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Posted: 11 years ago
My heart was actually racing and I held my breath a couple of times. Man if you can make us feel this way, then you are truly a fantastic writer. Give yourself a pat on the back! Update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

This sanam is so bold and so mad for aahil...just wanna know what's in aahils head...why is he just accepting sanam and he blabberings..




Don't we all.



Don't we all wanna know what's in his head...



I promise I won't eat his BRAIN suds.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Been a silent reader of your story so far.. But i actually feel guilty now..like i've stolen something without paying the dues.. Needless to say, you are a brilliant writer. I can almost feel like i am in the room with sanam, thinking her thoughts, venting her frustration. And your latest update gave me a truckload of goosebumps. I am officially dead and still yearning for more.. Hope you continue and soon !
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deedeez

Been a silent reader of your story so far.. But i actually feel guilty now..like i've stolen something without paying the dues.. Needless to say, you are a brilliant writer. I can almost feel like i am in the room with sanam, thinking her thoughts, venting her frustration. And your latest update gave me a truckload of goosebumps. I am officially dead and still yearning for more.. Hope you continue and soon !




But i actually feel
guilty now..like i've stolen something without paying the
dues..




I am definitely not silent yet I feel like I've stolen something without paying the dues.


The rush. The thrill.


Imma not pay nothin' for this


Guilty pleasure of stealing.




suds. You. Imma steal from.you.



Your juicy brain YUM yum.
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Posted: 11 years ago

THIS! WHAT? I CAN'T BREATH !! ☢️ And wow, isn't it getting a bit of hot in here?

Aahil isn't wearing anything but black boxer briefs. Sanam wants to die.

Well, don't we all want to die by the beautiful sight.

Aahil reached down to pull the covers back up and then hold them opne, like he's waiting for Sanam to get in...

WHAT is gong on? I want to get inside with him too.

I cannot breathe by this PERFECTION! This is far more the best part you've ever written. You're such a fantastic writer that I just keep waiting more. ❤️

Thank you so much for writing this which we all have been waiting for. YES, he kissed her. HE KISSED HER WITH SO MANY INTENSE FEELINGS. *Having a mental breakdown*

She's running her hand from the dip in Aahil's throat down to his bellybutton and Aahil shudders.

And then he cuddles with her? Aww.. God, STOHP. I can't take it.

I never get tired of telling you how great a writer you are. I really hope you update real soon, because I want more of Sanam/Aahil hotness.

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Posted: 11 years ago
I WANNA GET INSIDE WITH HIM TOO!!!!




Zomb.



I need!
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Posted: 11 years ago
This fic is bloody brilliant!!
Thank you for writing this!

Can't wait for the next part!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
i love your story! it makes me smile yet pains my heart and makes me cry!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg this is so good! I hope Aahil doesn't die! Please don't kill him off! I want him to survive and be happy!!!! I love the update! Please update again soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh I'm a lil late! :'(




Dippu!!



Why.


*eyes welled up, lump in throat, heavy hearted*




I need a hug.
Edited by farz_parachute - 11 years ago

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