BROKEN WINGS - AsYa SS, chapter 7 updated,PG 85 (17/8) - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

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what u did Kas dear😭
Asad ko major injuries honge i had hint of that😒
but Zoyaan ye toh imagine hi nahi kiya tha🤢
I m crying & heartbroken😭💔
& see here i m asking my frnds 2 read it
ab kya izzat rahegi meri😆
sab bolenge super sad story promote kar rahi hon😡

Sorry i broke your heart Jas... but now i am also heartbroken...😭 because you have so little faith in me.. you should know i won't let Zoyaan happen in true sense.. and its not entirely a sad story.. its filled with everything and will happy ending... be patient dear.


I loved d way u wrote Asad's side of story wid Dil Rash👏
i'll give u full marks 4 that⭐️
Doesn't Asya love each other if yes
Asad doesn't want Zoya 2 b wid him cuz he' might feel his physically unfit 4 her
& Zoya lost her memory in stress i guess after d accident😕
& Taklu took advantage of that😡
I mean Zainub was repetitively asking her but she still go ahead wid Nikhah😡why she wanted 2 please Taklu😡

yea everything went against Zoya and Asya... but then this is also a test of love.. wait and read what happens next.
When d Sr scene started i felt like shouting Don't dare touch Zoya 😡😡

Zoya won't allow him to touch her. her subconscious mind still knows that she belong with someone else. don't worry.

Ab mujhe nahi pata main kya karon I m sad & now my frnds will kill me 4 recommending sad story😆 basically Zoyaan story which every quboolian hate d most😡
why u did it😭
agli baar se main koi story promote nahi karungi

don't say that... i am now heartbroken.😭😭

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: imcooldude

its seems intresting please continue and thanX for PM

And, this SS Broken Wings:
is it this story about "AsYa" or "zoyaan"? (can't figure-out reading first chapter)

thanks... glad you found it interesting... and of course its about Asya... not ZoYaan... be patient... that was just beginning😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Amulya9

yippee I got 1st place after a long time
bt all happiness vanished while reading this.

don't be sad.. there will be a happy ending.. this was just the beginning.. as the name suggests this is not entirely a lovey dovey story... its about two people who had suffered so much that they are like two birds with broken wings.. so i had to show the suffering as well as other hurdles they face before i can turn their life... so be patient Dear.
asad is in comma fr 2 months..he couldn't see now...his kidneys... his legs...aapne ek bhi part nahi choda mera asad ka 🥺 😭 😭
I'm totally sad... 😭
my heart cried out fr him n dillu...
zainab is so good
Zoya got married 2 ayaan 🤢
n she forgot everything
pls make her remember...

yea Zoya is for the time being married to Ayaan.. but wait and see what happens in future.. have faith.😃
thanq fr d long update n ur really an awesome writer 👏
make asad recover soon
continue soon
thanks Dear.. will update soon as a treat to you all sad souls.😊
n pm me pls

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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice but sad update
Oh my baby can't see ,walk he was in a coma for 2 mths and now he is totally broken
So zoya married ayaan don't seem like she remember anything about her accident
Omg wonder if she is married to asad ( wouldn't that be nice)they got married secretly
Thank god zoya stop ayaan he seem obsess with her
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...
m really sad about the turn of events there...
all these months and asad had gone through a lot n still hasn't recovered ...
n there zoya unwillingly had to marry ayaan...
u hv kept a lot of questions swimming in my mind...
do AsYa know each other... wt is the family rivalry abt n wt lead to AsYa accident... ye to pehle se dimaag mai tha ... nw m thinking hw n vn r AsYa going to meet again... and also y vlog they meet??
wtz gonna happen to zoya n ayaan...
isse kameez sawaal to mere ajar k question paper mai thay... lol...
overall a gripping concept...
already waiting from more...
continue soon...
lots of love <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderfull n fabulous...
wat is between asad n zoya...
asad had to go through so much n hope he will be fine n fit back...
oh no they are married...
please no ZoYaan...
wat happen to zoya...
very interesting...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gowtu

I told u na Amu Khani pyaar ki was so hilarious 🤣

See amu.. Ilane chestundi inthakumundu nundi.. 😆
We ddnt even said a anything to her 😆

Aawww jas.. Dnt wry na.. Aage dekhte hai kya hoga 😛

Yeah Goti we have 2 wait & watch now.😊 I m sad wid d turn of event this Zoyaan🤢

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kaussar



NOTE:

OMG.. what happened here??😆... let me hide.

On a serious note, Girls ZoYaan has a purpose here.. i knew you all won't like it but i didn't expect this much reaction.😆

This is a very complicated love story where two people ultimately finds each other even after they are forced apart and learns to triumph in love against all odds..and that's the reason why ZoYaan angle is there.. if Zoyaan angle is not introduced, it would just be like another story where they meet with an accident, recovers and overcomes the family anger and live happily there after.


Zoyaan makes the story more complex, and adds another angle with which they have to fight...

So please bear with me for a while... i assure you, you would love the upcoming chapters... and there won't be an actual ZoYaan... now i have given a big hint and revealed a part of the plot because you all are so heartbroken.😃


That's releif & I trust u but plz No Zoyaan
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91


<font color="#0000ff">Yeah Goti we have 2 wait & watch now.😊 I m sad wid d turn of event this Zoyaan🤢</font>



K now gv me a hug 😳

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