Saahil fic--'So many words...'Chap 7 UPDATED Page32-21 DECEM

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Pragya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Res.

Woah! Am I the first??! 😲

😆

Unres.

I just Res'd it to see am I the first or not, and then I see I am. 😆😆

Sorry. Okay now to the story.

I was soo waiting for you to update it. And. It was all worth it. :D

Diti! This. Was marvelous!! <3

Aahil's thoughts. How they always seem to end up on her. How he couldn't comprehend , why and from where all these feelings, emotions are coming. Why he is longing for some reaction from her. All. Of. That. Oh goodness!! It was so beautiful! <33

I loved how the silence took over. Sometimes silence is better. The small glances, the uncomfortableness, the stares, everything, it was so MUCH BETTER <3

Loved how Sanam felt a strangeness while looking in those deep eyes of his <3 Sigh! The line:

She could nt tear away her eyes from his face. The world around her melted into nothingness. She could see nothing except the eyes that bore into hers and ripped her soul open !

This. Held my breath. Coz his eyes do that to ME too!! <3 😆

Oh this is truly truly magical! No. Something more. Enchanting. <3

Rain always plays such a CUPID 😆 I just loved how you started with Aahil"s "Whats happening to me" and ended with Sanam's "Whats happening to me". I don't know, it just felt so right and complete <3

It was simply spellbound. I love reading you! You are a gorgeous writer! <3

Edited by Prags_Sociopath - 11 years ago

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

unres

This chapter was fabulous!!!

it was so good!!
one hell of a writer you are!!

Magical update!

aahils point of view was so beautiful!

so was sanam's. just a little biased i am :P

the rain added more to the beauty of this update!!

great work!!

thanks for the pm.

Edited by -Raj- - 11 years ago

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diana72

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

omg...it was really thoughtful n sweet of aahil to notice sanam's unease...ur depiction of aahil's emotion n turmoil is just awesome...wonderful update!!!!!! 👏

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lavanya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

wow diti👏

i was eagerly waiting for ur updation😊

mindblowing continuation..am actually superliking👍🏼this...Sanam s feelings,confusions,nervousness everything u hav described here is very superb. Aahil tenderness 2wards sanam was cool😊..{specially i liked ur way 4 describing the tea,that was nice}At first it started with Aahils "what happend 2 me???" now its Sanam turn😃 that was brilliant👏

waiting 4 next...thx 4 pm🤗

Edited by amlavs - 11 years ago

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krithika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Awesome update. Just visualized it while reading. Beautiful it was. Thank you so much. :)))

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Maham

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

wow wow wow

just fantastic...

Superb

love every bit of it

u r such amazing writer

wonderful update beautifully written...

Eagerly w8ng 4 next n thanx 4 pm plz continue soonish...

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HappyST

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Wow...this was Awesome...loved it.

Thanks for pm :) :) :)

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--Sana--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

That was sweet
I thoroughly enjoyed whole update
Aahil care for sanam thats was lovely aahil understood her every wants
Awesome
Thanks for the pm dear

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Tina Saigal

@TIA.Tia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#99

The update is beautiful. I just loved how Sanam has compared Aahil's eyes to Summrer's night and how his gaze bore into her soul. Lovely lines and what apt description of Aahil's eyes and Sanam's train of thoughts. I just loved the care and concern of Aahil for Sanam and how he disguised it behind his cold and rough exterior trying to be all indifferent and moody towards Sanam and yet care for her so much. A rendezvous in the guest house in the rainy night. Perfect ingredient for the Steamy Romance. It's like a dream come true. I love it. Update Sooonnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by TIA.Tia - 11 years ago