FF: The Forbidden Heart **On Hold for a few more days - Page 3

Created

Last reply

Replies

115

Views

15.2k

Users

25

Likes

213

Frequent Posters

HamariAduriKahn thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: jas91

Unresd on pg 1😃

I know i m very very late😳


no, no it's fine. I'm excited to read what you've written!
HamariAduriKahn thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: jas91

res

unres

so sorry dear 4 unresing late😳
& d story is very interesting😃
so Zoya Zee & Humi r real sisters😊
Zoya respects & loves her appi so agrees 2 marry
she's not sure though😕
loved their sis talk & bonding😛
Zoya became Zoya Rehaan Ibrahim🤢
Zoya knew Dillu wished she would have married Asad😭


ps- I would love 2 promote this story but i will after 2 3 updts😉
cuz i already promoted a story where Zoya gets married wid some1 else & i don't want my frnds 2 kill me saying i always promote sad stories where Asya gets separated😆
btw plz don't make Rahaan a bad gye plz😛
if i would have any idea of d plot i would have been relieved😊
But i love d concept😃
story is very gripping👏
if possible plz Pm me😳
see u than😃



aww thank you so much for your feedback! I love long comments 🤗

Rehaan's character might show some shades of gray but he will never be a totally negative character. it all depends on the situation.

I would love it if you would promote my story! I'll try to make the next few chapter written really well then 😆
And AsYa haven't even met yet, how would they be considered separated? 😆

I've sent you a buddy request; please accept it for PM's. Thank you once again! 😳
Gulaabo thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Love-AsYa-4ever



I guess the theme is more love vs society's expectations? I've watched so many movies/TV shows of either forced or arranged marriage and how the girl begins to forget her lover and falls in love with her husband. this is just my interpretation on a story like that.

thank you!



okay!!
even then i am in...
ready to read 😃
jas91 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Love-AsYa-4ever



aww thank you so much for your feedback! I love long comments 🤗

Rehaan's character might show some shades of gray but he will never be a totally negative character. it all depends on the situation.

I would love it if you would promote my story! I'll try to make the next few chapter written really well then 😆
And AsYa haven't even met yet, how would they be considered separated? 😆

I've sent you a buddy request; please accept it for PM's. Thank you once again! 😳



U so so sweet Rupali😃
ur most welcum dear🤗
well i would love 2 promote if u give me a spoiler 4 d future story😉
I mean if Zoya & Rehaan will b like normal hubby wife cuz i m sure everybody will b heartbroken than cuz we ppl r(my gang i mean😎) possessive about Asya so we don't like Asya getting intimate wid any1 come what may😈 so after i get 2 know Zoya's relation wid Rehaan i'll decide if i can promote cuz i don't want them 2 beat me black & blue 😆

btw I m becoming promotional girl these days so if like nxt part i will definitely promote it👍🏼

I will surely accept ur BR🤗

asifiqbalsh thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Nice start
Zoya doesn't want to marry but agree for zeenat
She & rehan said QH to each other
Plz continue soon as I wanted to read how the story shaped up
Thanks for pm
HamariAduriKahn thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: jas91




U so so sweet Rupali😃
ur most welcum dear🤗
well i would love 2 promote if u give me a spoiler 4 d future story😉
I mean if Zoya & Rehaan will b like normal hubby wife cuz i m sure everybody will b heartbroken than cuz we ppl r(my gang i mean😎) possessive about Asya so we don't like Asya getting intimate wid any1 come what may😈 so after i get 2 know Zoya's relation wid Rehaan i'll decide if i can promote cuz i don't want them 2 beat me black & blue😆

btw I m becoming promotional girl these days so if like nxt part i will definitely promote it👍🏼

I will surely accept ur BR🤗



I guess we'll just have to wait and watch then 😈
HamariAduriKahn thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice start
Zoya doesn't want to marry but agree for zeenat
She & rehan said QH to each other
Plz continue soon as I wanted to read how the story shaped up
Thanks for pm


thanks for reading!
jas91 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: HamariAduriKahn



I guess we'll just have to wait and watch then 😈


phir u also wait😆😈
cuz jitni jaldi mujhe plot smajh main ayega utni jaldi main promote karungi😎😉
HamariAduriKahn thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: jas91



phir u also wait😆😈
cuz jitni jaldi mujhe plot smajh main ayega utni jaldi main promote karungi😎😉



okay that's fine. the thing I know the basic storyline but usually the details come to me while I'm writing the chapters. So it might be that I tell you one thing is going to happen but then I change it while I'm writing the next chapter. but I'll try my best to update ASAP
jas91 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#30
okay that's fine. the thing I know the basic storyline but usually the details come to me while I'm writing the chapters. So it might be that I tell you one thing is going to happen but then I change it while I'm writing the next chapter. but I'll try my best to update ASAP

Ok i understand what u mean dear but i m die hard Asya fan & i don't like stories where Asya r intimate wid a 3rd person so i m a little skeptical over d plot but lets see. But i assure u if i won't like something & will want 2 quit reading d story i will tell u.
This is ur 1st story i m reading & i want 2 read more from u but lets see if my Love 4 Asya will let me read it or not.😆 Hope u understand where i m coming from.😳

PS- & updt d nxt part now yaar😆

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".