Saahil fic--'So many words...'Chap 7 UPDATED Page32-21 DECEM - Page 11

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

Res.

Woah! Am I the first??! 😲

😆

Unres.

I just Res'd it to see am I the first or not, and then I see I am. 😆😆

Sorry. Okay now to the story.

I was soo waiting for you to update it. And. It was all worth it. :D

Diti! This. Was marvelous!! <3Praggu🤗thanks soo much🤗

Aahil's thoughts. How they always seem to end up on her. How he couldn't comprehend , why and from where all these feelings, emotions are coming. Why he is longing for some reaction from her. All. Of. That. Oh goodness!! It was so beautiful! <[33

I loved how the silence took over. Sometimes silence is better. The small glances, the uncomfortableness, the stares, everything, it was so MUCH BETTER <3

Loved how Sanam felt a strangeness while looking in those deep eyes of his <3 Sigh! The line:

She could nt tear away her eyes from his face. The world around her melted into nothingness. She could see nothing except the eyes that bore into hers and ripped her soul open !

This. Held my breath. Coz his eyes do that to ME too!! <3 😆 See i knew..tabhi toh i used it.😉😆

Oh this is truly truly magical! No. Something more. . <3

Rain always plays such a CUPID 😆 I just loved how you started with Aahil"s "Whats happening to me" and ended with Sanam's "Whats happening to me". I don't know, it just felt so right and complete <3Really??😲oh my! Trust me it didn't occur to me that i was inflicting a connection there! Just wrote it.😆But good to know you like it. 😳

It was simply spellbound. I love reading you! You are a gorgeous writer! <3

Originally posted by: -Raj-

unres

This chapter was fabulous!!!

it was so good!!
one hell of a writer you are!!

Magical update!

aahils point of view was so beautiful!

so was sanam's. just a little biased i am :P

the rain added more to the beauty of this update!!

great work!!

thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: diana72

omg...it was really thoughtful n sweet of aahil to notice sanam's unease...ur depiction of aahil's emotion n turmoil is just awesome...wonderful update!!!!!! 👏

Originally posted by: amlavs

wow diti👏

i was eagerly waiting for ur updation😊

mindblowing continuation..am actually superliking👍🏼this...Sanam s feelings,confusions,nervousness everything u hav described here is very superb. Aahil tenderness 2wards sanam was cool😊..{specially i liked ur way 4 describing the tea,that was nice}At first it started with Aahils "what happend 2 me???" now its Sanam turn😃 that was brilliant👏

waiting 4 next...thx 4 pm🤗

Originally posted by: krithikas

Awesome update. Just visualized it while reading. Beautiful it was. Thank you so much. :)))

Originally posted by: TasriS

Wow...this was Awesome...loved it.

Thanks for pm :) :) :)