaan to someone else, or will you guys be able to follow along?

Please let me know so I can update ASAP and make the necessary changes.


Dude I can follow along. Plz continue. Do not change Rehaan. I repeat. DONT CHANGE REHAAN OR ANYONE ELSE FOR THE MATTER. Plz you hav gotten me hooked because of the mix. Do not change anything.

About the chapter you were taking about... yeah, you better update soon. Plz 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jas91

Lolz i m asking 4 updt while i m still confused if i would b able 2 read d nxt part witch will b Zoya Rehaan's Sr🤢😆


haha I was just thinking that! you told me not to let Rehaan and Zoya get intimate and yet you're so eager for their SR? 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aafreen101



Dude I can follow along. Plz continue. Do not change Rehaan. I repeat. DONT CHANGE REHAAN OR ANYONE ELSE FOR THE MATTER. Plz you hav gotten me hooked because of the mix. Do not change anything.

About the chapter you were taking about... yeah, you better update soon. Plz😊


replied to you by PM 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter Two: Meeting the Family

~Zoya's POV~

Sitting on the bed, a veil covering my face, I begin to remember the events that took place not too long ago. Hugging my sisters, I cried and cried until there were no tears left. How do people do it? Leave their family just like that and enter a new phase of their lives so smoothly?

The sound of the door opening breaks me from my thoughts. Two people, who I believe are Rehaan's younger brother and sister enter and sit next to me. Who am I kidding? They practically jump on the bed.

Lifting my veil to see them properly, I smile. They're so similar to me, I'm sure we'll get along just fine.

"Bhabhi! How are you? Are you excited? Nervous? Happy? Angry? Sad?" Haya goes off with one question after another.

"Haya! We're practically strangers to her and there you start. First let's introduce ourselves and then talk as much as you want." Haider scolds her.

I begin to laugh at the scene.

"Bhabhi? Are you okay?" Haider turns to his sister. "See Haya! Now she thinks we're crazy. I told you to control yourself for like two minutes. She's gonna think she's in a circus, where jokers like us live." He shakes his head.

At this, I begin to laugh uncontrollably. Haider takes this as a sign to leave. He grabs Haya's hand and makes his way to leave, but I manage to pull my sister-in-law's hand. I try to stop laughing, but now the image of the two as clowns pops in my head and I can't control myself.

"Oh-okay. Sorry about that. It's just..." I let out a little giggle. There, now I'm not going to laugh anymore. "Phew. I'm done, I promise. You two remind me so much of the things my younger sister, Humeira, and I asked our Jiju, when he got married to my older sister. Before we let him go to our Aapi, Humeira and I made him stand in the middle of the room, while we circled him. We asked him so many stupid questions with a straight face." I chuckle at the memory.

Poor Jiju! He looked like he was going to pass out by the time Humeira and I let him go.

Haider, Haya, and Rehaan were laughing their hearts out by the end of my story-telling session. Wait...Rehaan? When did he come? My eyes met his, and I looked away, embarrassed.

Stupid! Aapi told you not to talk so much and look what you did! You truly can't keep your mouth shut Zoya.

"Hey? Why'd you stop talking? Come on! I'm sure you have some more stories to tell us!" Haider cheered me on.

I blushed. I never had a shortage of stories, but right now I had to physically restrain myself from presenting a shayari.

"Arz kiya hai!" The three people in the room grinned; surprise along with excitement was written on their face.

No! Zoya, what are you doing? Stop...right...now

And of course, my inner poet won.

"Stories and poems, I have plenty to share,
Stories and poems, I have plenty to share,
It just depends on how long you can go without pulling your hair." By now, I was standing on the bed, bowing. In my bridal dress. "Thank you, thank you."

Realization of what I just did hit me. Cringing, I sit on the bed. By now my cheeks were on fire.

"Wow Bhabhi! I must say that I did not expect that at all." Haider teases me. Haya and Rehaan stare at me, obviously stunned.

"Shuttup. As if I didn't just embarrass myself." I mumble, cursing Haider and myself in my head.

"Did you say something Zoya?" By now Rehaan had an amused look on his face.

"N-no? Okay I'm going to go change now." I mentally give myself a pat on the back for thinking of an excuse so quickly.

"But Bhabhiii" Haya whined. "We didn't even get to formally introduce ourselves! We've been talking for so long, and you probably don't even know my name!"

"Looks like you guys don't know me well, but it's okay." I turn towards Haider, "I know you're Haider and you're Haya. Do you really think that I wouldn't get a background check done on you guys before getting married into this house? I know your colleges, best friends, where they live, where you guys hang out..."

"Okay that's enough. Wow Bhaijaan. That's some wife you've got there. " Haider nervously chuckles. "Um we'll be leaving now." He pulls his younger sister with him. "Have a good night Rehaan Bhaijaan and Zoya Bhabhi" he says in a teasing tone.

Haya elbows him in the stomach, while Rehaan glares at him. Haider giggles like a two year old and runs out.

