#3 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 10- 15 ! Link new thread ! - Page 83

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Posted: 11 years ago
well written update...👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago


Originally posted by: zoyaah

so sad for zoya waiting to see how she will react

continue sooon plz



Originally posted by: ak020203

Beautiful Update.

Feely so sorry for Zoya. Hope the future is bright for her with Asad..

Thanks for updating



Originally posted by: Dhwaniiam

I loved it ... You write amazing ... I love you for that ..





Originally posted by: nilusoni

amazing part

so finally asad said zoya about problem
waiting for zoya's reaction
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon



Originally posted by: AMMY12

awsm part.
Superb one.
Luvd it.
Thanx 4 d pm.
Cont asap.
T.c.



Originally posted by: Shubh007

Awesome update...👏

Just love it...😊

Asya scenes r cute...👍🏼

Asad and sana scene is funny...🤣

Ending is emotional + scary...😔

Waiting for nxt part eagerly so update soon...😃



Originally posted by: MysticRiver

well written update...👍🏼






Thank you so much guys !! I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

Amazing update. But still a emotional one.
Loved the way zoya holding asad's hand and dont let him go.
Loved asad sana scene. Their convo was very beautiful.
Finaly asad told zoya about the child. Waiting for zoya's reaction.
Update soon.
HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY.
❤️ RAJ


Thank you so much Bro !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! 😃
I know and the coming ones would also be sad ones 😕
I wanted to make it a little more cherrful thats why i added Asad and Sana and coincidentally it was friendship's day 😳
Same to u !! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sabrinsz91

Emotional update
The light hearted moment between Asad and Sana was nice
Feel sooo sad about Zoya and Asad
Hopefully everything goes well

Fabulous update
Very emotional and touching


I know it was quite depressing
I'm glad you liked it !! Thanks Sabrina !! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

Brilliant update and definitely very emotional too😭

I loved Asad n Sana scene, much required at the moment😃

The last scene was so emotional and it did make my heart constrict too to see Asad trying to explain it to Zoya in the simplist way possible. Poor him must have been going through so much pain himself😭

It was adorable to see how she just wouldn't let him go.


Loved it Choti Bajijaan❤️


And Happy Friendship day to you too🤗



Thank you so much Badi Bajijaan !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it ! ❤️
I felt it depressing too thats why i added Sana and Asad's scene 😳

Yes he was himself sad an didnt know how to express his depression to himself but he still tried to explain it to Zoya 😭

He had promised to not leave her and she is just helping him in keeping his promise ! 😉

Awww same to u !! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

lovely emotional update ...
m very sad for zoya...
after all she had gone through there gets another addition to her pains...
loved asad _ sana friendship bond...
finalll
y asad tried explaining to zoya that she cant keep the baby...
waiting for her reaction...


Thank you so much Heena Aapi !! I'm glad you liked it !! 🤗
Her past has still its shadows on her present !
Yeah Sana is quite fun ! 😆
Next update either tomorrow or day after tomorrow ! 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Zoya 😭

Asad sach main Emotionally Challanged Insaan hai 🤣

Ussne Zoya ko sab bata diya ... Abh vo kay karegi ??😭


Haan ! He is ! 🤣
Lets see voh kya karti hai 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Alai123

Awesome update

Loved the part where Zoya was refusing to leave Asad
At least Asad was lucky to have friends like Sana to cheer him up
Poor boy when his mother and Sana found out how he is deeply in love with Zoya he gets a smack from them😆
Finally Asad found the courage to talk to Zoya about her condition
Wonder how will Zoya react???
Continue soon!
Thanks for the pm😉


Thank you so much Alai !! I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️
After all he promised to never leave her, vaada poora karne mein help kar rahi hai ! 😉
Yes Asad has very good and true friends ! 😳
Violence is a crime ! 😆
Her reaction will be in the next part ! 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

@Prashni and Ankie, i love u so so so much guys !! U guys r real sweetheart !! 🤗 ❤️

And sorry for having make u guys wait long, my uncle had come uninformed ! i'll be posting the chapter in half an hour ! 😳



And you are a little angel! ❤️ 🤗



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Amulya9

emotional update
loved it bano
loved loved ASYA hand holding part... Zoe refusing 2 leave his hand..
good 2 c asad n sana light moments
finally asad said it...
let's c how Zoe reacts..
asad is madly in love with Zoe..
I loved it chapter can't wait fr next chap...


Thank you so much Amu !! 🤗 u r a sweetheart !! ❤️
He promised her an now she's not leaving his hand ! 😳 😆
Sana is a very good friend to him ! 😃
Haaaye he's so madly in love ! ❤️
I'll try to update nect chapter in a day or two ! 😉

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