~~Asya (Kabhi) os: Sleeping beuty~~ ( My first writing ) - Page 2

Originally posted by: Aishwa09

Aww, Awesome,..

I loved it a lot...

Its cute,😳

Sweet,😃

Lovely..😳

Beautiful...👏

Funny .😆

Amazing,⭐️

Wonderful..

Dazzling..❤️

Reminding me of old memories..😭

Asya are adorable...😳

I loved each and every bit..😳👏

Flawless Work..👍🏼

Beautifully Written...👏

Niceee...😳

ENT Specialist.??🤣

New Bed ??🤣

Water Proof Pillow Covers ??🤣

Aww, Very Funny..🤣🤣🤣

Zoya she lost it ...🤣

And I loved this part a lot. ----


Aap ko dekh kar aisa lag raha tha koi pari so rahi hai. Aisi pari jise jitna dekho utni zyaada khubsoorat lagti hai. Aap jab sote sote muskura rahi thi, tho meri aankhien chaah rahi tha ki us pal ko main hamesha ki liye apne dil mein qaid kar loon. Koi sote waqt bhi itna khubsoorat, itna masoom, itna khush kaise kag sakta hai? Kya aap hamari zindagi ko hamesha aise hi khubsoorat, masoom aur khush rakhengi? Aaj tak tho aap hamesha mere sapno mein aakar meri neend chura le jaati thi lekin kal raat aap mere saamne thi aur phir bhi mujhey neend nahin aa rahi thi. Iska kya matlab samjhoon main Zoya?"😳😳😳

How Cute, Sweet , Romantic, Lovely ...😳

I Loved it ...😳

Its so so Cute OS..❤️

Great work...👏

I never felt it as Someone's first try ...Just rocking...⭐️

Keep Writing ..

Thanks for pm..

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

Omg that was so cute

First writing you said, I don't believe it. Its just so amazing 👏

I loved the teasing Asad here and really pitty Zoya for all that Asad said.

Loved his little confession and the way she said pata nahi.

Excellent job Buddy 👏 Now you have to give us more os 😃

Originally posted by: Aishwa09

Hmm, I will forgive u if...

Originally posted by: NandzLuv

Awesome 😛 cute 😳 OS 👏

Lovely ❤️ 😉

Originally posted by: kabhi-forever

thank you.

Originally posted by: Aishwa09

**Me First..** Yay !!!

Cute OS..

Love u so so much...


Missing Asya to core..

Originally posted by: Aishwa09

Hello When did I forgave u ??

I said I will forgive u only if ...

still I didnt complete it ...

Originally posted by: kabhi-forever

thank you so much😛

I am so happy that u liked my work.

Thanks thanks thanks thanks aishu di for such a lovely comment.

I never thought that somebody is going to like this os.

Thanks

I will try to keep writing but I am not sure.

U r most welcome.

Before ending this comment I want to say I love u aishu di.

Originally posted by: kabhi-forever

ohh sorry I didn't see your comment properly.

Ok tell me what if...