Dude. I am gonna ramble here so much okay?
Okay the parts you post, leave me wanting for more. And I can't just come and TYPE here what I feel ya know? I feel too hyper to write a sort of comment here.
I mean, Its like, I read, wander into some another fantasy land, try to come back to post. but. Tada! I can't just COME BACK. Ugh,.
I mean like you totally bring life to the maniac in me, and then it just goes. And I keep relishing in those thoughts till they ACTUALLY go away. *which they don't EVER*
I know I haven't given comments of my previous unreses. which really sucks. But I just can't bring myself to put those thoughts ya know?
I mean its different when you feel and write, and when someone else writes and you feel?
You capture those thoughts in you but can't just express, ITS THE MOST FRUSTRATING PART. UGH.
I love EVERYTHING about this story.
And. "Sanam wears HIS clothes" WHAT EVEN. And the attire you described in his closet is JUST THEY WAY I WANTED. She inhales the scent of HIM. UGH. AAXCDSVFVJKNVJKFSDNVCK
And he comes to her house to give them back? Does he have something of her? ;)
And he went to the hospital !!!!! What??! DON'T TELL ME HE HAS SOME DISEASE OR SOMETHING. I AM GONNA CRY THEN.