AsYa SS: Pirates In Love *completed* - Page 55

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Posted: 11 years ago
After so long i am commenting on some stories here😳
Busy with professional life you see😛
Yo man, Asad, you know that you are warming up to her, why can't you admit it?
He protected Zoya from snowslide. She is ready to die for him. how romantic

You know what's my favourite line in this story?😉
"Here, Found you boot. Give me your foot"😆
It's rhyming. isnt it?😆🤪
Edited by rosamale - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I started laughing from the third line itself and than throughout the Chapter ! 🤣

GOD you have got a great sense of humor dee ! 😆

And the story has got everything, Starting with Adventure, Risks, Dangers, Romance, Humor and much more ! 😊

Loved the entire map hunting scene...their conversations !( 😆 )

Best lines :

Asad "Here. Found your boot. Give me your foot."

Asad puts the boot on Zoya's foot.


That rhymes ! 😆 😆


Asad "I'll feed you to a seal if you cry."


Seal? Asad...What's wrong with ya? 😆 😆


Zoya hugged Asad before she knew it.

Asad "Don't cling to me."

Zoya pulls away abruptly.

Zoya "I just got excited."


Awww... Asad ! Itna rude honne ki jaroorat nahi hai ! 😉 We know what's going on inside your heart/ brain. 😆


Tears fall out of Zoya's eyes as she tells the tale. Asad wrapped Zoya up in a blanket and hugged her gently.


😳 😳 😳 😳 Can someone openly ogle at the COUPLE? Yes yes yes ! Cause I'm doing that right nnow... In my imaginations ! 😳 😆


Asad "Aren't you nervous, ya virgin?"

Zoya "Don't say that word. From now on, that word is taboo."

Asad laughs hearing this and squeezes Zoya gently.

Zoya "I feel safe in your arms."


Aww... God I'm loving this thing ! 😛 Doesn't matter what the "thing" is... Coz I'm loving "Everything" . Everything about this SS 😃

Woah Snowslide.

Ohh ! Asad saved Zoya again..

Thank god they were saved !
Zoya's got much knowledge !


Zoya "I'd die for him." 😳 😳😳


AH...Asad's fine.. TG !


As Zoya starts to get up she feels a squeeze on her hand.

Asad "Don't go."



Next update soon ! I want it soonish ! 😳


LOVE YOU SO SO SO MUCH ! Muwahhh ! ❤️

Edited by Aneezarp27 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I love Asad and Zoya's interaction always... 😆 Its cute and funny..

Asad "Wow... 100 years old. You look like you have a strong hold on life, too."
Zoya "A strong hold on life?"
Asad "You were jumping around after you fell into the sea as soon as you were out."
Asad is really funny when he describes Zoya's actions... 😆

He protected her throughout... 😳 He even warmed her up...
They found the map... Cool.. 😃
Oh no.. They got caught in an avalanche.. Thankfully his pirate friends got them out... 😊

Ohhh loved how Asad said don't go...

Update soon...

p.s. sorry for delayed unres.. 😳
Edited by Divya.S.R - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awwwieee
Such lovey-dovey scene...
1nc again asad saved her...
Just loved...loved...loved it to d core
Written ahmaaazingly well...
Updt sooon please...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Their journey to ice Island was wonderful
She felt safe in his arms
Asad protected her & injured badly
Zoya told abt weed in ice island that can save asad life
Capt asked her how far she go & her replied was die for him was amazing
They find the weed & returned back
She saved asad life, romantic. Both have to accept now
She wanted to call the doctor when asad stopped her
Continue soon plz
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome Update...👏

Just Love It...😊

Update Next Part Soon...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
asad said dont go... n i wanted to say dont stop... *sigh*
beautiful update...
asad n zoya went together n accomplished wt they had gone to do...
but ... while returning ... gadbad hogayi...
oh zoya cares so much... she said it loud enough that she can give her life fr him...
but asad kb bolega... he has already fallen for her... but vl not voice it...
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it.. awsome story.. you wrote it so well
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Posted: 11 years ago
another amazing update...

awesome...👏

Zoya "Huff huff huff."

Asad "Look at you. Are you gonna make it?"

Zoya "I'm... I'm fine."

Zoya (This is harder than I imagined.)

hahaha zoya tumne kya socha tha...ye koi easy task hai...

agar asad ahmed khan ja raha hai...toh task difficult toh hoga hi...

and the boot schene was like 🤣

aww zoya felt safe in asad's arms...😳😃
😳

omg snowslide...

thank god zoya is safe...but asad is unconsious...😭
😳
he saved her life...😳

aww so sweet...she can die for him...❤️



Zoya "So I can go?"

Captain Jack Sparrow "Arjun, Matthew and I shall go. You take care of yourself."

Zoya hugs the captain in gratitude.

Captain Jack Sparrow "I told ya that my first and last love is the sea so don't fall in love with me."

hahaha ye captain bhi na...zoya ka dil toh asad ke pas hai...😉

but so sweet...ab zoya ne sabke dil mein apne liye jageh bana li...😊😊

the best schene...👏👏

As Zoya starts to get up she feels a squeeze on her hand.

Asad "Don't go."

thankyou so much for updating and pm me...

please continue soon...





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Posted: 11 years ago
Such an amazing update
Loved it

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