BROKEN WINGS - AsYa SS, chapter 7 updated,PG 85 (17/8) - Page 13

I have read the prologue only and it is a super awesomee concept!

I was literally holding my breathe till the end!
You know Asad Khan sounds weird. I am used to Asad Ahmed Khan. 😆
So Mister is a famous Piano artist. Super cool.
And him and Miss Zoya were going on a secret date...in a limo? *faints*
Accident? Nooo I hope he gets well super soon!

Zainab as a doormat? I wonder how Zoya takes that. Gaffur seems kinda confusing.
And Ayan and Shireen? Hmm lemme go read the first chapter. But you know it's fabulous. You are an awesome writer.

Okay completed the first chapter!
Asad was in coma for whole two months! 😭
And four months after he gets well, she is getting married...to Ayan! :o
So she doesn't remember anything about him because of shock? 😕 I hope she gets dreams and nightmares soon! How sadistic of me! 😆
Till the last moment, like when she said Qubool Hai? I was thinking she would either run away or say Quboo Nahi Hai or something 😆
I guess I am the only one who likes the 'temporary' ZoYaan!

And Rashid is such a gentleman in this story! 😲 😆

You have me totally hooked! You have to continue super soon!!!!


P.S. -Piano Artist and Fashion designer make an awesome jodi! I was thinking about this in the afternoon you know...had Asad been a singer and Zoya been a fashion designer!


Continuee soon plzzz

Originally posted by: Divya.S.R

Zainab had felt her instincts screaming at her still she brushed it off.. 😭

Oh no.. you are scaring me.. Ayaan is gonna be like an antagonist ??😲

yea Zainab brushed it off because Zoya insisted that she was fine with the marriage.
Ayaan will act in some ways which will be antagonistic.. but don't worry too much... he won't be able to do much.😃

Originally posted by: Amulya9

awww jas ... I really loved d story ..its just that I felt sad seeing asad paralyzed
zoyaan nikah happened bt I trust asad n writer...common on Hez AAK he vl get his gal soon
don't forget v got ASYA passionate hugs during mukkadar track

Thanks Amu for keeping faith...
Asya hugs during muqaddar... LOL you are really positive..
but this story is a lot different and actually there is nothing for you all to worry about... i cannot reveal future plot.. but if i do it i am sure you will agree with me.😃

Kausar, am in love with this story buddy. Abhi time mila toh read it and i loved it.

Asad's suffering was well written and the effect of his medical condition on dilshaad and rashid was heart wrenching.


Gafoor and Raziya the jerks as usual. Hate them. Zainub was so loving. I love her here.

Zoya poor her giving in to her fathers demands always. Is she suffering from partial amnesia. why did she not remember asad for even a second in all these months?

Ayaan, i hope he devorces her soon and hope that this wedding has just made zoya aware of that little thing that she feels has been missing.

Jaldi dedo next update. Waiting to read further.

Originally posted by: sasir

don't worry... Asad will be Zoya's and Zoya will be Asad's.😃

Originally posted by: sweety003

Interesting..Cont soon

thanks.. glad you liked it.. will update soon.😃

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice but sad update

Oh my baby can't see ,walk he was in a coma for 2 mths and now he is totally broken

So zoya married ayaan don't seem like she remember anything about her accident

Omg wonder if she is married to asad ( wouldn't that be nice)they got married secretly

Thank god zoya stop ayaan he seem obsess with her

Continue soon

i know its sad isn't it? now they are two birds with broken wings..but they will learn to fly again.. so don't be too sad.
Yea doesn't remember.
Hmm.. lets see.😉
Will update soon.😃

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Originally posted by: aarzoo50

awesome update...
m really sad about the turn of events there...
all these months and asad had gone through a lot n still hasn't recovered ...
n there zoya unwillingly had to marry ayaan...
u hv kept a lot of questions swimming in my mind...
do AsYa know each other... wt is the family rivalry abt n wt lead to AsYa accident... ye to pehle se dimaag mai tha ... nw m thinking hw n vn r AsYa going to meet again... and also y vlog they meet??
wtz gonna happen to zoya n ayaan...
isse kameez sawaal to mere ajar k question paper mai thay... lol...
overall a gripping concept...
already waiting from more...
continue soon...
lots of love <3

thanks Aarzoo.😃
yea Asad's suffering and the situation he is in is very sad... but its needed for the story.
LOL the questions on your mind are more than what was on your papers? hehe... your questions will be answered in next chapter which i will upload very soon... so pls wait for a while.😃
hope your exams are going well dear.😊

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

wonderfull n fabulous...

wat is between asad n zoya...

asad had to go through so much n hope he will be fine n fit back...

oh no they are married...

please no ZoYaan...

wat happen to zoya...

very interesting...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

thanks Jaz... whats between Asad and Zoya will be revealed soon.

Asad will recover but it will take time.
lets see how ZoYaan goes.. it won't be bad i promise you.😊