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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

Dude. I am gonna ramble here so much okay?

Okay the parts you post, leave me wanting for more. And I can't just come and TYPE here what I feel ya know? I feel too hyper to write a sort of comment here.
I mean, Its like, I read, wander into some another fantasy land, try to come back to post. but. Tada! I can't just COME BACK. Ugh,.

I mean like you totally bring life to the maniac in me, and then it just goes. And I keep relishing in those thoughts till they ACTUALLY go away. *which they don't EVER*

I know I haven't given comments of my previous unreses. which really sucks. But I just can't bring myself to put those thoughts ya know?
I mean its different when you feel and write, and when someone else writes and you feel?
You capture those thoughts in you but can't just express, ITS THE MOST FRUSTRATING PART. UGH.

I love EVERYTHING about this story.

And. "Sanam wears HIS clothes" WHAT EVEN. And the attire you described in his closet is JUST THEY WAY I WANTED. She inhales the scent of HIM. UGH. AAXCDSVFVJKNVJKFSDNVCK

And he comes to her house to give them back? Does he have something of her? ;)

And he went to the hospital !!!!! What??! DON'T TELL ME HE HAS SOME DISEASE OR SOMETHING. I AM GONNA CRY THEN.


Don't worry, I ramble too, its all good in da hood.

I get you.

I res with all these things in my head that I want to say but they are all incoherent, so I wait for them to settle down and rest in place.

But then when I come back to unres I forget everything.

It happens 🤣

THANK YOU.

Who wouldn't inhale the scent of him. I mean, just look at him.

Sex on a stick.

HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA maybe.

There's so much foreshadowing in the prev. chaps tho. Like the evasiveness when he says he cant be there on one day, and the tiredness and stuff.

ILY 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: suds.



why do you like my name??

like, Sardeep. what even were my parents thinking?

idk. we're punjabi. theyre were prolly too busy eating sweets.

i will soon!!

today maybe!!!





😆 😆 I guess I like it cos I've never heard it in my country, and with a name as long as Dhaneshree which people don't pronounce properly you tend to appreciate the good names like Sardeep, sweets or no sweets 😆


Today! Maybe! Of please do! I'm in need of some Aahil I'm my life right about now 😆
farz_parachute thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
It's today already!!


Hugs Mah zombie pie!!



It's today!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhanesh27





😆 😆 I guess I like it cos I've never heard it in my country, and with a name as long as Dhaneshree which people don't pronounce properly you tend to appreciate the good names like Sardeep, sweets or no sweets 😆


Today! Maybe! Of please do! I'm in need of some Aahil I'm my life right about now 😆


oh!

i love your name btw.

we only have preets and deeps veers :P


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

It's today already!!


Hugs Mah zombie pie!!



It's today!!


yes it is today!!

so theres gonna be an update!!

hugs to you too soulzombie!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yayyy!!!


SoulZombs!!


(which is ironic coz they've got no soul?)


You complete me.


Brainnn!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
mineee!


Oh goodness gracious!!



Dippu.


That's by far the sweetest ever EVER!



He turned her over to himself.
He curled up around her.


:'


(no mouth coz I can't decide)



He kissed her.


Slow soft calculative.


:')



Tender, gentle...



Yellow medicine.


Gnawing, sinking feeling?


Yeah that.


:'(



He got her to get in his bed. On. Black boxer briefs huh.


Aahil shudders.


I love you Zomb!!


I'm every kind of feelings.


Every kind.
Edited by farz_parachute - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Imma wanna cryyy!


What was that!!!



WHAT!!!


I can't even.




What.


asdfghjk


Indeed.
Edited by farz_parachute - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yayy! Update *dancing* okay lemme go continue reading



Errors? What errors? I didn't even see it or notice any cos I was so engrossed in what was going to happen next!

What. The. Actual. F#^*.

Uhm! Jesus I have no words, they're there, it's just that they're stuck in my throat unable to come out along with the oxygen in my lungs!

What was that, did I just read that!

Aahil's in black boxer briefs! Sorry they're kind off a weak point. And he makes some space for her! *gasps for air* and shit when he leaned over her, let's just say I had to hide my eyes for like to seconds from the screen with excitement! And the way he shudders. We waited so log for this kiss scene and we finally got it! And then he holds her and sleeps, I had so much damn more to say cos I knew this was going to eventually happen and I knew exactly how is feel and what thoughts is have! It's just I've bcome a bit of a Sanam and my brain won't function. And he didn't even kiss me 😆

But never the less, when my brain starts working again and I can breathe normally, you know how we panic attack children get, I'm not having one, don't worry, but let's just calm down a bit and I'll give you a log ass ramble on the chapter. 🤗



Oh and I really love you and your writing! Specifically this chapter!

Oh and with this post! This kid just became a senior member 🤣
Edited by Dhanesh27 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
*breathes in, breathes out*
STILL NOT WORKING.

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