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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhanesh27

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Holy mofo you're back yayyy

Unres :)

You my darling are back with a bang, I actually wanna sing the slim shady song to you right now😆 The guess who's back, back again... You probably know the rest😆

That one month felt like 3, Sarruu babe you have grown on me like my love for dark chocolate 😆
So chapter 14... I almost missed it cos I was so used to seeing chapter 13 on the topic name, when it read 14 I shit you not I jumped on the bed, I'm crazy I know 😆

About that thing called chapter 14, you had me when he smiled, I mean him, Aahil he actually smiled. With teeth 😲. Good going baby. And Sanam probably had the wind knocked out of her. Between the boxers and the kissing and nuzzling I didn't know which way to turn to or whether to just hide my fave in the blanket, it was so romantic but the intensity if the situation with the operation.

Decisions decisions, oh this girl is gonna wreck his brains trying to convince him for surgery, and her telling him besides art he also has her was about 60% reassurance and conning done I'd say. But then again this is Aahil we're talking about.

You wouldn't let Aahil die now would you *puppy dog eyes face*
This was such a nice chapter. I'm happy she told him about her grandfathers death day so he wouldn't feel she was running out in him after promising to stay... They're getting stronger and stronger by the day. Can't wait for chapter 15

Xoxo :*


DUDE SLIM SHADY YOU ARE MY NEW FAVOURITE YOU CANT SING IT ALL YOU WANT I DON'T MIND

Haha thanks for the love <3

YESSS HE SMILEEEDDD:D:D

Dude, I actually totally forgot about anything about boxers and stuff until you wrote that, thanks for enjoying

Oh yeah she is- she's gonna wreck the shit outta him, and I'm gonna die.

I aint gonna say nothin' honey :P

Thank you so much for liking love, ill update soon!

Ps I think I love you more bc that slim shady comment.

He has been my idol since I was like 4.

He used to come on the radio and The Real Slim Shady was a big big hit in Australia back in the day.

xx


🤗



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

Oh goodness!! YOU ARE BACK!! You. Are. Back.
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i juts couldn't stop myself. You are back,. Sarru darling! How much I have missed this story! I logged on and I saw this! Heaven! <333

Unres. I realised this after posting some other replies. i don't know.

Sarrruu darling!! Oh you girl! You are awesome! Like THE AWESOME! Like I logged in and saw this and literally muttered under breath "Oh my, its up!" Ofcourse the update ;) 😆

And then I read it. And she came and they slept together and kissed before. Some sexual tension. The way her palms kept sweating. And she saw him taking off his shirt and then jeans too. ON BOXERS HE WAS. And then he lay with her CLOSE TO HER ASADSGFHJGJKGF.

And he kissed her LONG, LONG in the kitchen before letting her go back. #@%*&(&*^*(#$@#$

And everything else! EVERYTHING ELSE. Touching, heartbreaking, heartwarming. somersaulting and every kinda feel <3333

I LOVE YOU SARRU!! SO. MUCH.


I missed you!

What about your poems and stuff.

Any new meta material for me???

Its all good I love replies from you <33

SEXUAL TENSION IS MY BFF GURL

Dfisguygrfsgfgfry I love you and this comment <3

I LOVE YOU TOO PRAGUUU🤗


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tamara27

You are awesome!


Unres'd first spot


so are you, bae <33
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: khadz20

You are back :D YAYYY

Such a BEAUTIFUL update :')

Warning: I might nag you everyday for a new update :'3

Also , I dont want this to end & I also want to know the ending :|


thank you so much!

haha, dont worry love, ill update soon!

<3
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

Oh I had reserved my spot too. I forgot I guess "shrugs*


its all good <3
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

They kissed and they slept together. With a little more kissing though.
AND he was again reading like he used to do. Sanam is such a baby she got scared for a moment.
And then he smiled. SMILED AT HER. Thrice?!!

"I don't have much choice either. Art is only what I have"
"You have me too'
His eyes soften and nods at her. This was what he was searching for to have someone stubborn like HER.

She really completes him, no? :')


They kissed yes they did

Man I would be terrified too 🤣

SMILING IS GAWJUS ON AAHILS FACE BRUH

SOFTENING EYES ARE MY #4 WEAKNESS

She does she does and it makes me cry as well as smile because look at them in the show ldfj,jsdhagsful

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: NallyAshlokFan

AN UPDATE!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!

Absolutely loved it. Can somebody please read this and make a movie out of it, I beg you. Gosh. The concept of this story is just too beautiful, compelling, heart rendering and HOT, even if you don't intend it to be (hot that is.)

Please update soon, this story is just too amasing.



omg thank you so much for the lovely words love <333


yes yes yes i will, thank you so much <3
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: QuboolHaiLover1

Omg you finally updated! I'm so happy! I was expecting a long update though :( next time can you make it longer :) I was starting to think you were never going to update! I thought you forgot about us...I'm just happy that you updated!!!! Please make Aahil live! Also have them keep his drawing intact! And let's see if they can some how make it better!!!!! Update soonnn!!!!! :D


dude that was 3400 words 🤣

haha i did tell you that i would!

thank you so much for still being here and reading my stuff love <333
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jomart

Thanks for the update!! Waiting for the next part.. :)


thank you <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG this gave me the feels. Seriously, it wasn't even mature content and I got shivers from Aahil and Sanam's intimacy ☺️
I think my favourite bit was when he pulled her to him and just rubbed his stubble against her chin. I like that. I really like that.

Now I await Sanam to come up with some brilliant brainstorming *flails hands* to convince Aahil to stop being a tragic hero and get some surgery done so i can read some more scenes that give the feels. Yes, yes I'm being very selfish in that, but I like the feels, they're chilling and warm at the same time lol.

Fantasic update dear, I really like your writing style xx

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