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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am soon starting 2 SS. Which one should I start first?

Option 1: Change In Thinking And Lifestyle
Zoya is simple girl with regressive and traditional thinking. She is very shy. She has 2 best friends Humeira and Najma. Humeira and Najma are modern wearing western clothes unlike Zoya who wears traditional clothes. Ayaan is Humeira's fiance. Ayaan and twin brother Asad are also modern. Asad is attracted to Zoya. Najma is an orphan who lost her parents at the age of 5. She is a maternal cousin of Asad anf Ayaan. Rashid and Dilshad have taken care of her from then and treated her like their own daughter. Zoya, Humeira, Najma, Ayaan and Asad are of the same age who studied in the same college. Zoya's 2 year younger old sister Tanveer who is modern hates Zoya and many times uses her for her own benefit. She shamelessly tells her sometimes to do her assignment and Zoya does it to make her happy. Tanveer is never thankful to her. Tanveer along with her 2 friends mostly chamchis Nikhat and Nuzhat always teases and taunts Zoya calling her names like 'loser', 'behenji' and so on. After AyRa's engagement, Rashid and Dilshad asks for Zoya's hand in marriage to Asad. Zoya's parents Gaffur and Razia agrees as they find the family very nice and modern. Gaffur and Razia are loving parents. They love Zoya more and wishes that one day she changes herself and becomes bold and modern. They defend Zoya many times from Tanveer. Tanveer who is attracted to Asad gets jealous of Zoya. She hates the fact that Asad and his parents chose Zoya instead of her. She earlier had tried a lot to impress Asad but in vain. Asad wants Zoya to change her thinking and lifestyle. He wants her to become modern and bold. He does not likes the way Zoya does not fights or stands for herself when someone troubles or insults her. Will Zoya change herself along with her dressing sense and nature due to Asad's influence after her engagement or will she remain the same?



Option 2: Loving Me Will Only Cause You Pain
The story starts from the beginning of Qubool Hai with many changes. Zeenat Farooqui and Zoya Farooqui are real sisters who mother is murdered by their father who has married another woman in India and has a daughter. They are raised by their nana and nani. Zeenat is married to Anwar. The family returns to India to find Zeenat and Zoya's father and give him punishment. Zoya runs from her wedding with her boyfriend Akram cause before the wedding she overheard him talking to his friends that he only loved Zoya for her money and after marriage, he will take a large part of her property, enjoy her body till his heart's content and then leave her. Zoya is a lawyer along with handling her family business with Zeenat. Zoya became lawyer to track down her father and punish him. Zoya and Zeenat's mother's friend Dilshad Ahmed Khan has 2 children- Asad Ahmed Khan and Najma Ahmed Khan. Najma is a college going girl while Asad is a businessman. Being living with a modern family, Asad has also become modern. He never fell in love and does not wants to fall in love because he fears of hurting any girl as he is the son of Rashid who left him, Najma and his ammi and went to live with his another's wife family. Except Zoya, other leave for New York for a week for some work. They tell Zoya to live in Dilshad's house till they come back. Asad is happy to see Zoya coming to live in his house as he has seen her in dargah and got attracted to her. But he wants Zoya to hate him fearing that he will hurt her. He secretly tells Najma to wear traditional clothes in the house along with wearing a long braid wig. He pretends to hate and get irritated with Zoya. He pretends to be traditional and regressive in front of her along with pretending to be cleanliness freak and having perfection attitude. Asad tells Najma and Dilshad that he wants to play a prank with Zoya for some days not telling the real reason. Zoya starts getting annoyed and irritated with him. Asad wants Zoya to hate him so that it will be easier for him to forget her. But Asad could not carry this drama for long and tells Zoya that they were playing prank with her all these time. Asad and Zoya become friends. Najma one day tells her that her brother loves her so he did all this drama as he feared of hurting her. Zoya is shocked with the truth. She too starts falling for Asad but keeps quiet as she is murderer's daughter and he will never accept her. Later, she thinks that its not her fault that she is a murderer's daughter. Dilshad and Najma tells Asad to propose Zoya soon. At an engagement party where both Asad and his step-brother Ayaan's family is invited, Zoya sees her father at the party. She comes to know that her father is none other than Ayaan's mamu Gaffur Ahmed Siddiqui(He has hair in this story as Tej Sapru in real life). And her phuphi Shirin is Rashid's second wife. Zoya now decides that she will stay away from Asad and his family. Asad proposes Zoya at the engagement venue garden but Zoya rejects and insults him rudely telling him that she will never accept him. Asad is hurt. They are watched by Dilshad, Najma, Rashid and Ayaan. Zoya too is hurt. She wants Asad to hate her because she is the daughter of the man who hates his family and whose sister took his father away from him. She thinks that if she makes Asad hate her then he will forget her. Even though Zoya is insulting him, Asad finds that Zoya is not meeting his eyes while talking with him and her eyes are actually showing pain rather than anger. Zoya leaves Asad's house next morning and goes to live in her own house. Zoya's family returns along with AnZee's kids Alisha and Zain. Zoya's family keeps visiting Asad's family along with Zoya. Zoya always avoids Asad telling him that they will never be happy together. Asad gets confused. He once finds her crying alone for hurting him. Will he get to know the truth behind her rudeness? What will be his reaction on knowing Zoya's truth?

So, which one of above SS should I start first? These 2 will SS as I already have 3 ongoing FF. These SS will be updated only once a week. Option 1 idea of showing something like traditional Zoya and modern Asad was given to me by Adi(ican). Plz, vote any of the above options😊. Also, suggest me proper titles if both of the titles are unsuitable. My titles are temporary but it will be permanent if you all like.

PS: Option 2 is Loving Me Will Only Cause You Pain. I have done mistake by adding 'Don't' in the poll option and I can't change there so I mentioned here.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Option 2 for me.
Both are good but I like option 2 more.



Whenever you write this ss plz pm me.

Love diya
Edited by kabhi-forever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Option 1... Please
In option two I don't like the way Asad is faking to be good
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pancakes527

Option 1... Please

In option two I don't like the way Asad is faking to be good


He is faking neither to be bad nor good but regressive n MCP type. Read again to know d reason n the title explains better. Anyway, I vl write n the poll is abt which one to star first😊.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Both are good & interesting
I choose option 2
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i like both
but still option 2
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Option 2
But please change zoya's age in this story all ur stories zoya is 25 make it 24 or 23
Edited by Az07 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I may have written a little too much in both the plots but its nothing in front of the whole story. Option 2 will not be similar to my previous stories but there will be many changes.
Option 1:
Ayaan- VM
Nuzhat- FP
Tanveer- AG

Option 2:
Ayaan- RS
Nuzhat- DS
Zeenat n Zoya's nana n nani- Amitabh Bachchan n Hema Malini
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07

Option 2
But please change zoya's age in this story all ur stories zoya is 25 make it 24 or 23


Okay, I will change a it but not much as I hate big age difference. I will make it 24. As Zoya is much younger to Asad in many stories, I keep her equal to Asad's age or a little younger than him. Also, in reality girls luk for guys who r equal to their age or with a very little difference n no girl marries at 20-22😊.
Edited by angel_juhi04 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Both r amazing
Bt i really really wanna read 1 first plz...
Its so good
Opposite attracts type..
N spclly something like that
Where zo is taditional n asad is mordern and is a guide to her..
Its really unique, n inspirational...
Actually tooo good
Plz plz plz plz i beg u fr the first one,..
Plz...

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