"You know sometimes I really want to punch Haider. But then I would have to take him to hospital and take care of him, so I think we're better off without the violence." Rehaan smiles as I let out a giggle. "Anyways Zoya, you go change and I'll remove the decorations."

I'm handed a cup as soon as I get out of the bathroom.

"Here, Zoya. It's your favorite coffee."

I accept the cup with a question arising in my mind. Dismissing my thoughts, I take a sip, expecting a different taste for once.

"Rehaan? How'd you know this was my favorite coffee? Only Aapi makes it like this!" I was left stunned at how he got every quantity right.

I look up at Rehaan for answers. "Well...um...a few days before our nikhah, I called Zeenat Aapi and asked about your likes and dislikes. She told me that I have to get every ingredient right or then...um..." He sheepishly said, pausing towards the end.

"What Rehaan? What did she say?" I was curious to see what lies my older sister told him.

"These are her words okay? Not mine at all." He closed his eyes and took a deep breath as if he was scared of me. "Aapi said that if its not perfect, then may Allah save me and my soul, because they're not going to be spared by you."

Rehaan opened one eye to see my reaction and immediately closed it again.

"EXCUSE ME? Am I some devil that I won't spare your soul? It's a wonder that you didn't run away from the wedding. I have the best sister in the world!" Sarcasm oozes out of each and every word. "She, herself, told me to stay well-behaved while she goes and lies to you? I'm going to get her for this. She needs to watch her back!" I rant on and on, before realizing that I should probably shut up now.

"No, no go on. Honestly speaking, I don't talk a lot, but I love talkative people." Rehaan says after noticing my silence. "I'm glad to see that this...uh...situation..." He turns to the decoration all over the bed. "...isn't awkward at all. You aren't like those who pretend like they're someone else in front of strangers. And I like that. I'm sure you'll adjust quickly."

I smile at the man in front of me. I always had full trust on my older sister's choice, but now I know for sure that Rehaan is a great guy. He'll do whatever he can to keep me and his siblings happy.

"Well I, for one, am glad. I talk a LOT and it's good to know that you can tolerate me. It would have been a problem if you were that type. You know? The ones who are angry all the time and arrogant? Ya Allah! I can't even begin to tell you how much I hate those types of people!"

It was just in my nature to personally find ways to trouble those stuck-up guys, and unfortunately for me, I ended up crossing paths with quite a few of them.

Rehaan questioned why this was so and I explained. He laughed silently during my explanation.

"Okay let's start from the beginning. Now that you're my wife, I want to make sure that I know everything about you." He held out his hand. "Hi, I'm Rehaan Raza Ibrahim."

"Wow you really took this seriously." I let out a giggle. "Hi, I'm Zoya Farooqui...um Zoya Ibrahim now?"

"It completely depends on whichever you're comfortable with. I don't mind you using Farooqui at all."

"Okay then" I shake Rehaan's hand and smile. "I'm Zoya Farooqui."

And that's how I spent my wedding night; with a cup of coffee, and a ton of talking.



A/N: Does this make up for the long time I took? There were like a million directions that I could have taken this scene and I just didn't know which one to choose! Some new characters have been introduced and you can read a little more about them here: Character List
As usual, sorry for every mistake(s), if any. Hope you like it! Like and comment away!


Next Chapter: Chapter Three of The Forbidden Heart
Edited by HamariAduriKahn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: HamariAduriKahn

Note:

I was in the middle of writing the next part when I realized that this story mixes up characters from QH 1 along with QH 2. Is this confusing and should I change Rehaan to someone else, or will you guys be able to follow along?

Please let me know so I can update ASAP and make the necessary changes.

Nahi do not change

The readers know how to not mix up things

continue as you have planned

oops I am late for the note but just came online

Edited by Chahanya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

So cute

Loved the ched chad Haya n Haider did

Zoya's shayri wah wah kya baat hai

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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG Rupali Di, the chapter was hilarious. The Haya-Haider-Zoya convo was that funny I was literally LOL-ing (if that's a word). My mom thought I was crazy. The funniest part was when Zoya pictured Haya and Haider as clowns. The Zoya-Rehaan convo was shoo cute. You know what you my friend are awesome at writing Do continue and PM me when
you update. ~xA

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Rupali,

That was such a cute and hilarious update..

Haya and Haider teasing Zoya..
ZOya calling them clowns..

Loved their banter..

Great update and do continue soon..

Thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Quiet interesting updt Rupali
I didn't expected that really
HH r cute
Loved Zoya's bond wid them
even Rehaan is not bad at d moment
but i think he's d type of gay Zoya was describing
cuz if not why & how will Zoya fall 4 Asad
she already liked Rehaan 4 being so sweet
loved d updt Rupali
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: HamariAduriKahn


haha I was just thinking that! you told me not to let Rehaan and Zoya get intimate and yet you're so eager for their SR? 😆


That's why Rups i was scared thinking what will u write & will u think about my demand or not😆
How can i get excited 4 their SR no never🤢😆

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